MissTasha (Signed) on Oct 06, 2008 10:51 pm (
Chapter 11:Things I'll Never Say)
Great chapter. Please update soon.
klw (Anonymous) on Oct 06, 2008 10:35 pm (
Prologue:Nothing Lasts Forever)
AWE!!! I can't wait to read the next chapter. They're so cute.
SJane (Signed) on Oct 06, 2008 02:51 am (
Chapter 10:In Love With A Girl)
awww i just want to go up to these two and do the whole grandma thing pulling their cheeks and thelling them how cute they are lol but i dunno if it would be justin's faical cheeks i'd be grabbing lmao
Author's Response: lol! can't say i blame you there. he is quite attractive.
Jamie Lynn (Signed) on Oct 06, 2008 01:03 am (
Chapter 10:In Love With A Girl)
Ok as cute as this Charlie character may be...she can't mess this up with Justin. I swear I'll have to boycott! It may not make any changes happen but damn it It'd be worth it. LOL. Awesomeness! I really like this. I can't wait for your next installment!
Author's Response: lol thank you! i'm glad you're enjoying it so far!
Amy (Anonymous) on Oct 05, 2008 10:31 pm (
Chapter 10:In Love With A Girl)
Ahhh!!! I love it, please keep it going.
Author's Response: lol, thank you! i've got plenty of ideas, so hopefully i can keep this one going for awhile.
Amy (Anonymous) on Oct 05, 2008 07:14 pm (
Chapter 9:My Stupid Mouth)
Woohoo!! Keep them coming.
MochaB (Signed) on Oct 05, 2008 01:43 pm (
Chapter 9:My Stupid Mouth)
this is not good. not because she was talking about this charlie dude to charlie himself. no, that's minor. the problem is how she spoke of him and his looks and had to constantly remind herself that she has justin. not good. maybe it's the fact that justin is her best friend so she's not used to thinking of him as her boyfriend so he's kind of an afterthought? i don't know, but i do know that this is not good. haha. update soon! :o)
Author's Response: lol, thanks for the comments! glad you're enjoying it, and getting into the storyline.
misslonelyhearts (Signed) on Oct 05, 2008 01:21 pm (
Chapter 9:My Stupid Mouth)
i am completely hooked! i love the interaction between justin and ally. and i have a feeling charlie walters is about to throw a wrench into the mix! cant wait for more!
Author's Response: thank you! i'm really happy you guys seem to be really enjoying this one! I've put alot of work into it so far.
Guess you'll just have to keep reading to see about Mr. Walters, huh? lol
SJane (Signed) on Oct 05, 2008 04:20 am (
The Cast)
not only did you win me over with how the story is going but having your main character be envisioned after sohpia aswell.. ding ding we have a winner lol
Author's Response: lol, thanks!
I don't know why, but when I really got into writing this story...for some reason, Sophia Bush just came to mind as Ally. What can I say, my mind works in strange ways. lol
JoJo (Anonymous) on Oct 05, 2008 02:45 am (
Chapter 9:My Stupid Mouth)
Okay so this Charlie Walters guy has me alittle scared. Just the way Ally was describing him kinda gave me the feeling that he might come in between Justin and Ally. I really hope not but drama is always fun though lol...anyway...i love this and i can't wait for some more.
Author's Response: thank you so much! you guys really have no idea how awesome the feedback is for me.
and what fanfiction would be complete without some drama? lol.
DeadandGone (Signed) on Oct 05, 2008 01:40 am (
The Cast)
I've just read all of the chapters and I must say it's amazing. I literally lol'd with the last chapter and how she puts her foot in her mouth. Your characters are charming, and very real. Their interaction is hilarious and I love how blunt Ally is. You're a talent, keep it up!
Author's Response: lol, thank you!
I'm so glad you're enjoying the characters and their personalities. Hope you keep reading!
MissTasha (Signed) on Oct 04, 2008 10:32 pm (
Chapter 6:Want To)
Looooooooooooooooooove it. Please update soon.
klw (Anonymous) on Oct 04, 2008 09:47 pm (
Prologue:Nothing Lasts Forever)
This is the best story to be posted in a long time. Please update soon. The suspence is killing me LOL!!
MochaB (Signed) on Oct 04, 2008 03:02 pm (
Chapter 6:Want To)
ok so this could end up being a good thing or a bad thing. haha. hopefully it's a good thing and there is no denying of feelings or other false things going on. i'm really liking it so far though so update soon please! :o)
Amy (Anonymous) on Oct 04, 2008 01:39 pm (
Chapter 6:Want To)
Ohhhh I'm loving this. Can't wait for more!
