Comments For Wonderwall
Jamie Lynn (Signed) on Dec 30, 2008 02:49 am (Chapter 34: A Moment Of Change)
Well hot damn! Freakin Pregnant?! I really like how you think. Just thought I'd throw that in there. But damn...Justin? A Baby? And freaking Darcy still looming around getting ready to pop her slutty little ass back into the mix? I swear if you just write me into the story for like 30 seconds tops...we can eliminate one of those damning instances that were previously listed...mainly the last one. 30 seconds tops is all I would need. Just 30 seconds. LOL
I'm really anxious to see where this is going to take Alustin. This better not be one of those damn dark clouds (like Darcy) that's going to be left looming. A baby for Alustin would be...cute! Baby Noah needs a playmate! Awesomeness as usual! Can't wait for the next one!
Author's Response:
I'm really anxious to see where this is going to take Alustin. This better not be one of those damn dark clouds (like Darcy) that's going to be left looming. A baby for Alustin would be...cute! Baby Noah needs a playmate! Awesomeness as usual! Can't wait for the next one!
Author's Response:
LOL! just 30 seconds? i think you scare me a little now, lol.
Alustin? I never even thought of that, but i love it! lol
aswift (Signed) on Dec 30, 2008 12:07 am (Chapter 34: A Moment Of Change)
Author's Response: lol, for some reason...it's kinda fun to just throw stuff at these two, but...i see ally as being a fairly strong character, and i think she can handle pretty much anything, after all...she deals with justin on a daily basis! lol
PREGNANT?!?!?! Dang you really know how to through a wrench in a story, but I love it! Can't wait for your next update, hope it's sooner rather than later.
Author's Response: lol, for some reason...it's kinda fun to just throw stuff at these two, but...i see ally as being a fairly strong character, and i think she can handle pretty much anything, after all...she deals with justin on a daily basis! lol
Anonymous (Anonymous) on Dec 29, 2008 11:48 pm (Chapter 34: A Moment Of Change)
oh hellllll
MissTasha (Signed) on Dec 29, 2008 11:47 pm (Chapter 34: A Moment Of Change)
I'd like to believe that he wouldn't be jerk enough to ditch her after she tells him. And I hope the tests are right. I'm excited about them having a baby, even if neither of them is particularly parent-ready. Great chapter. Please update soon. Really, really, really soon. *is excited*
Author's Response: lol...i'm already working on it...it seems to be coming along nicely so far, so hopefully it'll be up soon *fingers crossed*
Author's Response: lol...i'm already working on it...it seems to be coming along nicely so far, so hopefully it'll be up soon *fingers crossed*
izzy04 (Anonymous) on Dec 29, 2008 11:28 pm (Chapter 34: A Moment Of Change)
Author's Response: lol, i just like hitting these two with all sorts of crap for some reason.
i love the curve ball you hrough in there lives. i hope they are really going to have a baby and it not just be a false alarm.
Author's Response: lol, i just like hitting these two with all sorts of crap for some reason.
sylvie (Anonymous) on Dec 21, 2008 07:36 am (Chapter 33: The Unexpected)
update soon
Mel514 (Signed) on Dec 16, 2008 03:00 am (Chapter 33: The Unexpected)
I really loved this chapter! I'm glad to see Ally didn't freak out. Loving how this is coming together.
Author's Response: thank you! i really appreciate that!
Author's Response: thank you! i really appreciate that!
alimera (Signed) on Dec 15, 2008 04:53 pm (Chapter 33: The Unexpected)
Aww, that went a MILLION times better than I thought it would! Thank you for not making Ally go all psycho and leave him yet again--but something tells me this isn't the last we'll see of Darcy, is it? Ugh. Lol, update again soon!
Author's Response: lol i dunno...she may pop up somewhere...who knows! haha. i'm hopefully starting the next chapter soon...the last couple weeks life has gotten in the way, especially with the holidays coming up so soon...but hopefully it won't take me too long!
Author's Response: lol i dunno...she may pop up somewhere...who knows! haha. i'm hopefully starting the next chapter soon...the last couple weeks life has gotten in the way, especially with the holidays coming up so soon...but hopefully it won't take me too long!
SYLVIE (Anonymous) on Dec 15, 2008 04:07 am (Chapter 33: The Unexpected)
wow what Ally did was so not what i expected ,but so much better ,please make it work please i cant take another break up from them .i just have to add this ,i dont why but i love when guys interact with kids so im hoping to see how justin is going to interact with Noah lol sorry for my randomness.
Author's Response: lol i totally know what you mean! there's just something about a guy with a baby that is irresistable!
Author's Response: lol i totally know what you mean! there's just something about a guy with a baby that is irresistable!
Jamie Lynn (Signed) on Dec 15, 2008 12:19 am (Chapter 33: The Unexpected)
Whew! I was so hoping she wouldn't do what I thought she was going too. I think I was as shocked as Justin. I'm serious when I said she just needs to be destroyed. You should like write me in and let me be some crazy person that strapped her to a bomb or something LMAO! Can't stand the hoe! Anyway, awesome chappy!
Author's Response: lol! now that could be an interesting little twist...hmm....
Author's Response: lol! now that could be an interesting little twist...hmm....
MissTasha (Signed) on Dec 14, 2008 09:22 pm (Chapter 33: The Unexpected)
Fucking right you're going to make it work. Otherwise, I'll kick your ass myself. Ally can stand back while I do all the work. Awesome chapter. Please update soon.
Author's Response: lol, he could definitely use a good ass kicking i think. as always...thanks for the review and for sticking with this story! i really appreciate it! you guys are seriously amazing!
Author's Response: lol, he could definitely use a good ass kicking i think. as always...thanks for the review and for sticking with this story! i really appreciate it! you guys are seriously amazing!
crestbaby (Signed) on Dec 10, 2008 04:08 pm (Chapter 32: Simple Kind Of Life)
so I'm thinking that you need to update ASAP!!!! Loving the story!
Author's Response: lol thank you! the next chapter is coming along fairly well already...so hopefully it'll be up soon!
Author's Response: lol thank you! the next chapter is coming along fairly well already...so hopefully it'll be up soon!
SYLVIE (Anonymous) on Dec 10, 2008 05:04 am (Chapter 32: Simple Kind Of Life)
awwwwww Noah James Ayala thats the cutest name ever ,im so happy for Lauren and Trace. But oh shit is this story going to turn upshit crazy when he tells her ughhhhhhh i hate Darcy but to be completely fair Justin was also part of it so .....
Author's Response: lol indeed he was!
Author's Response: lol indeed he was!
SJane (Signed) on Dec 10, 2008 02:22 am (Chapter 32: Simple Kind Of Life)
oh baby is here how cute.
i dnt think justin is hiding his emotions or acting as normal as he likes to think he is esp considering al can feel that something is wrong
:(
Author's Response: very true! he is pretty dense...but he is male after all. lol
i dnt think justin is hiding his emotions or acting as normal as he likes to think he is esp considering al can feel that something is wrong
:(
Author's Response: very true! he is pretty dense...but he is male after all. lol
MissTasha (Signed) on Dec 09, 2008 11:03 pm (Chapter 32: Simple Kind Of Life)
Doomed. They're doomed. Dammit. They can't get it right no matter how hard they try, it seems. I don't think Ally's going to be able to forgive him for this. I think he's fucked up beyond repair this time. Damn him. :( Please update soon.
Author's Response: lol. he does seem to be really good at screwing things up, doesn't he?
Author's Response: lol. he does seem to be really good at screwing things up, doesn't he?
