Comments For Trying to Get it Right
jacs12031984 (Signed) on Nov 10, 2008 05:37 pm (Chapter 9)
aww update soon they have to get back together
wishful thinker (Signed) on Nov 10, 2008 03:32 pm (Chapter 1)
1st Poor Lauren boys really suck at times :?
2nd Let me break the chain is a classic line and now I want some one to say that to me
3rd I will be attending more wedding in the future :) lol
Love it so far :)
alimera (Signed) on Nov 08, 2008 10:16 am (Chapter 8)
Aww, poor little Mackenzie. It's definitely not her fault but she feels lost. Update again soon, this needs to be fixed!!
kahnechick85 (Signed) on Nov 07, 2008 04:01 pm (Chapter 8)
I love this and I can't wait to see what's gonna happen next. PMS
MissTasha (Signed) on Nov 07, 2008 02:10 pm (Chapter 8)
You're tugging at my heart strings over here. Please update soon.
Rocio Vazquez (Signed) on Nov 07, 2008 02:08 am (Chapter 3)
that was so sweet on his part! i really wish i had an older bro. instead i got 2 younger ones. :(
SJane (Signed) on Nov 05, 2008 07:52 pm (Chapter 7)
damn Justin gets kind of rough and pushy when he wants soe...it's hot lol
jacs12031984 (Signed) on Nov 05, 2008 06:35 pm (Chapter 7)
what a way to leave us hanging update soon
Rocio Vazquez (Signed) on Nov 05, 2008 06:21 pm (Chapter 1)
its good from the start. cant wait to read next chapter
kahnechick85 (Signed) on Nov 05, 2008 01:49 pm (Chapter 7)
I'm glad she's gonna talk to Justin. They need to be honest with each other and tell each other how they feel. I love this, PMS.
misslonelyhearts (Signed) on Nov 05, 2008 12:10 pm (Chapter 7)
i absolutely adore this story and cant wait see what happens in those five minutes! i hope they get their act together and really hash things out! looking forward to the next update!
kahnechick85 (Signed) on Nov 04, 2008 01:02 pm (Chapter 6)
I'm glad that Justin called and they are going out. I think there is a lot that they need to talk about. I love this, PMS
kahnechick85 (Signed) on Nov 04, 2008 01:41 am (Chapter 5)
Wow. That was not what I was exspecting. I can't wait to see what's gonna happen next. PMS