SJane (Signed) on Nov 03, 2008 05:11 pm (Chapter 5)
Wow a kid this just adds to the stories juiciness lol


alimera (Signed) on Nov 03, 2008 02:47 pm (Chapter 5)
Oh wow, interesting twist. Update again soon!


SJane (Signed) on Oct 31, 2008 07:14 pm (Chapter 4)
No bad or ugly here just the good lol
Loved the update, I wonder what's up with justin needing to go back home


kahnechick85 (Signed) on Oct 31, 2008 02:56 pm (Chapter 4)
I just found this and I love it so far. I wonder what the big emergency is. I can't wait to see what's gonna happen next. PMS


Anonymous (Anonymous) on Oct 31, 2008 12:57 pm (Chapter 4)
really cute but u bettter update this time around


alimera (Signed) on Oct 11, 2008 11:04 am (Chapter 3)
Wow, that boy has an amazing memory lol. Update again soon!


mzmillion (Signed) on Oct 08, 2008 01:12 pm (Chapter 3)
sweet, that was a good chapter.


SJane (Signed) on Oct 06, 2008 06:18 pm (Chapter 2)
I really like this so far poor lauren going threw all that shit. Can't wait for an update


mzmillion (Signed) on Oct 06, 2008 04:33 pm (Chapter 1)
Ummm, writing is good, I like the interaction between J and L already. The only thing is, its so dramatic in the first chapter, car crashes, deaths, drugs, rape, abuse, and all just in the first chapter, it seems to be playing out to be a really dramatic story but I'll be along for the ride.




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