Comments For little thoughts
kahnechick85 (Signed) on Dec 06, 2008 01:45 pm (Chapter 1)
I'm glad they both were okay. I loved this. I would love to see what happens in the future. Great Job

Author's Response:

thanks, weve never done a future fic b4 but after we write the 3 ideas we have lined up, we'll see. glad u liked it :)




kahnechick85 (Signed) on Nov 30, 2008 10:22 pm (Chapter 6)
I love this. I hope that she tells Justin what his wonderful girlfriend did and said. I can't wait to see what's gonna happen next. PMS

Author's Response: we'll see. he did see the tail end of it so who knows whats gonna happen to them. keep reading to see the drama!



Gigi (Signed) on Nov 06, 2008 11:35 pm (Chapter 5)
That was really sweet.



Vikki (Signed) on Oct 30, 2008 09:17 am (Chapter 2)

is this part of a series then? If not then you never know which story a reader may come to first.

its good to have some mystery in your stories but not to a point where the reader may feel confused or lost and unable to relate or connect to your characters.

there are stories when the guys may develop something, memory loss, blindness, but here you have the leading lady with a disability that (one can assume) some of the general readers may not understand.

open her up and let the readers fall in love with her, that's a sure way to have them fall in love with the story.



Author's Response: no its not a series, its just the same characters. i'm not really sure how to explain nicole or where but i'll talk to my cowriter when i can & see what we can do. we're hopefully adding a flashback so we might be able to there.



Vikki (Signed) on Oct 30, 2008 09:02 am (Chapter 2)

CP? as in cerebral palsy? thats interesting....its be good to have a few blanks to be filled in about their background.

and take your time...be descriptive. get us inside that head of yours so we can feel out the story like you do. :)



Author's Response: yea i just figured it was in the other fics so i didnt know how to reexplain it





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