Comments For Trippster
jacs12031984 (Signed) on Nov 13, 2008 06:46 pm (Part II)
love it update soon
Author's Response: Thanks so much! I'll put the last part up in a few :)
Author's Response: Thanks so much! I'll put the last part up in a few :)
Schnessa (Signed) on Nov 13, 2008 05:23 pm (Part II)
Author's Response: hmmm lol Yeah it's gotta suck when he didn't even know she existed. But guys can be dumb and not exactly take in their surroundings haha. I'm sorry it's not longer, but I will seriously try to think of something else haha. Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Her smile is a lot like Justin’s smile
That line makes me think Bella is like his sister or something! Am I right? Anyways I think Justin has a thing for Melanie....I so love her too but I do wish she would stand up to her boss like Justin said. But it was kind of heartwrenching that he didn't notice her for a year and thought she was new! That had to suck for her. Anyways just like everyone else I think this should be longer because I absolutely love it...but maybe it's a good thing it isn't because then I would never work on my stories lol
Author's Response: hmmm lol Yeah it's gotta suck when he didn't even know she existed. But guys can be dumb and not exactly take in their surroundings haha. I'm sorry it's not longer, but I will seriously try to think of something else haha. Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Anonymous (Anonymous) on Nov 13, 2008 02:17 pm (Part II)
Mel is just adorable. I have a feeling Bella isn't Justin's girlfriend... or maybe it's just be hoping haha. Justin seems to be digging Mel a little... I can't wait to see what happens. But I will have to agree with everyone else in hoping you make it more than 3 parts :)
Author's Response: hmm interesting... I'll post the last part soon so it'll clear everything up lol. Thanks for reading!
Author's Response: hmm interesting... I'll post the last part soon so it'll clear everything up lol. Thanks for reading!
Joy (Anonymous) on Nov 13, 2008 12:21 am (Part I)
I really love this story and hope you make it longer. -sad pouty lipped, puppy dog eyed face- I really hope the girl Bella is a relative or something. She seems nice and I was so ready to hate her lol The boss is a total turd.
Author's Response: lol I'm seriously going to try to think of something else to make it longer but I can't make any promises. Thanks so much for leaving a review!
Author's Response: lol I'm seriously going to try to think of something else to make it longer but I can't make any promises. Thanks so much for leaving a review!
SJane (Signed) on Nov 12, 2008 11:39 pm (Part II)
hmmmm me thinks this isn't the gf she's making her out to be.
their boss is a right ole wanker isn't he
Author's Response: Yes, their boss is a pure jerk. Thanks for reading!
their boss is a right ole wanker isn't he
Author's Response: Yes, their boss is a pure jerk. Thanks for reading!
mixtapeforafool (Signed) on Nov 12, 2008 10:09 pm (Part II)
excuse me maam but i would like to suggest that you extend this story beyond 3 chapters. pleeeeeeease, bc i absolutely adore melanie! i love how she kept on saying i love him. haha. i dont blame her. but please, give it some thought. you know, i'll even take 10 chapters all together. ;) great job and thanks for updating SO quickly! LOL
Author's Response: lol well first thank you so very much! :) I'm glad you adore Melanie, but I wrote the story for a challenge and it's kind of done lol. I'm sorry! :( Maybe I can come up with something else, I will seriously try to think of something. Thanks for reading and being so interested!
Author's Response: lol well first thank you so very much! :) I'm glad you adore Melanie, but I wrote the story for a challenge and it's kind of done lol. I'm sorry! :( Maybe I can come up with something else, I will seriously try to think of something. Thanks for reading and being so interested!
MissTasha (Signed) on Nov 12, 2008 10:07 pm (Part II)
Please let her be a sister or cousin or something. Please. Please update soon.
Author's Response: I'll work on it lol Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Author's Response: I'll work on it lol Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Bethea (Anonymous) on Nov 12, 2008 12:50 pm (Part I)
This is really cute! I like it.
Author's Response: Thanks so much! :)
Author's Response: Thanks so much! :)
SJane (Signed) on Nov 12, 2008 12:16 am (Part I)
oh god i love you i really do lol your stuff is the shit.
i totally know where she is comming from on the no bf front so you know your family thinks your gay thing lol
Author's Response: aww thank you, I love you too! lol I'm so glad you like my stuff :)
i totally know where she is comming from on the no bf front so you know your family thinks your gay thing lol
Author's Response: aww thank you, I love you too! lol I'm so glad you like my stuff :)
Schnessa (Signed) on Nov 11, 2008 11:51 pm (Part I)
OMG OMG I hate you....It's official I hate you because I want more of this story RIGHT NOW! lol Okay I don't really hate you it's just that good and I love it and I want to read more of it...and it officially just made it into my favorites!
Author's Response: haha well thank you very much :) I'm about to update right now so don't hate me too much lol
Author's Response: haha well thank you very much :) I'm about to update right now so don't hate me too much lol
MissTasha (Signed) on Nov 11, 2008 11:34 pm (Part I)
Really cute so far. I loved "Please go away." lol. Please update soon.
Author's Response: haha thanks so much!
Author's Response: haha thanks so much!
mixtapeforafool (Signed) on Nov 11, 2008 10:51 pm (Part I)
aw, this is cute! i like it. poor girl! lol. you need to update this one because i am curious now and DEFINITELY want to read more! =)
Author's Response: thanks so much, I'm glad you're interested :) I'm about to update now
Author's Response: thanks so much, I'm glad you're interested :) I'm about to update now
