Comments For Raw Intimacy
crash coincidence (Signed) on May 30, 2007 01:58 pm (Chapter 29)
finally. i have been sitting over her in agony waiting for any kind of resolution, thank goodness she gave into him, *sigh* so this is a crossroads. either more twists and turns or the end is in sight.....love it mags :)
Author's Response: You never know with this story. Be prepared for anything. Of course, if you give me the dirt on ashes I could give you a little hint as to what will happen... lol
Author's Response: You never know with this story. Be prepared for anything. Of course, if you give me the dirt on ashes I could give you a little hint as to what will happen... lol
alimera (Signed) on May 30, 2007 08:56 am (Chapter 29)
well i certainly hated the way this chapter started but loved the way it ended! update again soon!
Author's Response: Glad you liked the ending, more is coming.
Author's Response: Glad you liked the ending, more is coming.
Jamie Lynn (Signed) on May 30, 2007 03:45 am (Chapter 27)
OK just to let you know the only reason I am stopping here is because it is currently 3:43 in the morning...and I am making myself go to bed. Because If I dont I'll be here till...forever. Then i wont wake up to watch Little House on the Prairie in the morning. I just thought you should know that I am fully addicted!
LuLu (Signed) on May 30, 2007 01:21 am (Chapter 29)
Yay they're gonna try to make it work again. I hope they get it right this time. Tell Lynn, Trace, Cameron and Jake(he seems shady to me I don't like him) to back off and mind their own business this time.
Can't wait for more!
P.S. Could you put the link to your website in the next update?
Author's Response: I'll put out the word to leave the two of them alone but you know, they are bound to show up. lol A link will be in the notes of the next chapter.
Can't wait for more!
P.S. Could you put the link to your website in the next update?
Author's Response: I'll put out the word to leave the two of them alone but you know, they are bound to show up. lol A link will be in the notes of the next chapter.
LuLu (Signed) on May 29, 2007 10:38 pm (Chapter 14)
Beth should not have felt bad about going off on Cameron cause she deserved it. What kind of girlfriend gives alcohol or drugs or whatever to their boyfriend after they just got out of rehab? Bitch.
Beth had every right to say what she did. Cameron wasn't there when he was half dead from an overdose Beth was and with all the f-ed up ppl around him, Beth is essentially his only support system.
I probably would have went a step further and slapped her ass for trying to give him a drink.
Author's Response: Cameron is a whole other story. She is screwed up in this story lol. I would have slapped her too, but Beth was more mild mannered at the time. Thanks for the feedback.
Beth had every right to say what she did. Cameron wasn't there when he was half dead from an overdose Beth was and with all the f-ed up ppl around him, Beth is essentially his only support system.
I probably would have went a step further and slapped her ass for trying to give him a drink.
Author's Response: Cameron is a whole other story. She is screwed up in this story lol. I would have slapped her too, but Beth was more mild mannered at the time. Thanks for the feedback.
lostinadreamx (Signed) on May 29, 2007 09:44 pm (Chapter 29)
they have to be the absolute cutest couple ever. i love them together... and Justin was a huge ass when it came to everything... but he loves her. im so glad they are going to try again. hehe
Author's Response: They win the award in my mind lol. He was an ass but in the end, he pulled thorugh. Thanks for the feedback.
Author's Response: They win the award in my mind lol. He was an ass but in the end, he pulled thorugh. Thanks for the feedback.
chazgurl4life (Signed) on May 29, 2007 08:13 pm (Chapter 29)
aww...i just love the tw of them together....update ASAP lol :-)
Author's Response: Me too, glad you liked it. Updates are coming.
Author's Response: Me too, glad you liked it. Updates are coming.
SexualCoco (Signed) on May 29, 2007 07:21 pm (Chapter 29)
Finally, they are getting their stuff together. I'm glad they're deciding to give it one more try and I can't wait to see where it goes next. Thanks for the update, love the story!
Author's Response: Yep, they are going round again. Let's hope Justin get's his act together this time.
Author's Response: Yep, they are going round again. Let's hope Justin get's his act together this time.
lostinadreamx (Signed) on May 23, 2007 04:01 pm (Chapter 28)
Author's Response: They have something special. I love the last line as well, one of my favorites. Thanks for the feedback!
oh wow. that was amazing. I love the chemistry that Beth and Justin have.
and that last line just gave me chills. i can't wait for the update!
Author's Response: They have something special. I love the last line as well, one of my favorites. Thanks for the feedback!
lyss2118 (Signed) on May 22, 2007 11:44 pm (Chapter 1)
omg. sooooo good. i love this story. deff my number one!!!
Author's Response: I'm so glad to hear it!
Author's Response: I'm so glad to hear it!
crash coincidence (Signed) on May 22, 2007 07:34 pm (Chapter 28)
thank GOD. i know its small and not a real fix, but YES! i love this mags, really truely!
crash coincidence (Signed) on May 22, 2007 07:33 pm (Chapter 28)
thank GOD. i know its small and not a real fix, but YES! i love this mags, really truely!
Author's Response: So close, yet so far. lol Thanks Ashley.
Author's Response: So close, yet so far. lol Thanks Ashley.
Chelsia (Signed) on May 22, 2007 07:29 pm (Chapter 28)
i must say, that last line is PERFECT. It totally changes everything and I like that he just says it. Ok, so awesome chapter. pfft, and let's get jake out of there, k? :)
Author's Response: So glad you liked it. I loved the last line myself. I'll work on Jake :)
Author's Response: So glad you liked it. I loved the last line myself. I'll work on Jake :)
sChErZo (Signed) on May 22, 2007 02:45 pm (Chapter 28)
amazing chapter!!! i'm happy she didn't go through with jake...that would've been TOO weird!
Author's Response: Thanks! Yeah, no Jake for Beth. She has another guy in her mind lol
Author's Response: Thanks! Yeah, no Jake for Beth. She has another guy in her mind lol