Comments For Waking Up In Vegas
marie (Anonymous) on Feb 22, 2009 11:44 pm (Chapter 15: Fighting The Obvious)

oh my gosh, i knew he was in love with her!! i really hope they open up to each other and soon! more soon :>

 



Author's Response: lol who knows? these two are all kinds of stubborn! haha



glowbug917 (Signed) on Feb 21, 2009 09:00 pm (Chapter 15: Fighting The Obvious)

Alright lady, I've got a bone to pick with you. I was home sick last night and as such, up til 6am getting hooked on this damn story. (Had to stop and finish the last couple chapters today) 

So now, naturally, I'm going to be a greedy little shit and demand more. Now. Ahem, please. :)

I love how clearly drawn both Justin and Madison (and even the supporting characters are in this story) are. I love the tension and the hostility that's there in the beginning that manifests itself into something more later. I love and hate how stubborn they both are because on occasion, it's a ton of fun to read and other times horribly frustrating because if they were just honest with themselves and each other, the fuckers might GET somewhere.

But now that you've built this whole world up I see a shitstorm coming before anything progresses....so again, I go back to write. more. now, haha.



Author's Response:

lol thank you! sorry i kept you up so late! haha.

and that's pretty much exactly what i was going for. i wanted them both to be so incredibly stubborn that it bordered on being completely ridiculous. lol. out of everything i've written, i think i enjoy these two the most. they're just fun characters to write because of their stubborn, selfish, chicken-shit nonsense and thats why i write...for fun. lol.

i'm so, so, so glad to hear you're enjoying these two and all their craziness! haha. i appreciate it a ton!

hope ya enjoy the rest!




kahnechick85 (Signed) on Feb 21, 2009 02:31 pm (Chapter 15: Fighting The Obvious)
I think that Justin needs to sit down and tell her how he feels, when he isn't drunk off his ass. I can't wait to see what's gonna happen next. PMS

Author's Response:

haha so true! but, he's just as stubborn as she is, i suppose. lol

anyway, thanks for reading and reviewing!




isis (Anonymous) on Feb 21, 2009 01:44 pm (Chapter 15: Fighting The Obvious)
aww poor justin! he should just talk to her!!! update soon!

Author's Response:

lol, i know right? he's kind of a big chicken when it comes to her.

anyway...thanks for reading and reviewing! i appreciate it tons!




MissTasha (Signed) on Feb 21, 2009 09:56 am (Chapter 15: Fighting The Obvious)
Noooooooooooooooooooo!!! They have to talk about things! This is killing me! Aaaaaaaaaaaaah!!! They're driving me crazy. I need honesty, conversation, decisions! Or else I'll be forced to lock them in a room together until it happens. I'll do it. I mean it. Please update soon.

Author's Response:

lol it just may come to that with these two. they're just way too stubborn for their own damn good! haha

anyway...thank ya my dear! you have no idea how much i appreciate the fact that you're so consistent in reviewing!




Shufflee (Signed) on Feb 21, 2009 02:07 am (Chapter 15: Fighting The Obvious)
yay, he's come to his senses. I expect sex in the next chapter

Author's Response: lol hmm...maybe??? who knows. these two are so back and forth with everythng, there's no telling what the hell they'll do next. lol



JoJo (Anonymous) on Feb 21, 2009 02:02 am (Chapter 15: Fighting The Obvious)
Great update!  I get so excited when I see updates from you because I'm never disappointed. Udpate again soon!!

Author's Response: aww thank you! i really appreciate that!



mzmillion (Signed) on Feb 10, 2009 10:16 am (Chapter 14: Forgiving, Forgetting & A Drunken Confession)
oh shitttt...........update like tomorrow so I can get even more happy!!

Author's Response:

lol, thank you!

the next chapter is already underway, and i'm hoping to have it up within the next few days.




kahnechick85 (Signed) on Feb 10, 2009 03:09 am (Chapter 14: Forgiving, Forgetting & A Drunken Confession)
Damn and she probably won't believe him because he's drunk. I can't wait to see what's gonna happen next. I love this, PMS

Author's Response:

lol, she just might surprise you....who knows. haha

thanks for reading and reviewing! i really appreciate it!




tiinydancer xx (Signed) on Feb 10, 2009 02:21 am (Chapter 14: Forgiving, Forgetting & A Drunken Confession)
Oh you just HAD to go and do that, didn't you?

Author's Response:

lol of course! it's just way too much fun to torture you guys! haha

thanks for reading and reviewing!




MochaB (Signed) on Feb 10, 2009 12:59 am (Chapter 14: Forgiving, Forgetting & A Drunken Confession)
you would leave us hanging like this! gosh! haha. but i can't help but NOT take him seriously cause dude is drunk. some say you speak the truth when you're drunk, but i don't know...he may be speaking the truth, but i highly doubt he'll remember or say it again in the morning. i feel like madison, she says she won't take anybodys mess and she'll stand up for herself or whatever, but i can't help but feel like she doesn't, especially with this justin stuff. yes she's cooperating with this marriage thing, but she forgave him instantly after he pretty much called her a slut? i don't get it. she doesn't seem as strong as she'd like to think she is, which i guess explains the drunken arrest. she needs to find a way to make things better for  herself. anyway, that's just what i think. haha. update soon!! :o) 

Author's Response:

haha, everybody loves a good cliff hanger! lol

you pretty much hit the nail on the head!

deep down, she is a pretty tough chick, but everything around her is kind of spiraling out of control and she isn't quite sure how to handle it, or what to do. i guess you could say she's a little mixed up, and the arrest was kind of her way of hitting rock bottom. as far as forgiving justin... i think for madison, all of the things he did after her arrest, kind of made up for what he said. justin was paying her bail getting her home safely and cleaning her up while jc and chelsea couldn't stop arguing over whose fault it was. i was having kind of a hard time getting that point across, even to myself while i was writing it, so i apologize if there was any confusion and i hope my explanation makes a little more sense. lol

anyway, thanks for reading and reviewing chick! i really appreciate it, especially the way you analyze stuff! i love, love, love detailed reviews like that!




champ (Signed) on Feb 09, 2009 10:14 pm (Chapter 14: Forgiving, Forgetting & A Drunken Confession)

great update!! keep them coming



Author's Response:

aww thank you! i appreciate that a ton! it means alot to me to know that you guys are enjoying it!

i've actually had more fun with this one, than anything else i've ever written.




Karlita (Signed) on Feb 09, 2009 09:41 pm (Chapter 14: Forgiving, Forgetting & A Drunken Confession)
Aww, yay!  It's about time!

Author's Response:

lol, yeah...i thought so.

thanks for reading and reviewing!




Shufflee (Signed) on Feb 09, 2009 09:01 pm (Chapter 14: Forgiving, Forgetting & A Drunken Confession)
Justin said the L word first, I'm suprised.

Author's Response:

lol, that's what i was going for. it would have been way too cliche if it was madison. atleast i thought so anyway. lol

thanks for reading and reviewing! i appreciate it a ton!




Marissa (Signed) on Feb 09, 2009 08:54 pm (Chapter 14: Forgiving, Forgetting & A Drunken Confession)
FINALLY! Damn, I've been waiting for that admission this entire story! Great job, more soon please?!

Author's Response:

lol tell me about it! it was inevitible, but it took way too long! haha.

hopefully the next chapter will be finished and posted within a few days.

thanks for reading and reviewing!






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