Comments For Fallen
MochaB (Signed) on Dec 28, 2008 07:23 pm (Part I)
this was awesome. at first i felt bad for becca cause i could see why she would feel jealous or cheated from how things were from her perspective, and i wasn't really sure what i was about to read. it was a really wonderful and touching story though. it's amazing how things are not always what they seem. things can seem so perfect and appealing on the outside, but man...if only we knew. haha. i couldn't help but to love their little family myself. anyway, really great job. :o)

Author's Response: Thanks so much for reading and reviewing! I'm glad you liked it :)



SJane (Signed) on Dec 04, 2008 04:26 am (Part IV)
Lol I love how u know what mood oprah will be in by her clothes its kind of true, loved it

Author's Response: lol it's so true! Thanks so much for reading everything :)



MissTasha (Signed) on Dec 04, 2008 12:33 am (Part IV)
Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaw! Great story, lady. Really, really good.

Author's Response: Thanks so much for reading and reviewing to ALL my stuff :)



kacavendam (Anonymous) on Nov 20, 2008 07:26 am (Part I)
Amazing job, please keep writhing



SJane (Signed) on Nov 19, 2008 09:36 pm (Part III)
the flashbacks were definately a nice touch good job girl :)

Author's Response: Thanks!



Lily (Signed) on Nov 19, 2008 12:19 pm (Part II)
Well at least he's really cooperative. I feel like it'll all work out because he's not trying to hide anything. He seems to love his wife and kid so much. At least I hope he does haha I hope its' not just an act. i have trust issues haha. Update soon!

Author's Response: haha you do have trust issues. I don't want to give anything away but I'll update soon. That will help at least a  little ;) Thanks for the review!



MissTasha (Signed) on Nov 18, 2008 03:12 pm (Part II)
Damn, damn, damn. Please update soon.

Author's Response: Yes, damn. haha Thanks for the review!



Gigi (Signed) on Nov 18, 2008 12:55 pm (Part II)
Yeah I was thinking that Lyric might have a developmental problem too.

Author's Response: Yes, I see you're not the only one. Thanks for reading!



god gave me style (Signed) on Nov 17, 2008 11:52 pm (Part II)
Not cool JT, not cool at all! How is he gonna do heroine at his son's birthday party?! That pisses me off. And, I'm not liking the fact the Lyric is two and isn't talking yet, its making me think that he has a development problem but I could be over analyzing things, lol.

Great update, I can't wait for the next part.

Author's Response: Thanks for the review! I'm glad you're liking it. 



SJane (Signed) on Nov 17, 2008 01:57 am (Part I)
Ooohhh such a juicy start. From the summary alone I think this is a case where the sister is judging a book by its cover and we all know where that gets us

Author's Response: Yes, never a good idea. lol. Thanks for always reading my stuff!



god gave me style (Signed) on Nov 16, 2008 07:01 pm (Part I)
something bad is going to happen and it's all her fault! you can't wish bad things on people, especially your little sister and her husband. great job tho, i can't wait to read the next part.

Author's Response: Seriously, she doesn't exactly win the sister of the year award haha. Thanks for reading!



MissTasha (Signed) on Nov 16, 2008 06:55 pm (Part I)
Well, aren't we Little Miss Sunshine? Please update soon.

Author's Response: lol exactly. Thanks for reading!



Jbear (Signed) on Nov 16, 2008 06:31 pm (Part I)
You should totally be careful what you wish for. I love it already. I can't wait for more.

Author's Response: Thank you so very much! :)





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