yay for #1 .... boooo for editing out the sex scene! lol! We want to celebrate too damn it! :)
you're a tease! that's what you are! give us the good stuff once then... what? lol! tsk tsk tsk!
Author's Response: Aww, sorry! I was trying to tell a story without it centering on the sex. I actually added the only sex scene after my friend complained that I didn't make a big enough deal out of them finally having sex for the first time.
Author's Response: It's more fun watching you read it than writing it! LMAO!
ok seriously... i really really really like this story. i
ts like, I WANT them to get together, but i really love this cuteness they got going on. :)
Author's Response: I know, I'm very evil for dragging this out!
Author's Response: Thanks, I'm glad folks are reading it!
He stopped and faced Callie, smiling slightly. “I was going to say, Bossy, that it seemed different coming out of a mouth so pretty. So there.” He raised and lowered his eyebrows and turned away from her to keep walking.
*squeals and rapidly clicks next*
lol omg! “I’m not leaving till I see you walk in that door. Go on, now, I’m late,”
my bf does the same thing... i love it. its nothing sexual its just very gentlemenly :)
and i love how they work together... ‘You and your cologne need to step off. I know what I’m doing,’ ... oh Callie, lets see how much longer it takes for you to just jump him, lol!
and thats cool how JC was a fan of her dad's... didnt expect a turn like that. good job!
Author's Response: Ha! Thank you! I totally didn't plan it that way (the tension) but so many people have picked up on it.
