nooooooooo! it was supposed to JUSTIN at the door. I call misprint and will wait patiently for you to fix it, lol!
and OMGFUCKINGGOD ... that scene with Rachel in the kitchen? OMG! Did JC AGREE to that?!?! WOW! homegirl is a lot stronger than I am... let me tell you! LOL!
and you need to drop this Andrew kid, that is Justin's girl you hear me! Saturday needs to come and Justin needs to step up before this Andrew guy steals her away. hmph!
WHAT?!?!?!!? What was that?!?!? Actually I know what that was, it was mean!
a)I cannot believe that Justin seduced Rachel to get her to stop... Neve saw that coming.
b)Aubrey should have asked him to come on Saturday naked and with handcuffs... sorry mind went to the gutter
c)Why do I have a feeling Aubrey is still going to end up hurt? Or they both are going to.
d)And I have been telling you that Justin needs to open his eyes before Aubrey gets snatched up by someone else (like Andrew).
e)Now I have to go to my room to get extra shoes. In fact I am just going to start piling up all my shoes next to my computer so that I am ready at all times.
pssh! my favorite week ever! OMG!
I love Rachel. I love her! She's my homegirl, I swear.
Justin is a fool and obviously needs her help... lol! 2 weeks without calling Aubrey?! come on!
And awwwwww she's a swim teacher! awwwww! Lets have her be a Girl Scout Troop Leader next.... LOL! I kid! I kid! Its cute... something she loves and a great way to ... pass the time I guess? Or make extra money? yeah. But I rather her spend her weekends with Justin... but I'm biased!!! LOL!
maybe... here's to hoping he wants to be "friends" and spends tons of time with her, she gets to wear the new dress, they fall in love, and make babies!!!! :)
keep the updates coming!! liked this update!! great update!!
ACK! THAT is how you end this chapter?!?!?! I am getting ready to pull off my shoes now, missy!!! I love Rachel, but at the same time I feel really bad for Aubrey just getting put on the spot like that, and I hate Justin for not calling her and for not thinking she is datable. And I really currently hate you because you put something like this into the story:
"It wasn't that she didn't wish she were father along than she was, but with the medical bills that had started piling up her senior year of high school and then the surgery she'd had to have..."
And then you don't explain it anymore. So all while I am hating you, at the same time I completely love you because the chapters just keep rolling in.
*Sigh* I guess I will keep my shoes on my own feet and not use them as projectiles for now. But I am not promising anything for future chapters.
Author's Response: lol...actually I had noticed. If I'm not mistaken you've threatened me with your shoe before. LOL. But that just means the story is getting the reaction I was going for :)
OMGILUVYOU!
but I'm gonna kick his ass! whatchu mean "how in the world do I find a girl like that?" She's sitting RIGHT NEXT to you dumbass!
*sigh* ... men.
OMG i loved paintballing... surprise! she can work a gun! and the whole "Xena" ... laughed my ass off. and i love how he took a minute and checked her out when she was doing her practice shot... hehehehe!
and then... surprise! she eats! greasy ass bacon burgers too! come on... that SO deserves a second date! or would that be third? :)
and my fav... surprise! she has a bs detector and isnt afraid to call him on it! that .... that right there Justin! open you eyes dude!
ok i'm done... love it. need more because now you've gone and spoiled me.
Author's Response:
LOL!!! ILUVYOU! Yes, Justin is stupid I'll totally agree with you there. And I know, Aubrey is the perfect girl for him, but he's not really looking for her so he's not really SEEING what's right in front of him right now...if that makes any sense...lol.
And I'll see what I can do about continuing to spoil you :)