azchickadee (Signed) on Apr 13, 2009 03:43 pm (Chapter 12)

Noooo!  Again?  It happened again?!  *sigh* I should have known things were going too easily.  You have to have conflict. A storyline doesn't work without a conflict, I know this and yet I wish it weren't so!  lol

I want to give Joey a great big hug though for everything he's trying to do for JC. And poor Justin, thinking his friendship with JC is in danger! 

You better fix everything in the end...lol...



Author's Response:

Yes, I've created so much drama with all of them, haven't I? They just make it too easy, especially JC. Angst just seems to be drawn to him, lol.

I'm still working on the ending, but I think you'll like it. :)




saleda smith (Anonymous) on Apr 13, 2009 12:49 pm (Chapter 12)
omg!! this chapter is so sad because it happened to JC again when the guys left him alone with lou agin. This chapter just makes you want to really hate him for what he does in this whole story!!

Author's Response:

Yeah, this story is all about the Lou hate, lol. Hope you're enjoying yourself though.

Thanks for the review!




Me (Anonymous) on Apr 06, 2009 08:23 pm (Chapter 11)
wow im in tears. i have seen a friend go through this but different circumstances. it's tough to hear about these things still i mean i watched the guy hurt her too. anywho good job just please make it happier i can't take this depressingness anymore.

Author's Response:

I'm sorry to hear about your friend. It's horrible when something like that happens.

But I'm glad that you're enjoying the story. I don't know if I can promise that it'll be happier because things have to get worse before they get better. However, I usually make sure the story ends with some resolution so try to hang in there a bit.

Thanks for the review!




azchickadee (Signed) on Apr 06, 2009 07:22 pm (Chapter 11)
Yea for Joey!!  Oh, I so relieved JC finally told someone!  Great chapter as usual!! :)

Author's Response:

I figured you would be, and yes it was about time, lol. I'm happy to hear that you're still enjoying yourself.

Thanks again for the kind words!




azchickadee (Signed) on Mar 30, 2009 07:09 pm (Chapter 10)

great chapter!  I don't know what else to say...lol...I was kind of hoping that Lynn would drag it out of JC finally, but maybe next time?? 

Looking forward to next week's update...  :)



Author's Response:

Nah, that would've been too easy if Lynn had gotten JC to talk, lol. JC's pretty stubborn, so he stupidly hangs onto things when he shouldn't.

I think you'll really like next week's chapter. ;) Thanks for the positive words!




azchickadee (Signed) on Mar 24, 2009 12:02 am (Chapter 9)

Awesome chapter!  I missed you last week...but this was worth the wait :) 

I love Justin!  He's so easy to picture in these scenes.  I love the relationship starting to form between the five of them, and I'm really glad that JC has the guys around him right now but he needs to talk. He needs to tell someone what's happened before he makes himself even sicker. 



Author's Response:

I'm glad that you can picture Justin so easily. It'd been a bit of struggle to make sure he wasn't coming off as a total bratty kid. And yeah, JC's being so secretive...as usual, lol.

Thanks so much for the review! I always enjoy hearing what you think. :)




azchickadee (Signed) on Mar 09, 2009 07:25 pm (Chapter 8)

Okay, I just have to say:  I LOVE the way you've captured each of the guys' personalities!  I know how hard that is to do (at least is was for me...the couple of times in my story where all five of them were together stressed me out like nothing else, trying to get them all right!  lol) 

 



Author's Response:

Thanks! I really tried to make sure I captured their personality in this time and place. I always normally focus on anaylzing their personalities and making sure that everything they do in the story makes sense based on that, but this time was especially difficult. In all of my other stories, they've been friends for years so they had this great friendship built up. But in this one, their friendship is in its beginning stages so their dynamic would be different.

But anyway, thanks for the kind words! I love writing group fiction, and I'm glad to see that you appreciate the little stuff. :)




WhiteSoxLuvr9 (Signed) on Mar 02, 2009 04:26 pm (Chapter 7)

i feel so dirty to say this..but i can't wait for the update..haha. gajhdfkjshfdj.

also, i was cracking up int he beg. - with the whole card game.



Author's Response:

I'm happy that you're enjoying it, especially the beginning. I had a lot of fun writing that. :)

Thanks for the review!




Anonymous (Anonymous) on Mar 02, 2009 04:19 pm (Chapter 7)
gasp. gah. oh my god. ahhhhhhhhh.  is it so wrong that i can't wait for the next update? lol. oh boy.



azchickadee (Signed) on Feb 23, 2009 08:06 pm (Chapter 6)
Great update!  I'm glad Joey's around, for JC's sake, but I don't know if I can handle anything more intense then what's already been written!  lol 

Author's Response:

Yeah, having Joey around is definitely a good thing. As far as the intensity level, it's interesting that you think it's so intense already because we're not even to the climax yet, lol.

Thanks for such great comments!




musiccrazedjazzy (Anonymous) on Feb 23, 2009 05:34 pm (Chapter 6)
i am getting angry at JC. i know it's hard to tell someone about something so humiliating, but this is an extreme. i am really angry that this is how this story is going. i love that this type of thing is being brought up because sexual abuse is out there and it doesn't just happen to girls, but for crying out loud JC is being ridiculous.

Author's Response:

I know that JC's pretty frustrating right now, but I hope you're not too angry at him. Things are going to get more complex, and he's going to have to figure things out.

Overall, I hope that you're enjoying the story and don't hate JC too much, lol.




ithoughtsheknew (Signed) on Feb 23, 2009 05:34 pm (Chapter 6)

It's good to see that Chris might have an inkling of what's going on...fear.  Now, if he'll just catch everything else.  Now...Joey...we could all use a teddy bear like that every once in a while.  I'm thinking either he or Chris is going to catch on to what's really going on.,,just not sure which one it'll be.

Looking forward to the next chapter.



Author's Response:

Yeah, Chris can be pretty perceptive when he wants to be. Gotta love that about him, lol. But I guess you're going to have to wait and find out if one of them realizes what's going on. ;)

Thanks for the review! I'm glad you're enjoying it!




azchickadee (Signed) on Feb 16, 2009 09:39 pm (Chapter 5)
I'm hooked on this story.  But I'm scared too...does JC tell any of the other guys what's going on? 

Author's Response:

I don't really want to say. You're just going to have to keep reading to find out, but I promise that things get a lot more complex.

Thanks for the review! 




azchickadee (Signed) on Feb 09, 2009 09:06 pm (Chapter 4)
oh my gosh I HATE him!!  He needs to rot in hell for what he's doing.  It makes me want to cry for JC. 

Author's Response:

I'm sorry that you want to cry for JC. Hopefully I'm not bringing you down too much because there may be more hatred towards Lou before the story's over.

Thanks for your comment!




WhiteSoxLuvr9 (Signed) on Feb 09, 2009 07:12 pm (Chapter 4)
omg i was on the edge of my seat!  i can't wait for next week!

Author's Response: Glad you liked it! Thanks for the review!





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