Comments For Where Did the Good Go?
JoJo (Anonymous) on Sep 14, 2009 05:47 pm (Hurt so bad)
You're killing me here!! What the heck happened that night Justin decided to be an idiot?!? I love how Lynn is taking care of her daughter-in-law! I'm hooked on this one so update again soon!
kahnechick85 (Signed) on Sep 14, 2009 10:54 am (Hurt so bad)
I wonder what Justin did that makes him and everyone other male around think it wasn't that bad. I feel for Amere though. I know the pain that she's going through. I love this, PMS
kahnechick85 (Signed) on Sep 14, 2009 12:51 am (Chapter 5: Trace Part II)
I feel so bad for her. I can't believe Trace is standing there telling her that she owes Justin. He's the one who screwed up and then he told his best friend instead of telling his wife. That's bullshit. I'm so glad to see this updated, I've missed it. I can't wait to see what's going to happen next. PMS!!
JoJo (Anonymous) on Sep 13, 2009 06:14 pm (Chapter 5: Trace Part II)
*sigh* This makes me so sad! I can't wait to hear what Justin has to say if Amere ever talks to him. Can't wait to see what happens. Update again soon!
kahnechick85 (Signed) on Feb 15, 2009 06:07 pm (Chapter 4: Trace)
I can't wait to see what's gonna happen next. I wonder what she's gonna say to Trace. PMS
kahnechick85 (Signed) on Jan 27, 2009 10:45 pm (Chapter 3: Lynn)
I wonder what Lynn's got to say. I can't wait to see what's gonna happen next. I really really love this so far. I feel so bad for her. PMS
Quincyluv (Signed) on Jan 27, 2009 03:14 am (Chapter 2: I Hate You)
it could just be a two part story. thats an amazing ending
champ (Signed) on Jan 26, 2009 10:44 pm (Chapter 2: I Hate You)
great chapter.... I'm not creative enough or so I don't think I am...lol so um I rather not say what else you can put to this story..but great first 2 chapters.....
Author's Response: Trust me, I didn't think I was creative enough either, I decided to just grow some balls and give it a try!!! Thank you for reading, I will be adding more soon!
Author's Response: Trust me, I didn't think I was creative enough either, I decided to just grow some balls and give it a try!!! Thank you for reading, I will be adding more soon!
kahnechick85 (Signed) on Jan 26, 2009 08:38 pm (Chapter 2: I Hate You)
I love this. I'm kinda curious about what happened that he cheated. I can't wait to see what's gonna happen next. PMS
Author's Response: Very good question!....but sometimes there is not a major drama that takes place in these situations, you have to wait and see what I come up with to explain Justin's behavoir! My wheels are turning trust me!
Author's Response: Very good question!....but sometimes there is not a major drama that takes place in these situations, you have to wait and see what I come up with to explain Justin's behavoir! My wheels are turning trust me!
Vikki (Signed) on Jan 26, 2009 07:21 pm (Chapter 2: I Hate You)
Author's Response: Thank you soo much for your feedback!! I have taken your advice and just been chipping away little by little, there are certain scenes that I want to put in the story so I am trying to figure out ways to include them, so how far I am fairly pleased with the outcome! Keep telling me what you think!
omg! of course he told Trace! but he didnt have to tell her that Trace knows! *shakes head*... like ooooo that makes it all better? lol! i feel so bad! he's an ass but awwww he was crying! i want to give them both a hug. :(
and you're doing good! I mean... you could always leave it as a short if you're really stuck. but I'm greedy and would like more. :)
don't be too open to too many ideas from different people, it can take the story out of focus. just take the time you need to map it out... scribble down a little outline and just let your thoughts flow.
seriously you're doing good... don't force it and it'll come to you. :)
Author's Response: Thank you soo much for your feedback!! I have taken your advice and just been chipping away little by little, there are certain scenes that I want to put in the story so I am trying to figure out ways to include them, so how far I am fairly pleased with the outcome! Keep telling me what you think!
rev0586 (Signed) on Jan 26, 2009 07:05 pm (Chapter 2: I Hate You)
i koe wat would hurt him more! Amere needs 2 ask 4 a divorce! lets c how he'l take that...but wait he still does love her right? i mean n the 1st ch. it seemed like he really didn't want to be w. her anymore...
Author's Response: Does he love her? Hmmm...that could be debated! My view right now is that yes he still loves her, he's just an ass that cheated on his wife!!!haha
Author's Response: Does he love her? Hmmm...that could be debated! My view right now is that yes he still loves her, he's just an ass that cheated on his wife!!!haha
Gigi (Signed) on Jan 26, 2009 06:55 pm (Chapter 2: I Hate You)
I hope it's just that Trace knew about it!
Author's Response: LOL... Trace just knew about it!!! There is no way I could write a story about Justin and Trace having an affair with each other, I would have NO idea how to start that! haha Thank you for reading!
Author's Response: LOL... Trace just knew about it!!! There is no way I could write a story about Justin and Trace having an affair with each other, I would have NO idea how to start that! haha Thank you for reading!
