Megan (Anonymous) on Apr 26, 2010 03:52 pm (
Ch 43: Road Trippin' it with JC| You are the Words, I am the Tune)
oh my this was so sweet and I loved it! The lyrics game between them is hilarious. I'm gald she expressed to him that she is scared of what is to come with LA and how much she trusts him. I just can't get enough of these 2 and this story in general! And I can't wait to see what LA brings for their relationship.
Author's Response: Aw, thank you! The next chapter is rolling around in my mind as I type!
grishy (Signed) on Apr 14, 2010 09:00 am (
Something In The Air (pt1))
Futher of my intention to catch your typo, I though it was on purpose XD
grishy (Signed) on Apr 13, 2010 09:39 am (
Ch 43: Road Trippin' it with JC| You are the Words, I am the Tune)
Read trippin'?
Hahahahaha, the game was so funny, my family and I have our own version of the song game.
Sweet talking into going home. I like the fact that, even when she's moving with a dream of a man, she has insecurites, like any other persons will, in her shoes.
No one's ever asked to follow the life cycle of a song, before. Even when you come to the studio, you want to know what the buttons do. It makes me feel like you really care, like you're interested because it's what I do, it's something I love, and you want to understand it. Not because it's what makes me famous. So thank you too.
...There's so much in this pharagraph; to me is the key to a healthy relationship. You always manage to make think about my past.
I'm looking forward to see how they endure therapy, studio marathons, man chatting sessions...?
Did I say that I'm ready for LA?... well yes I AM!
Author's Response: Dang thanks for catching my typo! And thanks for your always thoughtful review!
jersey_tenn (Signed) on Apr 12, 2010 10:05 am (
Ch 43: Road Trippin' it with JC| You are the Words, I am the Tune)
every scene I read of these two, I feel bad. I feel like I'm spying on their private moments....ah! i love them! awesome song titles...."Feed Me, Seymour" was the best! ah....love it!
Author's Response: I'm nosy! What can I say? Lol.
liz (Anonymous) on Apr 12, 2010 09:01 am (
Ch 43: Road Trippin' it with JC| You are the Words, I am the Tune)
They are just so damn sweet together. Every chapter I read the more i adore this story! I can't wait to see where it goes!!
Author's Response: haha thanks. You guys just don't know how hard it is for me to write sweet! LOL!
azchickadee (Signed) on Apr 11, 2010 11:02 pm (
Ch 43: Road Trippin' it with JC| You are the Words, I am the Tune)
looooved it!! the song titles/lyrics game cracked me up! lol...I'll have to remember that one for my next roadtrip :) Once again, you've put together an amazing chapter. I'm curious to see what happens between these two once they get "home" to LA...
Author's Response: Hee hee! I had fun with it. I worried that it would be lame, and it's probably not as good as it could be, but I'm happy with how it turned out. And they didn't fight ONCE! LOL. (I like writing difficult women. it's hard for me to make them sweet. HAHA)
Mandy (Anonymous) on Apr 11, 2010 10:59 pm (
Something In The Air (pt1))
So I read this entire story in like, four days, and I AM SO INTO IT. Their relationship is presented in such a realistic way, and it's so refreshing, when so many fics out there completely skirt over a lot of not so easy to write about parts of relationships.
Anyway, Serena and JC are adorable, and I can't wait for an update!
OH!! AND I CAN'T FORGET! When JC smoked that blunt and said something like..."do I make you horny, baby?" I laughed out loud for a good minute. Hilarious! That whole chapter was hilarious actually - among other things!
Author's Response: hahahaha. Story!JC cracks my stuff UP! I think he's hilarious. He makes me laugh in my head.
l-dawg (Anonymous) on Apr 11, 2010 10:29 pm (
Ch 43: Road Trippin' it with JC| You are the Words, I am the Tune)
I totally loved the scene where she asks about the cycle of a song. So sweet! I really can't wait to see what happens when they are back at home...I LOVED the song title game...i've totally played that with my friends :) These two make me laugh and have hope that love like that really exists. Hope to see another update soon!
Author's Response: Thanks! I had a good time with it. I actually laughed out loud when I was writing and he put the sunglasses on. I didn't plan that, it just happened. Writing is awesome.
grishy (Signed) on Mar 29, 2010 12:54 pm (
Chapter 42: Road Trippin' It With JC: A Little Less Conversation)
I'm ready for LA!
Author's Response: Me too. ::whew::
SJane (Signed) on Mar 29, 2010 08:15 am (
Chapter 42: Road Trippin' It With JC: A Little Less Conversation)
A dash of deep and meaningful mixed with a whole lot of loving makes for a damn good chapter if you ask me, even if our girls is losing some confidence in herself
Author's Response: Mmmhhmm good balance, I think. Sex takes up a lot of my word count! I think her confidence dip is normal... this is a point in any relationship where the rubber meets the road. You're in it and you love each other, but can you make it last... pile on the fact that he could get tired of her and walk away and have his pick of women if he wanted them is added pressure. There's definitely a war within her and a pressure to buy into the fairytale he's selling. TO me she seems more grounded in reality than he is. She has more to lose if it doesn't work out.
Megan (Anonymous) on Mar 29, 2010 01:02 am (
Chapter 42: Road Trippin' It With JC: A Little Less Conversation)
=) I loved the chapter. I'm glad that they got some things out in the open and can just enjoy each other...oh how I wish the music part about JC was true. Hoping for another update soon!
Author's Response: Thanks! New Chapter planning at the moment! Thanks for reading!
jersey_tenn (Signed) on Mar 28, 2010 06:02 pm (
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Life. Sex. Music --- should be an album title....loved it!
Author's Response: Yeah that'd be awesome. A JC album. SIGH. MUSIC!
azchickadee (Signed) on Mar 28, 2010 03:47 pm (
Chapter 42: Road Trippin' It With JC: A Little Less Conversation)
great chapter!!! serioulsy, I think this one was awesome....lots of things going on that were all important and hopefully setting the stage for some big changes coming down the road :) I'm anxious to see how Serena's move to LA goes!
Author's Response: Thank you, and yep, setting the stage but they have a ways to go. I think Serena's dream was really telling about what's going on inside of her. What she wants vs what she feels she deserves.
PharmDgrl11 (Signed) on Mar 28, 2010 01:39 pm (
Chapter 42: Road Trippin' It With JC: A Little Less Conversation)
I love them together! Can't wait for the next chapter:)
Author's Response: thank you! Me either! LOL.
insecure x blue (Signed) on Mar 27, 2010 05:11 pm (
Chapter 41: Road Trippin it with JC | Some)
Little late as didn't see you updated this, omg! haha but loved it and continue to love their relationship can't wait 'till your next update! :)
Author's Response: Thank you!! Working on the next chapter now!
