Author's Response: *eep* Thanks! I try hard to keep it realistic and believable-- not all the way fairytale but their happy times are really happy times. I'm happy you liked it!
Light bulbs were starting to go off, in my head, dinging all over the place. I mean, maybe they didn't explain a whole lot of his neurotic behaviors, but any child who had to live through that was sure to build up an irresistible preference toward certain things, and have an almost OCD-like reaction to the opposite.
my god! my heart was like... bleeding! omg!
stop doing this to meeee! *sobs*
i almost forgive you because i loooooove Michael Buble! lol! And this is MY SONG! I stop and sing everytime it pops up in my playlist lol!
Head. Over Heels. Completely in love with him. He sang, seriously, without me having to beg him to do it. It was beautiful music to my ears that traveled to my heart and around and around until I was submerged in it. I would never forget it, as long as I lived.
*squeel* OMGZ! and his whole "I love that you this, and I love that you that" speach was just... OMG!
and THEN you fucker! you made me start crying all over again! shit!
but I love you. and yes, this was awesome.
Author's Response: I have reached new heights! I've never been called a fucker before! HEEEEE! I LOVe that you loved it! Working on the next chapter but this one is pretty hard to follow.
"Counting on it," he said quietly. "I'm gonna need you."
*dies* ... I love these two. I do. SO very much!
I love your brain! Omg when she was describing the hotel room it felt like I was there and omg trust me I'd switch places with your fictional character in a heart beat! But wait... we're not talking about my delutionalness.
LOVED the whole Kacy scene!
and ooooooomg shefellasleepontopofhim. *guh*
Author's Response: Lol. Creating cute moments is my hobby. The lovey times in between the fighting are fun! THey definitely needed to connect this night, because of what happens the next day. I wanted to convey a solid bond, because he's going to need it. Anyway. LOL, thanks! I love your reviews!
I was pretty sure that he kept things in his ‘Chasez Arsenal of Things That Drive Women Wild', and saved them up for the most unexpected, inopportune moments. Then he'd bust them out and act so humble and cute but on the inside was thinking ‘yeah, I got her with that one. She's totally hooked.' Well, I was. Totally hooked.
aaaaahhhhh! I LOVE! I LOVE I LOVE I LOVE!
JC was just barely holding onto the rod, his forehead creased with concentration, his mouth in a grimace, his arms flexed, his legs spread apart. Was it wrong to be really attracted to him, right then?
omg! you made fishing sexy... I LOVE!
"Because. I'm gonna take you to some places I haven't been in a long time. I've been thinking about it for awhile and... thinking always makes me remember things I kind of don't want to remember. I wanted to forget, for a little bit."
oooo my gosh. this means the next chapter is gonna be so gooooood! eeep!
MUST READ MORE! *click click*
Author's Response: Do you know how hard it is to make fishing seem sexy? :\ Well, really not very hard at all when it's HIM fishing! :-D I love your reviews, thank you!
Author's Response: I'm trying.... it's coming slowly. I have to take a break for a little bit and get my bearings again, but I'll pick this back up soon!
Author's Response: Wow, thank you! Mission accomplished! I appreciate your feedback!
You did a hell of a job! filling in the fictional pieces of his past.
I've read only another one story where I was really touched with his past; and it was a masterpiece to me (Secret Place)
Congrats!!!
Author's Response: Thank you thank you! I'll have to look for that one!
This is what we get when an author loves the story and her characters. I was waiting for the breakdown in the dumpster, but when it did happen I was all shaken.
The promise of more about JC's issues...yeah!
THANKS it was a great chapter
Author's Response: Thanks for reading it!!! And leaving a review! Yay! I kind of felt like the story was always going to go 'here' and as much as I tried not to, it just had to be written so I went for it. Thanks for reading!
Author's Response: I got it, loud and clear! Appreciate it! Lol. THANK YOU!
Okay, so I haven't reviewed yet, but I wanted to let you know that I am really liking this story! I've been frantically trying to read through the chapters and catch up.
Awesome story! Can't wait to see what else is in store for these two :)
Author's Response: Cool, thanks for letting me know you're reading it! That makes me happy! Take your time, I think I need to decompress after this last chapter, so you'll have time to catch up!
seriously...u're an amazing writer.
plain and simple.
i felt myself in that dimly lit hotel room.
you got me to cry.
wow.
amazing
Author's Response: Aw, thanks ! I'm glad you enjoyed it!
I don't read much fanfic these days but I finally kept seeing this story updated and decided to cave in and check it out and I'm glad I did!
I love this story. Its written wonderfully and I can picture everything as I'm reading. It took me a few weeks to catch up but I'm caught up and can't wait to see what more you have in plan of this road trip seems like gonna be an interesting one.
Anyways thought I drop a review and to tell you to keep up the good work. :)
Author's Response: Thank you SO much for the compliment. It's hard work but uhmmmmmmmmm someone's got to do it! There's a story to tell and it won't leave me alone till I tell it, so....... LOL. Thanks for reading it and I'm happy you're enjoying it. Most of all, thanks for letting me know you read it!
Author's Response: HA! Thanks, I laughed a little myself writing it. I think the Bowie chapter is going to be another good one. It's been talking to me since yesterday.
Author's Response: It's a LOT of fun. Now I see why people started writing. The story kind of tells itself. Thanks for reading!
boooo I wanted to be your 100th review! *pouts*
fiiiine... 101 will have to do. reminds me of the cute little dalmatian movie haha!
ok anyway, back to JC and Serena OMGOMGOMG!
I'm bathing in the overflowing cuteness seriously. the deli thing was just adorable. he had a "usual" and his fav table and then the sexy look with the green flecks which I'm gonna have to search for in EVERY picture now thankyouverymuch.
and then ooooooo the boat! sunset? SUNSET! come on! *dies* I would so rape him on a boat. yes rape... I said it! he's asking for it when he's all sexy and flirty like that *melts*.
and then Thanksgiving! Roy, Karen... DUDE HEATHER?! I totally forgot she existed there for a minute. and I would've been scared for Serena too. we know nothing about this chick, no clue what to expect! but omg she was so niiiice! awww! and ooo snap... the wine! and her going on about fake friends and high school. dude that sucks.
but the whole family were all so nice and JC-ish! *happy dance* I loved it! and ok... i may have gotten a little misty-eyed with the the whole anniversary/lilies scene. that was the freaking icing on the cake of awesome.
and then OH HELL part 2! the email! LMAO! that would be so me... actually that would be any girl, lets be honest. walk away, distract yourself, no no no no! dont look! okay fine... just a peak, yeah just that sentence. lol! then she LEAVES HER WINE GLASS AND THE DOOR OPEN!
I love her.
and okay fine she might not be curious but I AM ... who was he writing too damn it! lol!
the family time was... again... CUTENESS! Karen talking to her on the patio and then the parents sharing the adoption story! gawd that was just perfect!
I'm gonna reread this chapter like crazy until you update btw... favorite.story.ever!!!
Author's Response:
Well Gosh, Vikki. did you like it? I can't tell! HA!
Yeah, I liked this chapter and REALLY stressed about his family, especially his sister because we know so little about her. For some, that might make it easier to go all carte blanche, but I worry so much and try so hard to stay realistic.
I don't know who he was emailing! LOL. It's not a focal point of the story!
Yeah I would be curious, too, but.... I think she's running from something, because what girl wouldn't just DIE to be Mrs, you know? For some reason this character isn't letting me write her all excited and looking forward to being married. Have yet to figure out why. I guess there's more story left!!
Thanks babe, your reviews make writing such a joy!
