Comments For All I Wanna Do...
grishy (Signed) on Feb 07, 2009 12:56 am (Secrets (Pt2))

"You are amazing. I think I'm hooked. Wil be waiting for you..." to keep writing

HEHEHE quoting JC

You almost made me come, two options for me it's been too long like Serena or you're reeeeaaaally good with sex scenes.



Author's Response: Thanks for your review! I appreciate it. Maybe a little of both, for everyone involved, lol.



Vikki (Signed) on Feb 04, 2009 11:48 am (The Fantasy and the Reality)

*sigh* ... i love this story, so so so much.

I don't know why, out of all the awesome lines and quotes in this chapter, this stood out for me and stayed on my mind even until now...

I wanted to mean more to him that than. He already meant more to me than that.

I get that, you know? And I want that for her too... I want her to feel like she deserves that.  

btw .. its "merengue" music, I know you like to nitpick and stuff, so I thought I'd point it out to you. :)



Author's Response:

Thanks love! 

 

Oops, what did I type? I'll go back and fix  it up! Thanks ma! 




nikoleoncld9 (Anonymous) on Feb 04, 2009 10:35 am (The Fantasy and the Reality)
I kinda loved this one. :) I loved the glasses. I loved Melissa smelling him there. I loved the salsa dancing. I love that he drove home. And I think I loved, most of all, the fact that they just went to sleep after a long day.

Author's Response: Thanks for your comments!!!



champ (Signed) on Jan 30, 2009 09:53 pm (Mum's The Word (Pt2))

great story..hope you update soon

 



Author's Response: Sorry, I missed your review! Thank you, I'm hoping to have an update before the weekend is over!



nikoleoncld9 (Anonymous) on Jan 30, 2009 10:13 am (Mum's The Word (Pt2))
I really, really like them...him. I started off as a JC girl and then was converted to JT...but every once in a while I like to have a steamy torrid love affair with JC behind JT's back (what he doesn’t know can’t hurt him…RIGHT?!?!?!). This is the perfect little slice of sin to curb my appetite for JC.

Also, I know you can only post as fast as you can write, but you spoiled us here yesterday, so while I want to say update NOW…I will refrain and just ask you update soon.

Author's Response: You're TOO kind, thank you much! I was just posting what I had completed so far. It's all going to be brand new from here on out so the updates will be slower. I'm an editing/rewriting FREAK, so that when its posted, I'm not embarassed. I'll update again as soon as I have one. I'll be writing this weekend!



Jackie (Anonymous) on Jan 30, 2009 03:12 am (Mum's The Word (Pt2))
You are a literary goddess. Keep up the good work. Absolutely love it.

Author's Response: Thanks for your kind words! I appreciate it!



Vikki (Signed) on Jan 30, 2009 01:44 am (Mum's The Word (Pt2))

girl you can't update this late! lol! i'm gonna have bags under my eyes tomorrow and its gonna be all your fault! :)

ok first... so happy she started therpy, she needs to fix her before she starts "us" you know?

and OMG at the old fan photo... I probably would've waited until our one year anniversary to wip out the fandom stuff... lol! but he took it better than i expected, lol!

and whoa to the umm... yes! now thats some hot lets-make-up-for-lost-time sex right there! very crispy! lol!

but umm no....

When I came back down, JC, naked ass and all, was perched on the couch in my living room, flipping through one of the photo albums that I had stacked under the mounted television.

I love naked!JC but his ass better have some boxers on before he sits on anything other than my bed, toliet, or bath tub... lol!

aside from that... loved it, like always! :)



Author's Response:

haa! I will edit that out, likely. It's a minor change. As for the fan photo, you should see what I had there before. O_o. 

I totally agree she needs to fix her before there's an 'us'. Good, the stuff I am thinking about while writing is coming out! \o/




muzicak (Signed) on Jan 30, 2009 01:27 am (Mum's The Word (Pt2))

This story is sooo amazing. 

"It's later. You owe me something."

So sexy!!!



Author's Response: hee! Thank you, I threw that in at the last second. Glad it worked!



PopDiva (Signed) on Jan 30, 2009 01:23 am (Mum's The Word (Pt2))
MissM, you made my day!  I can't believe you updated again.  I am loooooving it!!!

Author's Response: Ha! Well I've been writing it for for over a week, then editing like a freak. This is just how far I've gotten and I wanted to post it so I would leave it alone and move forward. Stay tuned for updates!



muzicak (Signed) on Jan 29, 2009 11:00 pm (The Day After Next (Pt 2))
I can not wait to read the rest.  Paints the perfect picture of Jace.



Joy (Signed) on Jan 29, 2009 10:53 pm (Something In The Air (pt1))
Yay! New fav story. -on to read more-

Author's Response: Wow, I am just now noticing this review! I'm so sorry I didn't respond earlier. I hope you've read further and enjoyed it!



nikoleoncld9 (Anonymous) on Jan 29, 2009 09:25 pm (The Day After Next (Pt 2))
You have more of this right?

Author's Response: Yes ma'am! Im' writing as fast as I can! *lmao*



CJasmine (Signed) on Jan 29, 2009 09:13 pm (Something In The Air (pt1))

I really love this story! Very very nice job! :-) You're super talented...

 

 

not to mention JC is super fucking hottttt



Author's Response:

He gives me so much to work with, lol!

 

Thank you! 




Vikki (Signed) on Jan 29, 2009 08:59 pm (The Day After Next (Pt 2))

stupid life and stupid distractions.... it took me way too long to get through this chapter! lol! 

The thought of JC wielding a hot glue gun and some rhinestones, bedazzling the hell out of something had me laughing hysterically.

OMG! that was too funny... seriously I needed a minute after reading that, lol!

loved this chapter! they're just so *swoon*! chillin' at his crib, on his bed, then the kick-back bbq and Wii Playing!  and omgsocute when JC gave her a teddy bear... awww!

so since this isnt "the end" (thank god!) ... I can't wait to see what happens! if she comes back to LA or he goes out to ATL? hmmmm...



Author's Response:

No, not the end. I think this is going to be a longish one. I don't want to rush through this.. they both have some issues they need to help each other work out.

I have another update coming. I'm obsessively editing. 




Vikki (Signed) on Jan 29, 2009 07:17 pm (The Day After Next (Pt1))

HELL YES!

 

ooo ... wait.... he wasn't actually asking me now was he. *blushes*

sorry... I'm just gonna go back to reading now, ok thanks.



Author's Response: *giggle* I had to try to remember what you were talking about.





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