oh my goodness! so many thoughts!! where do I start?! This was a FANTASTIC chapter! lol....I was cracking up through most of it and "awwing" through the rest.
First off, I loved how JC was just lounging in bed with no intention whatsoever in getting up when Serena was leaving. Punk! lol...Second, Serena's day with her mom was perfect. I was curious, like everyone was I'm sure, about what Regina's request was going to be. I bet it was hard for Serena to go through those questions and it's going to be hard for her to write that letter but it's going to be SO good for her to do this!!!
JC seriously cracks me up! His whole demand for McDonalds and then complaining when she only brough back one burger for him had me litterally laughing out loud. And Serena being all tongue-tied at talking to Joey? lol...I hadn't thought about it, but she hasn't met any of the other guys, has she? Heaven knows I would be tongue-tied if I were in her shoes! I think she handeld it very well!!
One thing I for sure wanted to comment on was the hug that JC gives to Serena. Seriously, had me melting. I've always imagined he would give good hugs....sigh....
The dinner with Serena's dad and his family was...interesting. lol...Katrina is a piece of work! Wow! And again, JC's comment about dealing with screaming teenage girls for half his life made me laugh. I love the way you write him. He's so funny and real and very close to what I imagine him being like in real life.
And excuse me? How can you end the chapter right there?! lol...the next sweet and sappy chapter you're promising better be coming soon! :)
Author's Response: *claps* I had fun writing this chapter. JC cracks me up, too. It's important to me for people to see JC as I see him.. sometimes serious but mostly pretty laid back and funny and sometimes a little bit of a sarcastic ass. He and Serena are totally made for each other-- he is almost her opposite, she's so high strung and emotional. And uh about the end? uhm... what had happened was... I ran out of room? Lol. I'll make up for it in the next chapter. *wink*
Author's Response: Lol. I do what I can! New chapter is up!
Author's Response: Thank you! I try. :) New chaptah!
great chapter! I loved the stories at the first about Serena!! lol...and Serena and JC together are always hot! I love this story and these two together. More soon please :)
Author's Response: My 200th review! AWESOME! Thanks, I'd been thinking about those stories for a while, wondering how to work them in. I finally found a great place for them I think. I love that she and her little brother fight so much but love each other to death.
Author's Response: Yeah, I wish I had time to send them back to Atlanta.. Serena at least is going back to Atlanta in a future chapter. This story has to end sometime, though.... sigh!
u have got to be kidding me?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?! my goodness! oh my! oh my! oh my! I think I heard the squeal myself...ah, wait, that was me!
Author's Response: Hahahaha! What, what I do? LOL. gland you enjoyed it.
Author's Response: Hehehe. Not really a fairy tale, is it?
Author's Response: Yeah, makes it hard to be a modern woman around such an old world one. I liked, though, that Gram saw what was important, in the grand scheme of things. And they LOVED JC, which is important.
Author's Response: Thanks for the feedback! She does have some issues, but I think she has a point, too. I don't think JC is seeing her point and she's not really putting it out there... yet. Stay tuned, more to come soon.
good grief, what is Serena's hold up?! lol...I thought Andrea and Kim would be able to make her realize she's throwing away a good thing but she's still holding back. She's starting to aggrivate me! lol....I can only imagine how JC feels.
anxiously waiting the next chapter! :)
Author's Response: Told yall she was fucked up! Lol! And she told JC that, too... Though she is driving him crazy. And she's supposed to drive readers crazy, too but she does have a point--- when did JC ever ask her what SHE wanted?
okay...this section, had my heart melting and me literally laughing out loud. I LOVE JC!!
I caught a glimpse of him on the other side of the baggage carousel. I recognized his dark blue hoodie, zipped all the way up, his hands balled up in the pockets. Dark blue jeans. White sneakers. He'd shaved. Casual and unassuming. Beautiful.
I waved, trying to catch his attention but he was daydreaming, staring into space. I walked around the carousel and sidled up alongside him. Stretching up toward his ear I whispered, "Hey, sexy. Need a ride?"
"I'm taken," he said, not missing a beat, and then smiled down at me, a gorgeous smile from his eyes all the way down to his mouth. "Hi. You must have been sitting outside."
"Hi. I was too excited to wait at home. Andrea came with me."
"Oh, good. I haven't had someone staring at me in a long time."
So excited you updated! And twice!! It was well worth the wait. On to the next chapter......
Author's Response: Haha! I love writing him!
Author's Response: Sorry I'm so late getting to this! I have to go digging for reviews. SO glad you enjoyed it! new chapter is up!
Author's Response: You feel riiiggghhhhttt. Yep, JC is not going to be patient for very long. And THANKS, I'm glad my intentions are coming through. I am working diligently on the next update...
Author's Response: *eep* thank you!
Author's Response:
Thank you thank you thank you! :D