Comments For All I Wanna Do...
azchickadee (Signed) on Jun 25, 2010 11:27 pm (Chapter 49 Old Hen)

oh my goodness!  so many thoughts!!  where do I start?!  This was a FANTASTIC chapter!  lol....I was cracking up through most of it and "awwing" through the rest. 

First off, I loved how JC was just lounging in bed with no intention whatsoever in getting up when Serena was leaving. Punk!  lol...Second, Serena's day with her mom was perfect.  I was curious, like everyone was I'm sure, about what Regina's request was going to be.  I bet it was hard for Serena to go through those questions and it's going to be hard for her to write that letter but it's going to be SO good for her to do this!!!

JC seriously cracks me up!  His whole demand for McDonalds and then complaining when she only brough back one burger for him had me litterally laughing out loud.  And Serena being all tongue-tied at talking to Joey?  lol...I hadn't thought about it, but she hasn't met any of the other guys, has she?  Heaven knows I would be tongue-tied if I were in her shoes!  I think she handeld it very well!! 

One thing I for sure wanted to comment on was the hug that JC gives to Serena.  Seriously, had me melting.  I've always imagined he would give good hugs....sigh....

The dinner with Serena's dad and his family was...interesting.  lol...Katrina is a piece of work!  Wow!  And again, JC's comment about dealing with screaming teenage girls for half his life made me laugh. I love the way you write him.  He's so funny and real and very close to what I imagine him being like in real life. 

And excuse me?  How can you end the chapter right there?!  lol...the next sweet and sappy chapter you're promising better be coming soon!  :)



Author's Response: *claps* I had fun writing this chapter. JC cracks me up, too. It's important to me for people to see JC as I see him.. sometimes serious but mostly pretty laid back and funny and sometimes a little bit of a sarcastic ass. He and Serena are totally made for each other-- he is almost her opposite, she's so high strung and emotional. And uh about the end? uhm... what had happened was... I ran out of room? Lol. I'll make up for it in the next chapter. *wink*



grishy (Signed) on Jun 22, 2010 09:04 pm (Chapter 48- New and Improved )
Hot sex scene...I'm so living through your muse right now

Author's Response: Lol. I do what I can! New chapter is up! 



Megan (Anonymous) on Jun 20, 2010 08:47 pm (Chapter 48- New and Improved )
Oh my goodness....that was so hot! This chapter was sooooo gooood. I love that she is FINALLY opening up to JC about her insecurities about marriage and their relationship =). I can't wait for the next update!!

Author's Response: Thank you!  I try. :) New chaptah! 



azchickadee (Signed) on Jun 17, 2010 08:43 pm (Chapter 48- New and Improved )

great chapter!  I loved the stories at the first about Serena!!  lol...and Serena and JC together are always hot!  I love this story and these two together.  More soon please :)



Author's Response: My 200th review! AWESOME! Thanks, I'd been thinking about those stories for a while, wondering how to work them in. I finally found a great place for them I think. I love that she and her little brother fight so much but love each other to death. 



l-dawg (Anonymous) on Jun 17, 2010 02:17 pm (Chapter 48- New and Improved )
Fake out! I was totally expecting a blow-up but was pleasantly surprised at how sweet the chapter was! I like that you're keeping me on my toes! I also love the dynamic between Serena and her brothers. I kinda miss them being in Atlanta (it is my city afterall) but Denver, Vail and LA are good too. I can't wait to see what happens next! Hope you post again soon.

Author's Response: Yeah, I wish I had time to send them back to Atlanta.. Serena at least is going back to Atlanta in a future chapter. This story has to end sometime, though.... sigh! 



jersey_tenn (Signed) on Jun 17, 2010 11:57 am (Chapter 48- New and Improved )

u have got to be kidding me?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?! my goodness! oh my! oh my! oh my! I think I heard the squeal myself...ah, wait, that was me!



Author's Response: Hahahaha! What, what I do? LOL. gland you enjoyed it.



grishy (Signed) on Jun 12, 2010 08:51 pm (Chapter 47: Merry Christmas, Part 2 )
I totally understand her, it's a really common issue in girls, but he's doing it great with the family.

Author's Response: Hehehe. Not really a fairy tale, is it? 



grishy (Signed) on Jun 12, 2010 08:42 pm (Chapter 46: Merry Christmas, Part 1 )
His gram its very much like mine, poor JC and Serena

Author's Response: Yeah, makes it hard to be a modern woman around such an old world one. I liked, though, that Gram saw what was important, in the grand scheme of things. And they LOVED JC, which is important. 



Megan (Anonymous) on Jun 10, 2010 12:53 am (Chapter 47: Merry Christmas, Part 2 )
oh my goodness...these 2 chapters were awesome!! Its great to finally get some insight into where Serena stands and feels about their relationship. Hopefully she can figure out exactly what she wants from the relationship before she loses JC.

Author's Response: Thanks for the feedback! She does have some issues, but I think she has a point, too. I don't think JC is seeing her point and she's not really putting it out there... yet. Stay tuned, more to come soon. 



azchickadee (Signed) on Jun 09, 2010 12:17 am (Chapter 47: Merry Christmas, Part 2 )

good grief, what is Serena's hold up?!  lol...I thought Andrea and Kim would be able to make her realize she's throwing away a good thing but she's still holding back.  She's starting to aggrivate me!  lol....I can only imagine how JC feels.

anxiously waiting the next chapter!  :)



Author's Response: Told yall she was fucked up! Lol! And she told JC that, too... Though she is driving him crazy. And she's supposed to drive readers crazy, too but she does have a point--- when did JC ever ask her what SHE wanted?



azchickadee (Signed) on Jun 08, 2010 11:46 pm (Chapter 46: Merry Christmas, Part 1 )

okay...this section, had my heart melting and me literally laughing out loud.  I LOVE JC!! 

I caught a glimpse of him on the other side of the baggage carousel. I recognized his dark blue hoodie, zipped all the way up, his hands balled up in the pockets. Dark blue jeans. White sneakers. He'd shaved. Casual and unassuming. Beautiful.

I waved, trying to catch his attention but he was daydreaming, staring into space. I walked around the carousel and sidled up alongside him. Stretching up toward his ear I whispered, "Hey, sexy. Need a ride?"

"I'm taken," he said, not missing a beat, and then smiled down at me, a gorgeous smile from his eyes all the way down to his mouth. "Hi. You must have been sitting outside."

"Hi. I was too excited to wait at home. Andrea came with me."

"Oh, good. I haven't had someone staring at me in a long time."

 So excited you updated!  And twice!!  It was well worth the wait.  On to the next chapter......



Author's Response: Haha! I love writing him!



Meg (Anonymous) on Jun 08, 2010 11:23 pm (Chapter 47: Merry Christmas, Part 2 )
I love this story. Just adore it. I really don't want them getting into any more brawls -even if I do feel one coming up. But I think it's because part of me wanted there to be a ring in that purse! Can't wait for the next one! Fantastic update! 

Author's Response: Sorry I'm so late getting to this! I have to go digging for reviews. SO glad you enjoyed it! new chapter is up! 



l-dawg (Anonymous) on Jun 08, 2010 09:14 pm (Chapter 47: Merry Christmas, Part 2 )
Uh-oh. I feel a major blow-up (or break-down) coming on. The scene with Gram and Serena at the beginning of the last chapter? Nicely done. I love that everyone else can see how much he loves her, and that he wants a future with her, but she is so stuck on thinking he'll get tired of her. I know you just updated but I'm hoping the next one will come quick. I'm addicted to this story:)

Author's Response: You feel riiiggghhhhttt. Yep, JC is not going to be patient for very long. And THANKS, I'm glad my intentions are coming through. I am working diligently on the next update... 



Megan (Anonymous) on May 19, 2010 12:29 am (Chapter 45: Enlightened)
OMG this story just gets better and better with each chapter! The therapy session was sweet and so great that he is finally opening up about his insecurities. Can't wait for another update! SOON!

Author's Response: *eep* thank you! 



PharmDgrl11 (Signed) on May 18, 2010 10:28 pm (Chapter 45: Enlightened)
Awesome, awesome, awesome chapter!  Can't wait to read the next one!

Author's Response:

Thank you thank you thank you! :D 

 






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