FLSweet82 (Signed) on Sep 27, 2020 01:29 pm (
Ch 63: By The Light of The Silv'ry Moon (Pt 2) )
grishy (Signed) on Feb 01, 2016 06:22 pm (
Ch. 57: Big Seafoam Taffeta Thing)
Re-re-reading this (yes I love them). And this struck me as the cute and profound quote ever...
"We lucked out, huh?"
KrisB (Signed) on Jul 20, 2015 06:00 pm (
Chapter 36 | In Old New York (Pt2) )
I enjoy their bickering. Keep it up!
KrisB (Signed) on Jul 04, 2015 03:54 pm (
Chapter 27)
I"m really digging this story. I enjoy how you write JC and make him a person and not just a sex machine. When I read the chapter where she confronted him about the kiss, I was so mad at him. LOL. I felt her pain but still wanted them back together. I like how she tells him how she doesn't want to look stupid for believing he was sorry. I can't wait to read more.
PharmDgrl11 (Signed) on Sep 27, 2014 08:10 pm (
Ch 63: By The Light of The Silv'ry Moon (Pt 2) )
I read this story for the first time a few years ago. I was looking for something to read recently and rediscovered this story...it is still my absolute favorite! Wonderful storyline and imagery...you are a fantastic writer!
Pumples (Signed) on Aug 15, 2014 12:08 pm (
Chapter 62: By The Light of the Silv'ry Moon)
I almost don't want to read this next chapter because then it will really be over! I've so enjoyed reading this, and have really come to love Serena and her relationship with JC. Ill certainly be reading it all over again when I've finished the last chapter!
Pumples (Signed) on Aug 09, 2014 03:55 pm (
Chapter 54 - Trouble in Paradise)
Wow! Just... Wow.
Pumples (Signed) on Aug 06, 2014 04:00 pm (
Chapter 49 Old Hen)
This happens every time. I get about 6 paragraphs in and I read something that makes me laugh out loud and have to come back on here to tell you!
"I'm bringing you back me."
"That old thing?"
"...I mean yay, you!"
Hilarious. I love their teasing banter, and how much of a loveable jerk he can be. The way you write his dialogue just fits for me. So much so that I hear his words in his voice. It really works.
Anyway, that's enough... Back to reading. Thanks for making the last hour before I fall asleep so fun, and for making it stretch into two, or three... This story is currently the reason I'm so brain-dead at work. Whoops.:/
Pumples (Signed) on Aug 06, 2014 11:38 am (
Chapter 48- New and Improved )
"Assume the position."
"Face down, ass up?"
bahahahaha. Hilarious!
Author's Response: I love that you're reading and enjoying them! My favorite couple by far.
Pumples (Signed) on Aug 04, 2014 03:48 pm (
Chapter 47: Merry Christmas, Part 2 )
Haven't finished reading this yet, but just had to stop and say Gram is hilarious! Shy and blushing when she meets him and then *bam* straight into engagement questions. I guess there'll be a pay off for them being able to share a room! *scurries off to read more...*
Pumples (Signed) on Aug 02, 2014 09:13 am (
Chapter 44: Road Trippin' It With JC, The Final Chapter: Going Home)
I loved the part about the screensaver, that was so sweet. Poor Serena, it must be so hard to settle into life in someone else's home, especially when it is so different to what you're used to. And not yet working and just having days stretching ahead of her while he is so busy. Hmmm. Think I'd struggle with that.
I love this couple. I love that they aren't afraid to bitch and moan at each other. They are so real. They'll make it, I'm sure :)
Author's Response: I'm excited that you're enjoying this story. I loved writing it!
Pumples (Signed) on Jul 16, 2014 10:18 am (
Chapter 36 | In Old New York (Pt1))
Favourite chapter so far :)
Pumples (Signed) on Jul 10, 2014 11:28 am (
Chapter 26)
NOT what I was expecting when you said someone screws up! Naughty boy, although I had a niggling feeling that something would happen like this sooner or later. Poor Serena, hope she'll be able to forgive him (and soon!)
Author's Response: He's terribly naughty. I love drama. LOL!
Pumples (Signed) on Jul 05, 2014 03:01 am (
Chapter 19)
I know this is a really fandom place to review, but I have to just to say I am loving this story! It took me a while to get into it-- I don't usually read JC fiction, but this is already turning into one of my faves. So much so I have saved it on my kindle to read again (as I know I will want to!)
Author's Response: It's totally AWESOME that you're reading this story! It was my baby, I'm very proud of it. Enjoy. Many times! :D
grishy (Signed) on Apr 28, 2014 05:21 pm (
Chapter 28, cont'd )
Re-visiting one of my fav stories. Love this chapter, idk if I say it the first time around.
