i shouldn't have to tell you how much i absolutely loved this, but just in case you didn't know...I ABSOLUTELY LOVED THIS!!! haha. :o) this was the perfect ending to this story. it tied up loose ends and OHMYGOSH! that proposal was the sweetest thing! i was all teary eyed cause i'm such a sap. lol but it was so sweet and yeah...i loved they had a little girl and i loved reading the interaction of bella and justin, and then reading about everybody else and the changes that have took place, including with justin and his dad. tai and justin will forever be one of my favorite couples. i've been so busy since you added the last update. my mom and sis came in town for my graduation so we were busy waking up early, going to bed late, going all over the city and stuffing our faces with good food lol, so i didn't have time to read it until now. but obviously i loved it. perfect ending. amazing job (as usual). ;o)
Author's Response: Eee! Yay! I'm so happy you got time off to read the ending. *Sigh* There's so much to say about those two I know. I love them and I'm going to miss them too. They're one of my favs I've written also! :) I wanted the last chapter to tie everything up and finally give Tai and J a happy ending sans any type of drama, so I'm glad that worked out. It took me a little bit to get right. Had to rewrite a few parts. Yes, everyone made changes for themselves and I had to find to way to put them all in there so you guys would see how they turned out. :) As you can see, Randall still isn't his kids fav person but, they made progress which is what I wanted to get out. I mean, In real like some people never talk to each other again, but at least they were able to talk. Well girl, congratulations on your graduation! That's great! I bet you all had fun. hehehe. I can't wait till I graduate. lol. Anyway, Thanks so, so much for reading and sticking with those two and for all the wonderful feedback. I deeply appreciate it.
Author's Response: Aw yay! I'm happy you liked and you're going to miss Tai and Justin. I'll miss them too. :( But at least they had their happy ending. :) Thanks for commenting I appreciate it.
WOW! I can't believe it's all over! It couldn't have ended better but I am kinda sad we didn't get to 'see' her in the fashion show. You did such an awesome job with this story honey and it truly was a pleasure to read! Awesome job hon!
Ki
P.S-How gorgeous is that little girl?! Beautiful! And is it just me or did she actually look like she could have been theirs?!
Author's Response:
I know! What I'm shocked about is the fact that I finished it in like three months flat. That's a record for me. Because I have longs that are like two years old that aren't done yet. The inspiration for this one just kept flowing to the end and I'm so happy that I was able to complete it. I know...I thought about making Tai do the fashion show, but I didn't want to stretch things out too much. I made her do one close to the beginning of the story so I was like, at least I gave you all that experience. :) And thank you so much for thinking this story was great. I am happy for the most part with how it turned out. I thought about putting a few more twists and making it longer but I realised that I didn't really want it to be long and drawn out. :)
And omg! Their little girl Bella, I choose that pic specifically because I had the same thoughts that her features made her look like she could really be Tai and Justin's. She has the blue eyes and everything! :) It's cool that you noticed it too. Thanks again Ki for reading and loving this one!
Author's Response: Aw, thank you so, so much girlie. I love that you like all the crazy stuff I write. hehehe. :) I wasn't planning on a sequel because I doubt I'll be able to really get through it with all my other updates I've been lapsing on. But maybe I might consider one or two shorts? idk. No promises. But thanks so much for enjoying this one. I appreicate it. :)
Author's Response: Aww yay! Thanks so much for liking this one. Means a lot that you guys enjoyed it. I know, I felt obligated to keep a piece of twilight in there, idk, man, that's like Robert's identity in real life now...a hot sexy vampire. Everytime I see him or read about him that's my first thought : Edward. hehehe. Thanks again! :)
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i shouldn't even have to tell you how happy you made me with this update! you gave me what i've been wanting!! haha. and it was so deliciousohmygosh. there were so many parts in here that had me smiling and swooning and staring intensely at the screen as if the words were going to disappear. lol ugh. tai and justin have easily become one of my favorite couples. they are just too freaking cute together! ugh. i want this justin so bad. can you share? haha! but seriously, he had to call tai his little hot chocoloate? you know how i feel about that! i was just like, "ooh hell." then he got demanding and i bout had a fit. lol! ok. gosh. i'm sorry for going on about this, but you know how much i wanted office sex to happen. LOL ok. anyway, i totally feel justin on his feelings about his dad. all that mess and pain for SO many years for him to just give things up easily. i mean i'm glad he handing things over to justin and rob, but just the fact that he put them through so much stuff and it took him nearly dying to see how wrong he was, but i mean sometimes that's how it is, but still...i'd be feeling the same as justin does. sean cracks me up. and i'm glad things are working out between rob and maura and gem, chris and nella. man...that was some mess. lol one more update?!?! i'm sad. i really do adore justin and tai. it's sad. haha. i think i'm going to have to go read "biker boy(s)" for like the 4th time because all this talk of chocolate and demanding justin has got me going and wanting more. LOL update soon! (i guess haha) :o)
Author's Response: Yay!!!!!! *claps* lol. Omg, I'm so happy I had you freaking out and in a mixture of emotions with this update. hehe. Cuz' I wrote the office scene especially because you kept asking for it. :-P. So I'm super happy you enjoyed it hehehe. Girl, I've grown to love Tai and J too! I don't want to see them go either but I got other stories you know, so didn't want to make this one too long. But at least the whole Randall thing was cleared up even if it wasn't pretty. That's life right? I wanted to make it as realistic as possible and Justin is a strong guy so he came out ok. Plus, he has Rob and Tai so he's good. I love Sean too! he's a doll! :) And hehe, I love me the 'Chocolate' references myself so you know I had to put at least one line in there else it wouldn't be complete. Thanks so, so much for reading and loving this story so much. It means a lot. We'll see how it all ends. It'll take me a bit to complete the final update because of school so it's a little while before it ends. :). But I'll have more shorts in the future I hope so no worries. Thanks for commenting!!!! :-)
Awesome update! I'm glad you explained what happened to Randall and I'm also happy that Justin is taking the stance he is. Everything can't always be peachy keen you know? Very realistic shit woman! And I DO NOT blame Justin for snatching up Tai. She knows she wanted it! Awesome per usual lady!
Ki
Author's Response: Ki hey girl! Thanks for reading and I'm glad you liked the update. Means a lot. Well you know, Randall didn't die, but I'm pretty sure it would have been unrealistic if everything was wonderful after like a month compared to what he put his sons through their entire lives. Plus, Justin's a strong guy, he wasn't going to break that easily. It is kind of sad how things turned out with their dad, but that's life (in fiction land...lol) and I'm glad you were able to relate to them. We'll see how it all ends and what will come of our A-List men. Oh and you know I had to put in a little office scene before it was over..hehe. :) Thanks again.
aww....!!
Author's Response: :) Thanks! I'm glad you like Tai and J and how cute and crazy they are.
Author's Response: Yeah they are cute! :) I'm so happy you guys liked Tai and Justin's little story. I had fun writing it. We'll see how it all ends yes? Thanks so much for commenting. I appreicate it. :)
what a crazy pair they make I wonder what it will be like with kids :D
update soon please ^^
Author's Response: haha yeah they are kinda crazy huh? but they compliment each other. With kids? Hmm, I dunno, but I'm sure it'll be interesting. lol. Thanks for commenting. :)
That was hot. Hot, hot, hot. Awesome chapter. I'm glad that Randall finally came to his senses. It's a damn shame, though, that Justin is still on bad terms with him. Good thing he made up with his mom, though. Things are slowly working out. Please update soon.
Author's Response: Thanks! It took me forever to complete because of life and school. lol. But, I'm glad you liked it. I feel you on the whole Randall thing. I thought about making him die but that would have been too cruel. hehe. We'll see how everything turns out in the end. Thanks for commenting! :)
Author's Response: Yeah it really was intense. But I'm glad I got it out. School is kinda stalling my flow but there are only two more updates so go so I'll try to get the next one finished to post up for you guys. It should clear up everything else with our characters. Thanks for the feedback. :-)
Author's Response: Yeah! It really was! *sigh* Thanks for commenting. I appreicate it. :) I'm working on the next update so I'm hoping to have it up by this weekend for you guys. Thanks again. :)
Author's Response: hehehe yes there are all kinds of drama but it's not the regular drama so I'm glad you find it interesting! :) Thanks so much for letting me know. I'll update again soon.
Author's Response:
Girl, let me tell you...it wasn't easy getting all this craziness out but I'm glad I did. The remaining updates will be easier for me to get through now. I wanted to make sure you all had mostly all the info on our characters to solve their mysteries. I feel you on the Randall bit. I will say, the final scene that concludes everything to do with him will happen in the next update. So then, when that is over I think everything will be settled with everyone. hmmm...we'll see how it goes. ;-)
And yes, I've grown to love Justin and Tai. hehe. I wanted a different type of drama in this story. I just wanted Justin to have someone there for him, supporting him and all that without all the complicated jazz. I wanted this Jusitn to be different. I know he started out as a jerk but it was for a reason. He wasn't really that person you know? I just wanted everything to not be the same guy/girl relationship chaos. I wanted a change, so I'm glad you all still enjoyed this one. But thanks so much for always taking time out to tell me all what you're thinking. I love how you analyze characters, it's great! I'm glad that you're so into it because I myself get sucked into the worlds I create for my stories. If I didn't enjoy it so much I wouldn't be doing it. lol. :) Thanks for the feedback! Will try to get the next update out soon.
