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MissM69 (Signed) on Mar 02, 2009 10:20 pm (Chapter Twelve)

right now I want to smack his dad a few times and kick his ass too >_>

but you go justin stand your ground fight for your women :D



Author's Response:

I totally agree. lol he so needs to butt out!!! But it's not going to be that easy. *sigh*

 

Yay for Justin and Tai though, it was about time right? hehehe. Thanks for commenting.



MissTasha (Signed) on Mar 02, 2009 09:29 pm (Chapter Twelve)

Their dad is such a humongous bastard asshole. Dude is a little off his rocker. Like I really thnk he's losing it a little bit. The screws, the are loose. He's crazy.

I love, love, love Tai and Justin together. They're so cute. I still think that Rob's a decent guy but he needs to get a grip and get his priorities straight. His career shouldn't be more important than his own brother. SMH. Please update soon. 



Author's Response: I totally agree....hahahaha. Their dad is a little nuts. lol. Yeah, I agree with you on the Tai/Justin/Rob deal. But I mean, them clearing the air isn't going to be easy. We'll see how it goes. Because their dad isn't done yet...*sigh* thanks for the feedback. :)


MochaB (Signed) on Mar 02, 2009 07:45 pm (Chapter Twelve)
ohmygaaaaaaawsh. justin is going to make me jump him. haha. i just love the changes he's making in his life and even though they were arguing his little confession made me so happy. i'm glad tai said she likes him, but she should take her own unspoken advice to justin (open up his feelings) and apply it to herself and be more open to justin. ok. his dad...at the end of that i just stared at the screen and was like, "...what?" and shook my head in disbelief. that man...ohmygosh! i want to punch him in his dictating face so bad! he's so power hungry that he's going to push the only family he has left away! i can't belief how cold hearted he's being, then he used justin's best friend to pull off his plans! why won't he freaking man up and do his own dirty work! robert, i can't believe he agreed even if this is the only thing he knows. he needs to tell justin what's going on. his dad told him to tell justin to stop being a coward, so he needs to tell justin about the plan, tell him he said to not be a coward, then justin needs to take all his rage and built up hurt and just let loose. he's already taking a risk by trying to really be with tai and talked about following his heart, so his heart isn't in the business, so he needs to just say his peace, let his dad cut him out, then follow his heart with tai and his own dreams. i know that's easier said than done, but if he doesn't do it soon he's going to break. :o( people like his dad that just don't want to see the changes that people are making and have their own pent up hurt and pain...sometimes you just got to forget about them and do you, and hope that they'll come around soon, but otherwise don't let them control you and your life. he's just like a hurt old man. and ugh, nella. reminds me of nutella, which i guess is fitting since she's freaking nuts. lol his dad and nella talking is defintely not a good thing. ok. sorry so long. haha. update soon! :o)

Author's Response: Ah yes....Justin and Tai. hehehe I'm starting to love these two. I had no idea when I started this I'd give them such layers, until really getting into it and I have them totally figured out now so...hehehe. Tai does need to express herself more. Totally agree; by the next update you should see that. Ask for Justin and Rob's Dad...man, you guys will get him soon and why he is like this even if it's sort of obvious, sort of not. Rob's still a tiny mystery that will be cleared up completely soon. Justin....yes....I will admit, he is a coward when it comes to his dad, but it's because he's so wants his dad's approval. We'll see how it goes and gurl, your reviews are not long. I love reading your analysis. It makes me think about my characters too. No doubt. Appreciate it. Thanks. :)


Jbear (Signed) on Mar 02, 2009 01:43 am (Chapter Eleven)
Aww Justin is having serious family issues, but yay he finally kissed Tai!!! I really wish that his dad would stop being so hard on him and see that he is really trying!!! Update soon plz!!

Author's Response: Yes Justin is having issues and it's no where close to being over. I figured we needed a moment of bliss with them in all the drama so that kiss was a good moment for J and Tai. :) Glad you liked it. And, hopefully, as the updates roll out, you all will understand better why their dad is such of a heartless badass...but I will tell you, he's not going to be easy to like at all. I don't know if i want you guys to like him either. Maybe just, tolerate him? hehe. Thanks for the comment.


MissM69 (Signed) on Mar 01, 2009 11:19 pm (Chapter Eleven)

OMG!! THAT KISS!! :o

breath taking but here comes his dad to f**k up the high

your fics are like a drug just can't get enough more please :D



Author's Response: I know right!? Yes, the kiss was hot huh? So happy you all enjoyed it as much as I enjoyed writing it. :) And ask for their dad...*sigh*...he can be a handful, but, it's who he is. But no worries...well, kinda. lol. I'm glad my fics are like a drug for you...yay! I hope they're a good fix too. Thanks so much for the feedback. I luv to know what you guys think. Will update soon. :)


Joy (Signed) on Mar 01, 2009 10:06 pm (Chapter Eleven)
:( I was so excited for their kiss and Dad just had to go and ruin it. He has to see how good they'd be together and how different Tai is. :( I won't let him ruin their happiness. (lol really, what am I gonna do?)

Author's Response: I know, I know...the kiss was so sweet and then J and R's dad had to mess up the flow. But I'm a suka for the drama and conflicts so...my characters go through a lot with me before they can get any type of happy ending...if ever. hehehe. Glad you like. Thanks for commenting.


MochaB (Signed) on Mar 01, 2009 09:33 pm (Chapter Eleven)
well...dang. his dad is like a brick wall. that's so annoying and sad. i'm soooo happy we know more about justin and why he behaved/behaves how he does. but the ending of this made me happy and give a small, "go justin!" cause i'm rooting for him. swoon. he's willing to take a HUGE risk, which could backfire since tai doesn't want to be another 'assistant.' hopefully she would be able to see and feel that justin is being true and honest with her when he tries to really persue her. the kiss. hot of course! haha. but now she feels like he didn't want to be around him, and that's not true. i would be thinking he was going to go on the whole spill that i wouldn't want to hear so i would leave too cause i wouldn't want him to mess up my high. that's just me though. lol sean is still awesome. and ok, chris is good. you know i had to be on my toes though! and i like him and robert, but you could've been tricking us so i had to throw out all possibilities, even outlandish ones (i.e. chris being gay LOL) i know nella is a bia, she's already proved that trying to blackmail justin when nobody knows if it's even his kid (please don't let it be! haha). anyway, i'm prepared for more drama that's going to have me biting my nails the whole way through so update soon! haha. :o)

Author's Response:

You'll see more of their dad in the coming update but I assure you...I've made all my characters have their not so nice moments but not to the point where I want you guys to totally hate them. *crosses fingers* hehehe.

And yeah, you guys will see that Justin is pretty good for his self and I know you're all looking for the moment when he stands up to his dad so...no worries, that moment shall come eventually. hehehe. 

Justin and Tai's kiss, definitely opened up some doors for them. You'll see. And ask for the little twist in drama I promised, it's coming. Everything is going to play out just as planned. *evil laugh* But it won't be too bad.

Ask for Nella, man, you'll be hearing more about her soon too. No doubt. And, thanks again for that great feedback girl. Next update will be up soon. :)



MissTasha (Signed) on Mar 01, 2009 08:58 pm (Chapter Eleven)

Oh, no. :( Why is his dad a such a meanie? He doesn't need to be such a hard ass. He so focused on his business and his magazine that he's negelcting to be an actual father. Ugh.

That kiss was so awesome I cannot explain it's awesomeness. That whole scene was so great. Tai just needs to stop being so stubborn and just let things happen.

Now, does this mean that Justin is quitting the magazine? Because I would looooove that. Drama-rama! *happy dance* I love that he's fed up with the BS and is just going to do what he wants. Hell yeah, Justin! Please update soon.



Author's Response:

Man, their dad....*sigh* See, his character was all figured out because it's important to the story so...all I can say is I hope you guys can bear with it.

And Yes! That Kiss! OMG! I wanted to make it as sweet as possible to hook both Justin and Tai and reel them in. hahahaha. 

Glad you like it. And ask for Justin quitting the magazine, well, It's not going to be that easy if he ever had to do it. It's going to take a little bit more. Remember, he actually wants his dad to see he's changed and be proud of him. He still craves for his dad's approval, so, it's going to take a little bit more before he totally gives up, but don't put it past him. He's pretty good for his self. :) Thanks for the feedback. 



MissTasha (Signed) on Mar 01, 2009 08:32 pm (Chapter Ten)
I don't know how I missed this chapter. Where was I? lol. So cute! I love that he's flirting with her because now things are moving along. Yaaaaaaay! *goes to read next chapter*

Author's Response: Awww yeh, that chap was pretty sweet huh? hehehe. Thanks.


alimera (Signed) on Mar 01, 2009 03:27 pm (Chapter Ten)
Well, when you mentioned drama and then started the chapter up with Sharron confessing her little slip up, I was fully expecting Sharron to be a total bitch and try and blame Tai. Thank goodness you didn't do that to me! Lol, I do like the sexual tension and chemistry building between her and Justin. Update again soon!

Author's Response: I know right? Maybe I shouldn't have said the whole drama thing and then just dropped it on you guys. hehehe, no I only wanted to caution you all a bit. But yes, Justin and Tai tension is hot and it's about to get hotter. *whistles* But, thanks so much for the feedback girl. I love hearing you all thoughts on things. Will update shortly. Thanks again! :)


MissM69 (Signed) on Mar 01, 2009 12:36 am (Chapter Ten)

I smell more drama is a coming specially with chris and robert MochaB comment got me thinking *where is a the lysol when you need it* >_>

more please :D 



Author's Response: Yes, yes more drama is coming we may need that lysol...hehehe. I feel you guys on the Chris/Robert thing. But, don't worry. It will all come together soon, promise. :) Thanks for the feedback.


Jbear (Signed) on Mar 01, 2009 12:21 am (Chapter Ten)
OOOHHHH Flirting!!! Lol this is getting so good. So um so we're unravaling the misytic of Justin and I know it's a Justin story, but what about Robert and the fact that he does seem like he kinda has a thing for Tai? LOL Ok update soon plzzzzzzz!

Author's Response: Yay for flirting! hehehe. I'm so happy you're enjoying. It's definitely developing and getting deeper than I expected as I continue to write these characters so I really hope you guys enjoy what's to come. And don't worry about Robert! I like him and I haven't forgotten about him. hehe. :) You'll see soon, he'll be back with a bang in no time. Trust me. Thanks so much for the feedback. You guys are the best! :)


MochaB (Signed) on Feb 28, 2009 11:14 pm (Chapter Ten)
ooooh drama. ok first, the visual of justin sipping his coffee and peeking over the rim just made me...mmm..yeah. haha. and i will glady take on the duty of unspoiling him. he was so flirting!! ok a few more things. 1: when i read about sharron i was thinking she was the villian, but then i decided she wasn't because she would've been had done something crazy way before and she wouldn't have let her guilt make her confess if she was the villian. 2: so now i'm watching chris carefully. haha. i mean...why did he get defensive when tai mentioned robert and how he was good looking? maybe chris is gay and he has a thing for robert..wait! or maybe chris and robert are working together! that just came to me! haha. chris is using gem as a coverup. lol i mean, chris even told her in the beginning that you can't trust anybody there. he's included in that "anybody." but yeah...i'm still iffy on robert because he may have his own motives such as wanting to be the sole heir of a-list. nella prob. carrying robert's baby man!!gaaah! i don't know! LOL anyway, i can't wait to see what happens next. drama scares me. haha. you always give me awesome characters/stories to analyze so i'm glad you like my long reviews cause i just get carried away sometimes. haha. OK! update soon! lol :o)

Author's Response:

Yes yes, that coffee sipping, oh how I wish I was that mug. hehehe. And yes, there was a little flirting! Yay! But now, on to your theories. hehe this is fun. Ok, for 1, hmmm well no, Sharron's not the villian, she's just one of those A-List girls who think she's all that and rocking it with an attitude. On 2, why are you all targeting poor chris!? What did he ever do?! He's been nice all along. I swear, I'm not plotting anything with him. and he's not gay omg! hahahaha. Ask for the rest with Robert, honestly, Rob is a nice guy. Nella is a bitch, which you all will realize soon enough. But Rob, I like Rob you know? So, the way I've twisted these characters goes a little deeper than that, especially with the conflicts they'll be facing. But don't worry, the next two updates should clear that up for you guys. :) Thanks a bunch for the awsome feedback girl.



Joy (Signed) on Feb 28, 2009 09:33 pm (Chapter Ten)
You're adding chapters faster than I can read them lol I don't want the story to be over so soon. :( Gem and Chris deserve cookies. Can't wait for the double date, could do without the approaching drama though. -nervous-

Author's Response: hehe, that's because I'm writing like crazy with the free time that I have. :) And I'm happy you're liking this one and don't worry, it won't be ending yet. We still have a good few updates to go. :) Don't be nervous for the drama, I want you guys to enjoy it, cause I'm gonna try to make it as interesting as possible. *evil laugh* Thanks for commenting. Appreciate it.


Jbear (Signed) on Feb 28, 2009 08:18 pm (Chapter Nine)
OMG Ur killing me!! How do u do this to me? I'm starting to like her with Justin but I also kinda like her with Rob. It's just too much!!! LOL Loved the update. Can't wait 4 the next one.

Author's Response: Eeeep! Yay! I'm killing you! No that didn't sound right. hehehe. I'm just kidding. Well, all I can say is, the next update is done! And, soon, you all will see what shall transpire between this lovely trio. hehe. thanks a bunch for commenting. I appreciate it. :)




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