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Stole My Cool
princess (Anonymous) on Apr 14, 2009 10:44 pm (
You're A Lovely Creation, I Like To Think That I Am Too)
I so love this. More really rally really soon please
MissTasha (Signed) on Apr 14, 2009 09:47 pm (
You're A Lovely Creation, I Like To Think That I Am Too)
She is so easy. lol. All he had to do wa scall and sweet talk her and she forgot everything she said. It's pretty cute, though. He's so sweet. Please update soon.
Devon (Signed) on Apr 14, 2009 09:44 pm (
You're A Lovely Creation, I Like To Think That I Am Too)
Well, well, well ...Ms. Ashley, this was well worth the wait. Couple things I want to touch on right now. First off, I love Kerry and Justin. They're funny, they're real, and I can't wait for them to get into some serious trouble together. Secondly, Kerry is too bad for a douche like Nate, not saying Justin isn't a douche, but ...that whole 'not wanting to be alone' thing, so not cool.
And ... I really love Trace, even if only in a story. Everything he said was the truth and of course Justin didn't want to hear it, because when could he ever handle the truth.
Can't wait for the next one!
And sorry I had to keep resending and deleting this review!
Loosewires (Signed) on Apr 14, 2009 09:32 pm (
You're A Lovely Creation, I Like To Think That I Am Too)
Yay! I actually loved this chapter. Everything that Trace was saying I could actually see going down btwn the two. Plus I loved that you write my boo Erin into this, and elements from the LSM vid. Loved the interaction and that Kerry is finally showing a bit of interest towards Justin. Now post chapter 5, chop chop lol.
princess (Anonymous) on Mar 15, 2009 10:36 am (
Sip It Slow, 'Cause It's So Nice)
that was odles and boodles of shear awesomeness. Please keep posting as quickly as you have been. I become addicted to your stories so quickly , I swear. Oh and Nate needs a good bayou bankhead ass whoopin
mzmillion (Signed) on Mar 12, 2009 03:36 pm (
Sip It Slow, 'Cause It's So Nice)
I love the story but her being damn near forty is bothering the hell out of me.....really. I mean I don't care how fine she is....can you knock her down to 35 please please please... I can't read this if she is that old. I'll have to make my mind think 35 everytime I see 40...lol.
Joy (Signed) on Mar 12, 2009 01:33 pm (
Sip It Slow, 'Cause It's So Nice)
Aww :( I feel so bad for her but she had to have known. No one gets strung along for nearly 10 yrs and then told their not gonna share a hotel room if they're not cheating. Now Justin can come make her feel all better. -hint hint-
MissTasha (Signed) on Mar 12, 2009 12:04 am (
Sip It Slow, 'Cause It's So Nice)
So, dude does this on a regular basis? Like he regularly cheats on her? And she's still with him? She on questionable status with me right now. SMH. Please update soon.
the fresh princess (Signed) on Mar 11, 2009 11:58 pm (
Sip It Slow, 'Cause It's So Nice)
oh noooo, what is girlfriend doing? she needs to send him packin to the left and get with justin, i'on care how young he is. why is she putting up with this? update soon, she got me heated
SJane (Signed) on Mar 11, 2009 11:47 pm (
Sip It Slow, 'Cause It's So Nice)
Wow someone who comes off as strong as her I wouldn't think would stand for something like that :(
The interaction between her and justin is cute and flirty and fun to read
MissM69 (Signed) on Mar 11, 2009 11:22 pm (
Sip It Slow, 'Cause It's So Nice)
What an ass Nate is had an idea he was up to something here is your chance Justin take :D
update soon ^_^
just a girl (Signed) on Mar 11, 2009 11:01 pm (
Sip It Slow, 'Cause It's So Nice)
I'm so glad you updated again, i love this! i want her to leave nate and just go to justin he's so sweet and he likes her so much. they were so cute together!! i hope he takes care of her threw all this because she deserves a better man. update soon!
Keediluv (Signed) on Mar 11, 2009 09:57 pm (
Sip It Slow, 'Cause It's So Nice)
Ok so, the breakfast was sweet and endearing and I loved every minute of it. Now....
WHAT THE FUCK!!! How dare that selfish SOB! I know it's bad to always resort to violence but she honestly should have picked up the first heavy object she saw and sent that shit sailing towards his head. I hope he gets his!
I'm amazed that you did this absoultely wonderful chapter from your blackberry. Great update.
Ki
d_simplicity (Signed) on Mar 10, 2009 10:18 pm (
Don't Think I Need To Tell You More)
I LOVE THIS...SERIOUSLY!
Guh this Justin is too goddamn sexy. seriously. His persistence is so sweet and annoying, but def. charming. lol And he and Kerry are both stubborn together. hahahaha. I don't like Nate. Me thinks he's too uptight and maybe cheating or something, I dunno. LOL All I know is, I can't wait for those two to get down to business and hook up and be all stuck on each other. But, I love how you're going with this, because we have no idea what's coming next or what's going to happen. Plus, I feel like their age difference is going to be a big factor, but I still think it's hot Justin is after the older woman. hehehe soooooooo.......update soon!!!!! :)
Author's Response: Girrrrrl, thank you so much! I love the long reviews lol. And I'm so glad you're finding Justin sexy, I was kinda thinking the same! He and Kerry definitely bump heads, but in a such a good way, right? Nate is certainly not the best of the bunch, but as you will soon see, his true colors will be revealed. I'm excited for if/when Kerry and Mr. Timberlake get it together, but just so I won't give anything away, I'm not making any promises! I love that you have no idea what's coming next too lol. Definitely a few factors coming into play, including age, so you're right on that, but that's ALL I'll say. Besides thank you, again, for the awesome, awesome review! :love
Keediluv (Signed) on Mar 10, 2009 10:09 pm (
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Ooh wee! This is a great start you got going lady! Persistent Justin is ALWAYS a plus. I also like the fact that she isn't even fazed by his apparent stardom. I'll keep reading, you keep writing. Awesome!
Ki
Author's Response: Thank you SO much, girl! I've never done a persistent!Justin, but I'm definitely enjoying it. He's fun to write lol. And yeah, I like that about Kerry too -- probably because I wish I was that way lmao. But really, I thank you so much for your review, Ki! I will most certainly keep writing.
