Author's Response: More details to come in following chapters. Fatima Robinson-BSB's choreographer back then. She worked with them for so very long and I commend her for dealing with them for so long-I heard how difficult they could be (stubborn and cranky).
Author's Response: This is also not finished yet... There will be more for this chapter hopefully tonight... What comes to mind is detailed and I focus on those for this one... My other story was a dream and I followed the speed of it.
I wish the guys can give me a piggy back ride, that would be cute.. lolz Gosh alcohol can make ppl do crazy things, grinding Lance and whatnot..its an okay chapter, thanks for the update. to Dublin it is.. :D
Author's Response: It was a pretty boring chapter, kinda just to fill the time gap between the busy hectic day and the flight to Dublin.... She's only there for 11 days.... There's so much to be talked about, dealt with, and solved...
Author's Response: She has been through alot more than what seems to be...
Author's Response: Her mom changes some things and loosens the reigns. She knows Lynn and JC can keep Jazzy in check. Just updated with another one. Might have to edit it...
Author's Response: Thanks. I still have my N64 MarioKart and Mario for it. Yes, and by the chapter I just put up, maybe sooner than they think.
Author's Response: Thank you for READING. Yes, small world. Nick and his family lived in Tampa at that time and it was just months before Aaron's first tour with big brother Nick and the boys. Jazzy still has no real idea on who Nick is but she will learn when she meets him. She does stay in touch with *NSYNC (all 5 of them), Andi and Lynn. She also forges strong bonds with each of the Carter kids and Jane (Nick's mom), each one is different than the other.
Author's Response: I love the beach myself! Even though I haven't been to one in 13 years this summer. =?( I never really enjoyed good byes. I don't think anyone does.
Author's Response: Thank you. I'm slowly seeing Jazzy grow and change, dealing with everything. There's more characters coming into play, some are celebs (and their families), some will be original. JC seems laid back but somehow manages to keep her in check. It'll show in the next few chapters. Look for it.
Author's Response: It's mainly about making new friends, coping with change, and normal teen issues (Dating, friends, school, growing up). Next chapter is the day before they leave for Germany again. They leave early afternoon.
Author's Response: I looked up area codes and prefixes for Orlando, FL. I know it's not. I wish too. I'm working on getting better. Hopefully it shows. Thanks for your reviews! Thanks for reading!
"Hope I can say what needs to be said."
that irked me so much. no one would say that out loud, let alone a guy, that'd be more like a thought. i don't mean to sound mean but the way you write gives away WAAAY too much and the characters don't even feel true to what the guys are really like.
nice try
Author's Response:
That quote can mean quite a few things. It can also cover quite a few emotions. It was written, not spoken. The order the notes were written were:Lance, JC flipped the page and wrote his before putting it back, and Justin.
Thank you for your honest opinion. I will try to improve on that.
JC now feels protective of her and it will show.
ok, this is very unrealistic. For one, i HIGHLY doubt the guys talk about their feelings that much. They're boys. And i couldn't see a 13 year old and a 17 year old kissing, let alone making out THAT FAST when she just met them. also, it's bad to swtich Point of Views from 3rd person in one chapter to 1st, let alone it's worse jumping from two different character's POVs so suddenly.
this needs a lot of work
Author's Response:
I am experimenting with POVs.
When it comes to teenagers, more often than not, sometimes they don't think before they act. You will see how Jazzy learns from her first kiss and how she feels about it. Keep in mind, she's almost 13, just got uprooted from everything she knows, and like most teenagers-will have a rebellious period. Hers will come soon enough.
She is also scared and JC has figured her out as well as Chris. So pay attn to what they say. Lynn knows her best because of the bonding-Jazzy practically told her everything and have become very close.
