TeamChasez (Signed) on Jun 05, 2019 06:07 pm (
Skin Deep)
So beautiful!
TeamChasez (Signed) on Jun 05, 2019 05:15 pm (
Skin Deep)
So beautiful!
JSC_OutOfSync (Signed) on Jul 23, 2011 01:39 am (
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I just had to review. This story was written with excellence. Amazing writing, that you should be proud of. I loved it. I could tell he loves her and she loves him. The romance is beautiful and the way your described their feelings, particularly his feelings when watching her, was just great. This was a really terrific read. Great, great job. :))
hp5010 (Signed) on Apr 03, 2009 06:20 pm (
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That was really good. I could really feel the love he has for her. Great job!!
PopDiva (Signed) on Apr 02, 2009 12:26 am (
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Beautiful story. I think I just fell in love with him too. I like the way they've been together for a long time but still have such passion and romance and love for each other. Very sweet.
Great writing style too!
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing! I'm glad you liked it!
Keediluv (Signed) on Apr 01, 2009 08:06 am (
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This is so sensual! I love that he just took his time to admire her from afar (even though he was right there). Truly beautiful honey. Great Job!
Ki
Author's Response: Yes, it's kind of romantic to think of it from a slow, sensual away! A little change never hurts when it comes to writing. I'm so glad you enjoyed! Thanks for reviewing!
azchickadee (Signed) on Apr 01, 2009 08:05 am (
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oh my goodness! That was by far the most incredibly romantic thing I've ever read!! Great job :)
Sigh...it was perfect!!!
Author's Response: Aww, thank you so much!
kacavendam (Anonymous) on Apr 01, 2009 06:58 am (
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The most beatiful story I have read in a long time. You have a great way of describing feelings. I hope there is more of your story's. Marija
Author's Response: Thank you so much for your kind compliments! It means a lot! And yes, there will be more stories! Theres always an idea chasing around in my head!