Comments For Wrong Place Right Time
desibuff (Signed) on May 14, 2009 10:31 pm (Chapter 1)
Pretty good so far. And hot! Please update soon. Loving it....
LuLu (Signed) on May 14, 2009 10:01 pm (Chapter 2)
Ooh she's in trouble. Good trouble though. Justin's on the hunt. She better run and if she's smart, not too far or too fast. ; )
SJane (Signed) on May 14, 2009 09:46 pm (Chapter 2)
Ohohoh boy knows her name lol let the games begin
xKiKix (Anonymous) on May 14, 2009 09:12 pm (Chapter 2)
ooooh, justin is interested in her now... i like that... he even knows her real name, thats gotta be like a stalkerish move... haha... but totally digging the story so far... update more please..
katie (Anonymous) on May 12, 2009 10:01 pm (Chapter 1)
i like the start of it! it does sound similar to the other story, but its only because theres a stripper. give it a chance before yall get critical. i cant wait to read more...justin and bare skin help make my days go by :)
mzmillion (Anonymous) on May 12, 2009 08:54 pm (Chapter 1)
I like I like....
Nikki (Anonymous) on May 12, 2009 07:29 pm (Chapter 1)
I hope that you update really soon bc it seems like it'll be a cool story, thus far.
And yes, it seems familiar to Verdant, but hey ya'll, every story that involves a stripper is going to seem that way so just give story time to pan out and see where it goes before we jump conclusions.
With all of that said, I'm waiting for more and soon.
Erin (Anonymous) on May 12, 2009 08:37 am (Chapter 1)
I'm reading this story already - its called Verdant! LMFAO!
Erica (Anonymous) on May 12, 2009 01:52 am (Chapter 1)
I'm liking this already.. Can't wait to read more
Anonymous (Anonymous) on May 12, 2009 01:44 am (Chapter 1)
Not to be rude or anything, but this sounds a lot like a story called Verdant.
Hopefully I'm wrong, though. Can't wait to see what happens next.
SweetTeaPi16 (Signed) on May 12, 2009 12:52 am (Chapter 1)
whoa....i like this story so far. keep going
