Comments For Work Ya' Out
nikoleoncld9 (Anonymous) on May 22, 2009 09:56 am (Work Ya' Out)
Uh, yeah, for a first time, that was really good.
themuse (Anonymous) on May 22, 2009 05:57 am (Work Ya' Out)
So I started reading this at 4:30 in the AM and it took my an hour to get through it since I was savoring every word.
I'm so glad you finally wrote a vizzy and that it included WorkoutJC nontheless. Mmm....and the way you wrote it seemed so natural like this could've easily happened in real-life.
JC's shower got steamy! The sex was good and written classy. Also, there were a lot of lines that were classic JC and made me almost wanna laugh at how on point they were.
You did a great job and I enjoyed it, lovie! Can't wait for more vizzyness in the future. ;)
SJane (Signed) on May 22, 2009 03:41 am (Work Ya' Out)
For a first time visual u did a bang up job luv.
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing :)
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing :)
kacavendam (Anonymous) on May 22, 2009 02:23 am (Work Ya' Out)
The story is great but since the girl in the story has a name I dont think you needed this ''you'' in a sentence but other than that it is good.
Author's Response: You know, I went back and forth with it and thought it sounded odd too but had messed around with it enough that I just left it how it was. Thank you for reviewing though. I'll think about this next time!
Author's Response: You know, I went back and forth with it and thought it sounded odd too but had messed around with it enough that I just left it how it was. Thank you for reviewing though. I'll think about this next time!
