Tanya (Anonymous) on Sep 17, 2009 12:58 pm (
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something tells me that im not gonna like the way this is going. THEY HAVE TO STAY TOGETHER!!!!!
Author's Response: haha i dunnoo... we shall see!
thanks for reading and reviewing love!
MissTasha (Signed) on Sep 17, 2009 08:58 am (
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Why did it take him so long to say "I love you" back? What the hell, Justin? That's messed up. What is his deal? *shakes the hell out of him* UGH! Please update soon.
Author's Response: ummm... he was caught up in the moment? haha. yeah, that's it.
thanks for reading and reviewing lady!
meggie (Signed) on Sep 17, 2009 06:06 am (
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*guh* i dont know what to think about these two anymore. it's really breaking my heart. i want so badly for them to be happy and while i understand why they're doing what they're doing....she NEEDS him right now and with him being all 'you said you wanted to go slow and be friends', it's not helping. how does he not see that? and madison....really girl? that was not good bye sex! .....at least i hope it's not. right? you wouldn't do that to me would you? *tear*
Author's Response: haha i dunno... sure sounded like goodbye sex, but these two are insane, so who the hell knows. lol..
thanks for reading and reviewing my dear!
MochaB (Signed) on Sep 17, 2009 02:13 am (
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I understand that she's trying to be realistic and all, but no! Don't say that! She's always thought they didn't belong together, but they made it for so long now, minus this current separation. When things get real tough she's like "we don't belong together" and maybe that's true on the outside from others povs, but on the inside she knows that's not true. Yes it was a goodbye, but why can't it be a goodbye for now? And maybe all this happened to show them how they aren't meant to be, but at the same time maybe it all happened to show them that they are meant to be and how much they need each other in their lives. She is going through some rather difficult times though so I can see why she's being pessimistic right now. Haha. You can see how much she has changed and all this mess has effected her by the way she spoke in this chapter. Hesitant, nervous, etc. Understandable though, but definitely not the old madison. Hopefully she finds her again during her time in rehab. And I understand that she doesn't want to bail on JC, but if she really chooses to continue solely for him, she will be miserable and be going through this crap again somewhere down the line. Maybe not the drugs, but it's not going to be all dandy. When it comes to your life, I mean...sometimes you have to be selfish. You have to do what's right for you or you won't be happy. Sometimes that's easier said than done when you don't want to hurt a friend, but yeah...Maybe she'll learn that in rehab. Haha. Oh and I forgot to say it last chapter but I will say it now since it was mentioned: I am so freaking mad at the fact that keri isn't facing any repercussions for her actions! Forget those so-called punishments that were listed in this chapter! Ugh. So not fair. *pouts in a corner* lol anyway, great chapter! Update soon!! :o)
Author's Response: haha rehab will definitely give madison plenty of time to sort through everything in her head, so we'll see how that turns out.
and you totally got everything i was trying to get across in this chapter and that is awesome!
thanks for reading and reviewing hun! i appreciate it!
JoJo (Anonymous) on Sep 17, 2009 01:07 am (
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*sigh* Well she's in. I really need her to start thinking positive about her relationship with Justin. I really hope this trip to rehab helps her a lot because I believe there is something deeper there that may be the cause of the mess. I hope she figures it out! Update again soon please!
Author's Response: ah, rehab will give her plenty of time to think, so we'll see what she comes up with! haha.
thanks for reading and reviewing hun! i appreciate it!
kahnechick85 (Signed) on Sep 17, 2009 12:44 am (
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I hope she's wrong about her and Justin. I think that she needs to look for the positive in this. I love this, PMS
Author's Response: hmm... i dunno... she seems to have her mind made up, so we'll see! haha.
thanks for reading and reviewing hun! i appreciate it!
glowbug917 (Signed) on Sep 17, 2009 12:44 am (
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oh man, why couldn't he keep his friggin' pants on? Now she has to go be all logical and realize they're unhealthy. big sigh.
I see what you meant about the lack of dialogue...but you were right, totally necessary. I like getting into Madison's head the last few days before she checks into rehab, because I feel like at the end of it there's this weird clarity for her.
Even if it's a total downer, she needs that.
Love love, as usual.
Author's Response: haha, cause he's a boy. that's why.
ah, that's exactly what i was thinking. she's got all sorts of crap running through that crazy head of hers, and i thought this was the best time to showcase that. so i'm glad it worked!
thank ya lady! preciate it tons!
glowbug917 (Signed) on Sep 14, 2009 09:41 pm (
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oh i'm just heartbroken for her right now. yeah, she did a fair amount of fucking up of her own accord, but the one person who should've been on her side throughout it fucked her over worse.
justin is not on my good list right now, woman.
Author's Response: haha ah yeah... he's not doing so good at the moment, but would you expect anything less than stupid from him?
thank ya lady! i preciate it!
alimera (Signed) on Sep 13, 2009 11:53 am (
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Oh wow, that sucks. Hope she does get signed again and everything works out for her in rehab...update again soon!
Author's Response: haha, we shall see!
thanks for reading and reviewing hun!
MochaB (Signed) on Sep 12, 2009 09:49 pm (
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Awesome chapter ma'am. Really. I mean it was depressing, but it was good. I think she does belong in rehab and I'm wondering why it took him now to realize that it's deeper than a drug habit. I don't know...it seemed kind of obvious that it was something deeper to me. I felt like it was something deeper to even make her go to the drugs as a way out because yes all that stuff went down with justin, but something obviously broke in her that made her choose drugs as an outlet for the problems. Does that make sense? Haha. They really need to get to know each other again, and I hope that happens. I hope they start talking about everything, no matter how much it hurts. I would like to know why she feels like she deserves it rather than need it. Well she knows she needs to go to get better, but she keeps saying she got what she deserves. I want to know why she feels that way. I don't know...seems so..harsh I guess? She does no doubt need to go though. Anyway, correct me if I'm wrong, but justin has NEVER said that jc's book made sense, which is like saying he understands why what jc did. NEVER until now and I was like "excuse me? *reads that part again* woah..." cause that would mean that he finally understands why madison went back to him right? Or am I wrong on everything? anyway, awesome chapter. RCA can suck it. Haha. update soon!! :o)
Author's Response: lol, nah totally made sense... and you just might be right! haha, we shall see.
as for justin... i guess you could say, he's finally starting to see things clearly and perhaps, growing up a bit? took him long enough, but it had to happen somewhere along the line. lol.
thank ya my dear! i appreciate it a ton!
Jamie Lynn (Signed) on Sep 12, 2009 08:48 pm (
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Are you guys in my head with all these bomb ass song choices?! Leather and Lace...love that song! Ah! Cant go wrong with Stevie. Anyway, wow. Mad gives a whole new meaning to the saying when it rains it pours. Man.
Awesomeness as always. Don't think it could get any awesomer...I think I just made that word up. LOL
Author's Response: haha oh yes, definitely a great, great song.
lol never thought about it, but she totally does!
thank ya lady! i appreciate it a ton!
-stevonnaj (Signed) on Sep 12, 2009 06:01 pm (
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aw, that's fucked up!
add soon :)
Author's Response: haha indeed it is!
thank ya hun! i appreciate it!
meggie (Signed) on Sep 12, 2009 05:08 pm (
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omg girlfriend! break my heart why don't you?! remember the whole thing when i said 'i'm sitting here w/ tears streaming down my face' a few days ago?? thanks for adding to it! lol i dont like this! my fictional hero is all....broken and dark and twisty (totally stole that from grays btw). and he's all.....*whine* what do i do? i dont like it. fix it! pretty please?
ps- i may take you up on that offer to be a shoulder to cry on.....would you enjoy a long winded email?
Author's Response: broken dark and twisty. lol i like that.
eep... i sorry! i swear, breaking hearts is not my mission! lol.
thank ya my dear! i appreciate it a ton!
and i'm totally a fan of long winded emails, so send away! haha.
kahnechick85 (Signed) on Sep 12, 2009 12:19 pm (
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I hope that she gets the help she needs and Jace needs to chew some RCA ass or something. I'm glad that Justin is there when she needs him, but maybe he should try acting like he cares about her. I love this, PMS.
Author's Response: haha yeah, i think justin's just a tad freaked out over everything, but he just might come around. who knows! lol.
thanks for reading and reviewing hun! i appreciate it!
utsukushiijisatsu (Signed) on Sep 12, 2009 12:15 pm (
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Poor Madison 8< There are only a few ways this can go and I don't know which one is most likely to happen.
Also, may I say that thank God Justin understands why JC did what he did, hopefully they are on the road to mending things between them... Hopefully. *u*;
Patiently awaiting what'll happen next~ ♥ Lovely as usual
Author's Response: haha oh yes.. it could end several different ways, so we'll see. lol.
ah yes...it's about time he got the point.
thank ya lady! i appreciate it a ton!
