alimera (Signed) on Aug 27, 2009 12:08 pm (Chapter 15: The Inevitable Blow-Up)
Hahahahaha, nice going Maddie! Idk how she's going to explain all the pills Keri planted in her apartment though. Wench. Update again soon!

Author's Response:

haha she'll find a way, she always does! lol.

thank ya my dear! i appreciate it a ton!




-stevonnaj (Signed) on Aug 22, 2009 10:35 pm (Chapter 15: The Inevitable Blow-Up)
lol yayyy!! she whopped her ass!!! :) i loveee madisonn!! i remember, when i got into a fight with a girl and after i whopped her ass, i was smiling and laughing. everybody thought i was crazy!!

Author's Response:

lol yeahh... i kinda love her crazy ass too!

haha... gotta be that adrenaline high, makes people all sorts of crazy. lol

thank ya lady! i appreciate it a bunch!




champ (Signed) on Aug 21, 2009 03:50 pm (Chapter 15: The Inevitable Blow-Up)
keep the chapters coming!!

Author's Response:

will do! thank ya hun!




MochaB (Signed) on Aug 21, 2009 02:47 am (Chapter 15: The Inevitable Blow-Up)
HA! FREAKING YES BABY!! Madison is one baaaaaad chick boy. Love it! Keri got it. No, she GOT IT! Lol justin is beyond stupid! Fine he doesn't trust madison, but he seems to forget who she really is. Yes she lied, but it was a really dark time in her life. He should know who she really is by now. When I read the first part of this I wasn't surprised, except for the bruise part which makes me think she's either seriously psychotic and hit herself or she has some issues with being abused but anyway, I wasn't surprised, but that didn't stop me from being incredibly angry at that freaking psychotic liar. Ugh! Again you had me going on this internal violent rant that ended with me wanting to do what madison did, so I guess in the end I am thoroughly satisfied with what just happened. Lol! And seriously justin better listen to his best friend! Trace straight up said he doesn't trust that girl! I'm sure justin trusts trace's judgment so what's the deal? Keri has him wrapped around her finger! After what everybody is saying about this girl (psycho, non-trustworthy, wants him, etc.), he still isn't seeing it? He still believes and trusts her? He is still being an ignorant fool?!? All those ppl can't be wrong. Conspiracy theory trace? Why how smart of you to suggest that. And I'm going to say it now: ryan and keri. Yeah. Partners in crime. And I know this fight could lead to consequences for maddie but I'm sure she does not regret it. That girl had it freaking coming like no other! Keri will have to face consequences too and I hope that includes consequences for all that she has said and done to maddie besides getting her butt kicked. Lol! I'm happy now. Lol update soon!! :oD

Author's Response:

lmao hands down... best reaction ever!

keri most certainly had it coming and as for justin... well... he's just plain old stupid i suppose, but... maybe he'll pull his head out of his ass at some point... we shall see! haha.

and you gotta love trace... you just gotta! lol.

thanks for reading and reviewing lady! i appreciate it a ton!




kahnechick85 (Signed) on Aug 20, 2009 07:03 pm (Chapter 15: The Inevitable Blow-Up)
That's what happens when you don't listen to people Justin. That's what happens when you put yourself and what's best for you in front of what's best for the relationships in your life. I hope that Justin pulls his head out of his ass and listens to Maddison for once. I love this, PMS

Author's Response:

ah, right you are! in his head he thinks he's doing the right thing, but he just seems to make it all worse.

thank ya hun! i appreciate it a bunch!




glowbug917 (Signed) on Aug 20, 2009 01:44 pm (Chapter 15: The Inevitable Blow-Up)

Okay so blah blah blah violence is bad and should not be condoned or whatever other crap but I smiled SO big when I saw that Maddison fucked Keri up haha. It's the inner sadist in me, what can I say? Well, that and I've never been in a catfight in my life so it was sort of like living vicariously through someone else. I did knee a guy in the groin once, does that count? No? Okay, getting distracted (woof, two hours of sleep all week is making me delirious)

BACK TO THE POINT: 

Seriously Justin, listen to Trace. His short ass is toting around all kinds of wisdom that you're clearly lacking at the moment, you dumb fuck. 

And now that both Chelsea and JC have seen what a manipulative shit Keri is, which brings up the count to everybody but Justin, let's hope he catches on finally, yeah? 

alright i'm done now. i adore you. that is all.



Author's Response:

lol... i was in a slapping/hair pulling fight in 5th grade... so i don't have much to go on either. lmao.

justin is pretty. therefore, he can't be smart. that's just the way the world works. you oughta know that by now. lol.

i adore you too my dear!




MissTasha (Signed) on Aug 20, 2009 01:16 pm (Chapter 15: The Inevitable Blow-Up)
Justin's a dumbass. He's just plain stupid. He's an idiot. Please update soon.

Author's Response:

lmao that he is!

will do! thank ya lady! preciate it!




Jbear (Signed) on Aug 20, 2009 12:58 pm (Chapter 15: The Inevitable Blow-Up)
Ok so when I started this chapter all I could think was the same thing I thought at the end. JUSTIN IS A FUCKING IDIOT!! I know that Madison has done sum dumb shit but how can you not see that Keri is a bitch and wants you? Even your best friend sees the problem so what the hell. Way to go Maddie for decking that BITCH!! And Kate why the hell do you have me yelling and ranting like these people are actually going through this? LMAO

Author's Response:

haha yeah... justin is most definitely the idiot.

haha... cause you're just as crazy as me, maybe? lol.

thanks for reading and reviewing hun! i appreciate it!




Jamie Lynn (Signed) on Aug 20, 2009 12:34 pm (Chapter 15: The Inevitable Blow-Up)
I swear I just heard angels sing hallejuah. I mean damn! That was a long time coming and that bitch needed what she got PLUS some. Have I mentioned that i love you? LOL. And that you totally just made my day? The image of Keri with patches of missing hair and bruises it was just...priceless!

Author's Response:

haha yeahhh... it was long overdue i'd say.

thank ya lady! and i love you bunches too! haha




Hollie (Signed) on Aug 20, 2009 12:30 pm (Chapter 15: The Inevitable Blow-Up)

Yay, Trace has worked out that Keri's a conniving bitch, excellent!!

 So if Keri provoked Madison to attack her... not that it excuses Madison in the least for being a psycho, but since she did it in front of witnesses precisely how is she planning to make out to Justin like she was being reasonable?

Anyway, I love the fact that even though I knew this was coming and as per the chapter title it was inevitable you still managed to surprise me with some stuff. Love it!



Author's Response:

haha oh yes.... trace appears to be the smart one amidst all the crazies! and keri... well... she seems to have an excuse for everything, doesn't she?

eep! yay surprises! lol.

thank ya lady! preciate it a bunch!




mzmillion (Signed) on Aug 20, 2009 10:56 am (Chapter 15: The Inevitable Blow-Up)

I'm sorry but this time, i don't blame Justin...the evidence, the suspicion, I would be a little like "WTF" too on this. Keri is a bitch and everyone knows it but... not many people would go that low so it does seem like a stretch. I'm glad Madison whooped her ass though, dumb bitch...lol.

 

Madison is making it worse for herself but I can see Justin taking the side of "I don't know what to do" and she just breaking and breaking up with him. 



Author's Response:

ah yes... justin definitely had reason to be suspicious, based on recent history and all.

indeed she is! haha.

thanks for reading and reviewing hun!




utsukushiijisatsu (Signed) on Aug 20, 2009 09:30 am (Chapter 15: The Inevitable Blow-Up)

Loves you x infinity for doing this catfight. AND much cookies and brownies and milk for making sure the girl got what she deserved. I don't care if Madison is doing time. Keri totally deserved this. 

Fan girl cheer of triumph and glee aside... FINALLY YOU GET IT JUSTIN. I can't decide if I love on Trace for beating sense into him or you because you wrote him that way but I guess I should thank you because you did write him that way. Yeah... I ramble.

Ehem.

*worship*

There are no words. 



Author's Response:

haha i do love the rambling!

and the cat fight was soooo coming. it just had to happen! haha.

thank ya my dear! preciate it!




meggie (Signed) on Aug 20, 2009 04:55 am (Chapter 15: The Inevitable Blow-Up)

for the first time in my life i dont have any words......

wait, i take that back:

WHAT THE FUCK?!?!?!?! i'm not usually one to demand anything but i'm demanding another updated right now!! 



Author's Response:

lmao... it's coming soon, i swears it! haha.

thank ya lady! i appreciate it!




Hollie (Signed) on Aug 17, 2009 01:36 pm (Chapter 14: Turn Of Events)

I don't believe it. Keri was trying to blackmail Madison again with that rehab shit? because it worked so well the first time?

However, I don't entirely trust that black tin. And since I definitely don't trust Keri, I'm not sure I like what you're up to.



Author's Response:

haha ain't that the truth!

oh yes... keri should most definitely not be trusted. and i have no idea what you mean... i am pure innocence! haha.

thank ya lady! i appreciate it!




utsukushiijisatsu (Signed) on Aug 17, 2009 06:42 am (Chapter 14: Turn Of Events)

Methinks this one's going to blow up on Madison.

Boo Keri for being such a scheming bitch. Genius at that but still a bitch. 

Lovely as usual. can't wait to see the fireworks.

Ps. PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE let there be a catfight in my very  near future between Madison and her.

Pss. Much props to you for making her believable enough I care to see a catfight in my near future. (she reminds me of Spencer, except prettier, less hairy, and more talented.) 



Author's Response:

haha it might... it might not. we shall see!

ah yes... keri is totally an evil-genius of sorts.

lol... everybody wants the cat-fight, y'all are evil! but... we'll see!

thank ya my dear! i appreciate it!






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