kahnechick85 (Signed) on Aug 12, 2009 04:31 pm (Chapter 13: Determination)
I thin Justin is the biggest idiot on earth for this move. I think pushing Keri one of the reasons she started the drugs in her face is going to do nothing to help. Keri may have agreed to help but she only doing this because it will give her a chance to get between Madison and Justin... and that's what she wants. She wants Justin. I love this, PMS



Hollie (Signed) on Aug 12, 2009 02:55 pm (Chapter 13: Determination)

You know what, he talked so much sense in this chapter, and it all got ruined by the really fucking dumb idea that is having Keri play counsellor. They both hate each other - Madison is not going to listen and Keri is not going to really want to help, as evidenced by the fact that even in the middle of agreeing to help she was bitching about the woman. How on Earth does he see this ending well? More than likely he's just going to piss Madison right off again. Madison does not need Keri, she needs HIM.

 

Also - why is Keri still living there? And why is he still representing her despite her being, in his words, "a vindictive bitch?" Seriously, write me in so I can hit him.



Author's Response:

ah, so very true. he does so well then one little thing screws it all up. stupid, stupid boy.

now... are you sure you'd wanna hit the poor boy? lol

thank ya my dear! i appreciate it!




Tash2 (Anonymous) on Aug 12, 2009 01:20 pm (Chapter 13: Determination)
You need a nice big kick in the ass Jt if you think that Keri is gon be any help. She got a motive and Justin being her's is behind it. Ryan us the one calling her phone And as much as Justin eyes are opened it's still a lotof stuff. He ain't seeing.

Author's Response:

lol indeed he does!

and go you for picking up on the phone call! but i'm totally not fessing up to who it was! haha.

thanks for reading and reviewing love! i appreciate it!



Author's Response:

lol indeed he does!

and go you for picking up on the phone call! but i'm totally not fessing up to who it was! haha.

thanks for reading and reviewing love! i appreciate it!




glowbug917 (Signed) on Aug 12, 2009 12:53 pm (Chapter 13: Determination)

Everytime I think that Justin could not get dumber or more obtuse he finds a way to prove me wrong.

All he's gone and done is basically give Keri a platform to manipulate and fuck with Madison some more. 

Nice job, asshat. 

Woman, you're gonna be the death of me I swear.  



Author's Response:

haha well... he's a boy, what'd you expect?

psh.. me? no way jose.

now where is that all in the timing update woman?




MissTasha (Signed) on Aug 12, 2009 10:10 am (Chapter 13: Determination)
Ummmmmm, no, Justin. No, you don't. lol. This is a terrible idea in many ways, on many levels. Awful idea. Keri's still a deceitful bitch and still wants Justin. She hates Madison and she'll try to sabotage her somehow. I can't understand why Justin trusts her so much, especially with this particular situation. Oh, poor, naive Justin. SMH. Please update soon.

Author's Response:

lol oh yes... poor, naive justin. so pretty, yet so stupid.

thanks for reading and reviewing love! i appreciate it a bunch!




meggie (Signed) on Aug 12, 2009 07:00 am (Chapter 13: Determination)
A pat on the back?!? Really? How bout a punch to the jaw? Does he not thunk that having the one person maddy hates talk to her about something she's not proud of is going to do?!?!! It's gonna backfire in his face & he's gonna look like a bigger dumbass then he already does! Grrrr men are so stupid! Either way, you know I loved it! Cant wait for more!

Author's Response:

haha very, very true!

and yes... all men = stupid. lol

thank ya lady! i appreciate it a ton!




utsukushiijisatsu (Signed) on Aug 12, 2009 05:01 am (Chapter 13: Determination)

Justin is one smug bastard. He's far too complacent and it's gonna bite him in the ass later. But hopefully not. He is also crazy for not being able to understand how female minds work. If anything, he's making it worse for those two. He's making me feel worried for some reason T3T

I just have an editorial note. I feel like it's so wrapped up in Madison and Justin. I do realize that it's there story but the supporting cast seems neglected. This is of course apart from Ryan and Keri. I would like to see more backstory development on their part.

That aside, Justin's take on the matter makes this an interesting update 8Db Lovely as always dear ♥



Author's Response:

haha oh yes... smug bastard just about sums it up.

gah... i know! i've been having issues with that, i just haven't been able to figure out a way to throw em all in there, but believe me... i know it's a problem and hopefully my crazy brain can figure something out because i miss them all dearly! lol.

thank ya my dear! i appreciate it a bunch!




glowbug917 (Signed) on Aug 11, 2009 01:47 pm (Chapter 12: Facing Reality)

Yeah I'd like to think Madison had this startling moment of clarity or whatever, but the knot in my gut tells me otherwise.

And yes, Justin's been kind of a piss ant, but if she gets her head out of her ass she might see he's no the completely self-serving prick she's trying to make him. That would be the addiction talking, silly girl.

Loved it, as per, even though I'm all kinds of anxious now. 



Author's Response:

psh... i assure you, i have no idea what you're talking about. madison has finally seen the light&it'll be sunshine&rainbows from here on out.

alright... maybe not.

thank ya my dear!




sonia (Anonymous) on Aug 10, 2009 04:05 pm (Chapter 12: Facing Reality)

OMG i'm so proud of justin right now! he really did the right thing for once. oh kuddos to madison for agreeing, even if he hadn't left her much of a choice lol. i really hope she sticks with it and doeasn't fall back even though i have a feeling it's not going to be the case but at least now she has jutin to kick her ass lol

pms please :)



Author's Response:

haha oh yes... he most certainly did to the right thing, and it's about damn time.

madison... ah... we shall see! haha.

thanks for reading and reviewing hun! i appreciate it a bunch!




Jamie Lynn (Signed) on Aug 07, 2009 11:16 pm (Chapter 12: Facing Reality)
Yay!!! He talked. She LISTENED! BUT...did they actually work it out? I mean...shit. I dunno. Wow. Yeah. I loved it. So sue me. LOL. Can't wait for the next one!!!!

Author's Response:

haha, now that's the big question, isn't it?

thank ya my dear! i appreciate it!




Tanya (Anonymous) on Aug 07, 2009 05:33 pm (Chapter 12: Facing Reality)
something tells me that this isnt the end of it.....

Author's Response:

haha maybe... maybe not. we shall see!

thanks for reading and reviewing hun! i appreciate it!




champ (Signed) on Aug 07, 2009 04:42 pm (Chapter 12: Facing Reality)
cool

Author's Response: thank ya hun!



Hollie (Signed) on Aug 07, 2009 12:20 pm (Chapter 12: Facing Reality)

Aww, Justin actually got it right for once and he didn't follow Keri's advice! Oh I'm so proud of him... now, as for the rest of it, I came up with a little song:

Keri is a big fat bitch,

A big fat bitch,

A big fat bitch,

Keri is a big fat bitch

And Madison is stoooopiiiid!



Author's Response: LOL! oh my god... this totally made my day and i so needed a good laugh today.



jbear (Anonymous) on Aug 07, 2009 11:38 am (Chapter 12: Facing Reality)
omg its about time they figured sum shit out on their own! however im sure this whole thing wont b that damn easy & ryan is about 2 hav a shit fit. but good for justin & madison 4 being grownups 4 once.

Author's Response:

haha oh yes... i figured it was time to show that they aren't complete morons. lol.

thank ya hun! i appreciate it!




MochaB (Signed) on Aug 07, 2009 11:37 am (Chapter 12: Facing Reality)
Well would you look at that! Thank you. Seriously. I was about to explode when she was going on that internal rant. Lol but she still didn't do much talking. Maybe that's good so she wouldn't be spouting off more lies and accusations. Yes all that stuff was bad, but she has to take responsibility for her own actions. I'm proud of how justin handled this. He did an awesome job and I'm happy he's not abandoning her right off the bat. Although he couldve not gave in to her advances (haha) but well...he's a guy? Haha. I really hope she does fight and stop this or she does go to rehab. Either way I just hope she stops. Yay they are getting rid of ryan, but I hope he stays gone. As in no contact between ryan and madison ever again. Keri is still in the picture though and well you know how I feel about her. :o/ take away this whole drug thing and she still needs to be gone or most definitely put in her dang place. Big time. Ugh. Anyway, great update. Can't wait to read what's next! :o)

Author's Response:

haha you are most welcome love!

haha yeah, this could be the start of take no shit justin. gotta admit... i kinda like him. lol.

and we'll just see about keri and ryan. haha.

thanks for reading and reviewing my dear! i appreciate it!






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