MissTasha (Signed) on Jul 24, 2009 11:21 pm (Chapter 10: Devastation)

Oh. no. :( She can't stop the coke. What will I ever do? I need her to do the coke. Angsty Madison is the best. And while we're talking about coke, I appreciate the triumphant return that it made in this chapter. Yay! *coke dance* Please update soon.



Author's Response:

lol... it's not going anywhere soon... i promise!

haha... that was all for you lady!

thanks for reading and reviewing hun! i appreciate it a bunch!




Hollie (Signed) on Jul 20, 2009 01:22 pm (Chapter 9: Under The Surface)

Look at Justin, suddenly being all mature and shit. It's pretty darn overdue, but better late than never. Let's just hope he keeps it up, because with all the crap that's happened in the meantime the shit wil being hitting the fan.

 

But I'm glad you woke his ass up. I was starting to dislike him and it feels wrong disliking the hot one.  You rock my socks



Author's Response:

shit hitting the fan? whatever do you mean? lol.

i can't help it.. i love the constant turmoil! haha.

ah, no.. we can't have you hating the pretty one. it's just not right. lol.

thank ya lady! i appreciate it bunches!




kahnechick85 (Signed) on Jul 20, 2009 01:26 am (Chapter 9: Under The Surface)
Justin needs to get her away from the crack pot she calls a friend and band member. I hope he can do figure out what's going on before something bad happens to her, I love this, PMS

Author's Response:

right you are lady! ryan is a terrible influence.

thanks for reading and reviewing hun!




JoJo (Anonymous) on Jul 20, 2009 12:43 am (Chapter 9: Under The Surface)
I'm waiting for Justin to figure out what's going on with Madison and slap her around alittle to wake her up! In my opinion, Keri doesn't seem like she would let Justin take a couple steps back from her career. The last chapter made me hate her! Please make Justin and Madison okay!

Author's Response:

haha.. she could use some slapping around, that's for sure.

and.. you just might be correct about ms. keri.. we'll see! haha,

thanks for reading and reviewing hun!




Jamie Lynn (Signed) on Jul 20, 2009 12:34 am (Chapter 9: Under The Surface)
Can you say denial? And wow...he's Captain Obvious this go around isn't he? Geez...I am glad the light bulb finally flicked on. God, I was beginning to think it never would. LOL. *Happy Sigh* I loved it!!

Author's Response:

haha you can't expect him to be that pretty AND smart. lol.

thanks for reading and reviewing lady! i appreciate it bunches!

and i totally saw that you updated the other day, i need to sit my butt down and read it tomorrow!




MochaB (Signed) on Jul 20, 2009 12:25 am (Chapter 9: Under The Surface)
Well justin is elated that you were able to stop things before they got too bad. :o/ that's what he thinks. Thank you jc for speaking up and opening justin's eyes a little. Glad he realized he was wrong, but I can't but be annoyed that it took all this to happen for him to see that he was going crazy, but again I'm glad he realized it. That and realized that keri is freaking annoying. He needs to let her know who the dang boss is like now. Ugh. Anyway, her keeping this a secret from justin and blackmailing madison with her knowing is going to come back and kick her butt freaking hard and I can't wait for the day. It's going to be sweet! Don't dissapoint me please!! Haha. Anyway, justin's been in the biz for a long time and no doubt he's been around ppl who do drugs. Hopefully he'll figure things out easily...or he may believe whatever lies madison could spout off if she chooses to do so. That boy has had some very idiotic moments, so I wouldn't be surprised if he didn't figure it out before it's too late. Update soon!! :o)

Author's Response:

lol.. i have no idea what you're talking about... i am a picture of innocence.

alright... you totally caught me. lol. the insanity will ensue soon enough! haha.

and oh yeah.. he's pretty damn stupid sometimes, so we'll see how long it lasts.

thanks for reading and reviewing my dear! i appreciate it a bunch!




MissTasha (Signed) on Jul 19, 2009 08:00 pm (Chapter 9: Under The Surface)
DING DING DING! We have a winner! He's finally noticing shit. Finally! Where's my coke, woman? Give me my coke! Please. I meant please. Please update soon.

Author's Response:

LMAO! there'll be more coke soon, i promise! haha.

thanks for reading and reviewing lady! i appreciate it!




utsukushiijisatsu (Signed) on Jul 19, 2009 07:25 pm (Chapter 9: Under The Surface)

You just had to lure us into a false sense of security 8< I know this reprieve won't last for long~ I can sense big trouble for when Justin finds out about Madison's problem. This does not bode well for the characters at all~

I'm glad that Justin's getting his priorities in check. Hopefully he keeps this up *w* And Keri, she must be disposed of. Immediately. D< Boyfriend stealer sign is constantly being flashed whenever her name pops out. Or at least that's how she read to me.

Lovely update dear ♥ Can't wait to read more 8)

Ps. May be so bold as to inquire about the next update for Mockingbird? :3



Author's Response:

haha yeahh... i'm evil like that, i just can't help myself! lol.

oh yeah... my usual craziness will be thrown in there fairly soon. and you just might be right about keri.. we'll see. haha.

and new mockingbird is up!

thanks for reading and reviewing love! i appreciate it a bunch!




glowbug917 (Signed) on Jul 19, 2009 07:22 pm (Chapter 9: Under The Surface)

Oh, Justin. So pretty, and yet so very slow on the uptake.

I'll give him credit for admitting he was being a dick, and for trying to sort shit out with Madison. But he's still completely obtuse if he doesn't realize what Keri's trying to pull.

And yaaay! finally, some JC action! I missed him ever so. Plus he's apparently the only one who realizes something's not fucking right.

Loved it, as per.  



Author's Response:

lol, you can't expect him to be pretty and smart, it just doesn't work like that.

keri? trying to pull something? i have absolutely no idea what you're talking about miss.

haha, i kinda missed him a little too.

thank ya my dear! i appreciate it bunches.

now go update all in the timing!




meggie (Signed) on Jul 19, 2009 07:12 pm (Chapter 9: Under The Surface)

DUH!! i really wanna smack some sense into him! you'd think someone in this business would be able to tell a change but damn he's dumb sometimes! i really still don't like JC, he's still the devil and he will always be as far as i'm concerned but the fact that he pointed it out just makes me UGH!! dumb dumb boys!! all of them. and she's dumb too for still using!! 

 they're all driving me up a friggin' wall here and i repeat, i want to beat some sense into all of them!

either way, love you! you're the only one i don't wanna beat!



Author's Response:

haha well they're boys... they can't be pretty AND smart. lol.

nah... jc's a good guy at heart, just didn't use his brain there for awhile.

haha, as long as you don't wanna beat me, i must be doing something right! lol.

thanks for reading and reviewing lady! i appreciate it a bunch!




Tanya (Anonymous) on Jul 19, 2009 07:06 pm (Chapter 9: Under The Surface)
GASP!!! were getting to the good part!!! update! hurry!!! LOVE IT

Author's Response:

haha oh yes.. it's headed for the insanity, that's for sure. lol.

thanks for reading and reviewing my dear!




shan030709 (Signed) on Jul 19, 2009 06:58 pm (Chapter 9: Under The Surface)
Glad they finally talked, but there is so much more around that corner.  Things are getting interesting!!  Cannot wait to read more!!!

Author's Response:

haha indeed! the real craziness is coming soon. lol

thanks for reading and reviewing hun!




utsukushiijisatsu (Signed) on Jul 11, 2009 03:51 pm (Chapter 8 Pt Two: Another Side Of The Story)

Okay. I take back what I said in the last review. THIS GIRL IS PURE EVIL. GUUUUH.

D8 But what are you doing with Madison? She's doing the heavier stuff now?! This.. really.. doesn't bode well. I predict a potential break-up in the near future. With Ryan and Keri having a hand in it.

Lovely updates :3 Can't wait to read more as usual~ *hands out plot pudding for your other projects*



Author's Response:

haha yes! pure evil!

ah... madison's.. well... who knows. haha. and you just might be right about that break-up, we shall see! lol.

haha oh yes... now that i've gotten through the roll i seemed to be on with this one, i can start on the other stuff. about half of the last chapter of poker face is finished, so it's coming soon, i promise!

thanks for reading and reviewing my dear! i appreciate it a ton!




utsukushiijisatsu (Signed) on Jul 11, 2009 03:45 pm (Chapter 8 Pt One: Another Side Of The Story)

Vicodin o/ House o/ Love it~!

Ugh. It's.. pretty early here (4:41 am) so excuse my randomness lv. 100.

Yay for doing different POVs ^_^ Very very glad that Ryan's snarky. He fits well in the story. I fits the role of the devil's advocate in Madison's life. Sorta like, he'll be there for her when she's down but I think when the time comes, he'll give a proper kick in the right direction~

Though the fan girl in me is cheering his defensiveness of Madison and his apparent hate for Keri, the odd effect is I more than ever would like to hear her side of things. It just makes me curious.

Soooo I see you have another part and I'll go trot off to read that and comment more from there ~~~/o.



Author's Response:

haha no worries my dear! i do love the randomness! haha

oh yeah... ryan definitely fits the devil's advocate role in Madison's life... so we'll see where that goes. haha.

and yep... the next part is all keri.

thanks for reading and reviewing hun! i appreciate it a bunch!




glowbug917 (Signed) on Jul 11, 2009 12:54 am (Chapter 8 Pt Two: Another Side Of The Story)

i don't really have the words to properly articulate what a conniving little cunt keri is - oh wait apparently i did! 

ugh. do not like. also if ryan's trying to CALM madison down what's he doing giving her coke? kind of counterproductive, idiot. also idiotic - being a fucking enabler.

bah, i'm so pissed right now. at everyone in this story. i still love you though.  



Author's Response:

lmao! conniving little cunt pretty much sums it up!

ah, he's a total enabler and that's the last damn thing she needs, but then again... she seems to have her head way too far up her ass to notice anything at the moment.

haha, as long as you still love me, i must be doing something right! lol.

thanks for reading and reviewing my dear! you know i appreciate it bunches!






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