kahnechick85 (Signed) on Jul 09, 2009 06:18 pm (Chapter 8 Pt One: Another Side Of The Story)
Him giving her pills is going to do nothing to help her at all. I agree that Justin is an idiot. I love this, PMS

Author's Response:

ah, exactly! by giving her pills, he's just made a bad situation worse, so we'll see what happens!

and oh yeah.. justin is a major idiot. lol.

thanks for reading and reviewing hun! i appreciate it a bunch!



sonia (Anonymous) on Jul 09, 2009 05:07 pm (Chapter 8 Pt One: Another Side Of The Story)

ryan ryan ryan... don't you know that adding a heartbroken woman to pills doesn't usually make the best equations?

and then say that she needs to pull out from this mess by herself, while YOU are the one who started it all?

 i definetly do not like ryan, but i think that he's right about justin. when you think about it, justin does treat maddison like a child and if i were her, i would've dumped his ass a long time ago and never looked back. that said, i really want them to get back together even if justin is currently an asshole so please don't do it lol

anyway, it's really a great story so please update soon :)



Author's Response:

haha... very true! he oughta know you don't give the unstable people drugs. lol.

and right again... he's kind of putting the blame on madison when he pretty much caused the problem to begin with.

haha.. ah... we'll see! lol. you know i'm evil and enjoy torturing you guys! haha.

thanks for reading and reviewing love! i appreciate it a bunch!



Jbear (Anonymous) on Jul 09, 2009 02:21 pm (Chapter 8 Pt One: Another Side Of The Story)
Ok so I have decided that I don't like Ryan. He is a prick and he needs to find out all the facts before he goes passing judgement on ppl. I'll give him that he can be pissed at Justin about the arrangment, but dude you came in after all these relationships were formed and now u want 2 have an opinon that everybody is all drama and that Madsion is just a victim. Please!!!! Madsion has just as much drama as all the rest of them and it's just as much her falut things are bad as it is Justins. Ok I'm done ranting, great update!! LOL

Author's Response:

LOL! i LOVE ranting, so rant away my dear! haha.

and right you are... madison is just as full of drama as the rest of em, maybe even a little more so. haha.

thanks for reading and reviewing hun! i appreciate it a bunch!



MochaB (Signed) on Jul 09, 2009 02:04 pm (Chapter 8 Pt One: Another Side Of The Story)
That was awesome. Getting to hear what ryan is thinking; I really enjoyed that. It's nice to hear what he thinks of keri (since he's not attached to justin in any way), and nice to hear about his reasons behind giving her the pills and what he thinks of justin. When I read it I was like dang that's harsh, but after it settled I didn't think it was. He has his reasons for thinking terribly of justin so he's entitled to his opinion. He cares for madison, although I wonder if it could go deeper than friendly caring later, but he cares for her and naturally if he sees somebody treating her badly he's not going to like them. So yeah. Makes sense. Anyway, I'm worried for madison. Update soon! :o)

Author's Response:

haha yay! i'm glad this seems to come across the way i wanted it to. i wanted ryan to be the semi-likable bad guy, so yay! haha.

thanks for reading and reviewing lady! i appreciate it a bunch!



glowbug917 (Signed) on Jul 09, 2009 01:28 pm (Chapter 8 Pt One: Another Side Of The Story)

I like Ryan. And I like Ryan's opinion of Keri. And I like the fact that he seems to genuinely care about Madison. I especially like the fact that, while it never occurred to me beforehand, Justin does have a habit of treating Madison like she's some nuisance he has to put up with. And now I want to smack Justin.

I do not, however, like the fact that Ryan is an idiot and keeps giving her Vicodin. Does he not realize it's only charming on Hugh Laurie?? 

okay, I'm done now I promise. 



Author's Response:

haha yesss! i'm glad it worked. i wanted ryan to kind of straddle the villian/good guy line, and it sounds like it came across the way i wanted it to, so yay!

LOL! oh god... how awesome is house, seriously?!?!

haha... thank ya lady... you know i love your rants!



a_moments_grace (Signed) on Jul 09, 2009 12:36 pm (Chapter 8 Pt One: Another Side Of The Story)

I totally agree with the opinion of Sir Ryan and I think he should knock JT on his ass and put some sense into the boy. 

There, I feel better now :)



Author's Response:

haha oh yes... justin could use some sense knocked into him, that's for sure!

thanks for reading and reviewing love! i appreciate it a ton!



mzmillion (Signed) on Jul 09, 2009 09:08 am (Chapter 8 Pt One: Another Side Of The Story)
hmmm I don't know how I feel about Ryan's POV, he seems genuine, with a little crush so far but he should be blaming himself for introducing her to the pills not blaming her to be weak to them... I still like him so far, because he seems honest and in his position, Justin looks like an ass who mistreats Madison so I think he is valid in his opinion of Justin. If there is a Keri's POV, I don't think I'll like that...lol. I like Justin/Madison POV's....lol.

Author's Response:

ah, very true! glad somebody caught that part! lol.

and that's exactly what i wanted... i wanted ryan to be the bad guy, but i still wanted there to be a likability factor to him, so i'm glad it worked! and justin is most definitely looking like a douche right about now. lol.

haha oh yes.. keri's is next, then it's back to business as usual, i promise!

thanks for reading and reviewing hun! i appreciate it!



Hollie (Signed) on Jul 09, 2009 08:32 am (Chapter 8 Pt One: Another Side Of The Story)

It's interesting to see that Madison's not the only one with a low opinion of Keri. Granted, he's Madison's pal so may be a little biased, but it's interesting.

His self justifications are pretty empty, but then he seems to acknowledge that. So all in all, I shouldn't like him but I do.

 

He still gets a huge smack upside the head for the drug supplying though.



Author's Response:

haha, oh yeah... he's totally biased.

ah, that's exactly what i wanted! haha. i wanted him to be this semi-likeable bad guy, so i'm glad it worked!

lol and it's a well deserved smack, and i'm sure he'll deserve a few more.

thanks for reading and reviewing my dear! i appreciate it a ton!



meggie (Signed) on Jul 09, 2009 06:14 am (Chapter 8 Pt One: Another Side Of The Story)
Kate Kate kate...I like this whole from another point of view thing but did it have to be the douchbag, wanna be drug dealer?!? I serisouly hate Ryan now- nothing can change that. Please fix thus because it hurts my heart- you wouldn't want that kind of guilt on you would you? Me all broken hearted? Yea, didn't think so!

Author's Response:

hahah, of course it had to be the douche bag, wanna be drug dealer! lol. and i'm sure you can guess who the next one is! haha.

lol... ah no... i don't want that guilt, but i just can't help myself! haha.

thanks for reading and reviewing lady! i appreciate it a bunch!



MissTasha (Signed) on Jul 09, 2009 03:43 am (Chapter 8 Pt One: Another Side Of The Story)
I love you. I really do. I love your stories. Okay? I just want to get that out? Okay? Okay? I love you, just remember that. idontllikethenewpointofviewthingmenolikeykthanks *slinks off* You did fulfill my wish of Madison developing a drug habit, though. Did I mention that I love you? Please update soon.

Author's Response:

haha... there isn't a thing wrong with that my dear! i actually really appreciate the honesty and i'm sorry you didn't enjoy it! lol, but i promise... there's only one more, then it's back to business as usual!

and i love you too you crazy woman! lol.

thanks for reading and reviewing hun! i appreciate it a bunch!



Jamie Lynn (Signed) on Jul 07, 2009 11:03 pm (Chapter 7: Old Habits Die Hard)
Fucking hell. Woman are you trying to give me a cornary? A maybe breakup, and then popping pills? Damn. I need a drink.

Girl, I'm thinking that I am so loving where you might be heading with this.

Author's Response:

LOL! i swear... i wasn't trying to give you a cornary! haha. and we'll see where it goes.. that's all i'm saying! haha.

thanks for reading and reviewing love! i appreciate it a ton!



sonia (Anonymous) on Jul 06, 2009 02:10 pm (Chapter 7: Old Habits Die Hard)

holy hell you're killin' me here girl, lol! the shit is getting worse and her taking drugs doesn't help either. but i still think justin is in the wrong and doesn't seem to grasp that concept, so like somebody said maybe he needs the breakup to learn his lesson

so please update soon i really need to know what will happen. pleeeeeeeaaaaaase lol



sonia (Anonymous) on Jul 06, 2009 02:10 pm (Chapter 7: Old Habits Die Hard)

holy hell you're killin' me here girl, lol! the shit is getting worse and her taking drugs doesn't help either. but i still think justin is in the wrong and doesn't seem to grasp that concept, so like somebody said maybe he needs the breakup to learn his lesson

so please update soon i really need to know what will happen. pleeeeeeeaaaaaase lol



Author's Response:

haha, i know... i am evil, i just couldn't help myself! lol.

but... yeah... things are about to blow up and it won't be pretty, that much is for sure.

haha, thanks for reading and reviewing love! i appreciate it a bunch!



Hollie (Signed) on Jul 06, 2009 12:19 pm (Chapter 7: Old Habits Die Hard)

Well, everybody's been saying it in the reviews and he just proved it - Justin clearly seems to view Madison as some petty child he has to placate all the time. Apart from beign grossly unfair and massively abdicating responsibility for his part in everything, what kind of way is that to behave towards your girlfriend?

And I'm glad to see Madison has been reading my comments because she took the words right of my mouth *lol* Wish I could say i thought the drugs were as smart a plan. 



Author's Response:

haha very true, he seems to have jumped on the asshole train and it doesn't look like that'll be stopping any time soon.

lol, she can be smart every once in awhile... not very often, but it does happen! lol. and the drugs... well... gah, we'll see! haha.

thanks for reading and reviewing lady! i appreciate it a bunch!



champ (Signed) on Jul 06, 2009 09:28 am (Chapter 7: Old Habits Die Hard)
great update! hope you update soon

Author's Response: thank ya my dear, and it's coming... i promise!




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