Jbear (Signed) on Jul 01, 2009 02:57 pm (Chapter 6: The Aftermath)
So when I started reading this chapter I was thinking about how much I was gonna bitch about how stupid was however after getting to the end I just cant say anything but you rock at telling stories Kate. This chapter was awesome.

Author's Response: haha. awww! thank you! i really appreciate that, you guys are the reason i keep coming up with all this insanity, so hearing that is definitely awesome!



Tanya (Anonymous) on Jul 01, 2009 12:45 pm (Chapter 6: The Aftermath)
ok so i totally thought that she was going to break up with him, i wouldnt blame her, he deserves it.  but something tells me that this is just a little fight leading on to a much bigger one.

Author's Response:

haha... you just might be right!

thanks for reading and reviewing love, i appreciate it a bunch!




a_moments_grace (Signed) on Jul 01, 2009 12:28 pm (Cast)

Gah....Think I have to do this twice...

anyway, as I was saying...Keri needs to pay some dues before she can come riding in on JT's coat-tails and asking for an opportunity like this.  She's new to the business, she has NO RIGHT to think she deserves a shot like this yet.  She's still got a lot of work to do!

And I'm so proud of Mad for standing up like that.  oh, and the slap was amazing, it made me feel a lot better!! :)



Author's Response:

haha oh yeah... keri definitely thinks a little too highly of herself, but who knows... somebody might knock her down a peg or two. we'll see!

lol good! i'm glad it worked! he definitely deserved to be slapped around a little.

thanks for reading and reviewing hun! i appreciate it a bunch!




mzmillion (Signed) on Jul 01, 2009 09:44 am (Chapter 6: The Aftermath)

Justin is a moron, and again, I stand my saying of "he talks about Madison like he hates dealing with her and that she is a idiot" most of the time.

I see the business aspect and I see that he wants to do right by Keri but he could have kept that tidbit from her or even approached Madison about it first to talk it over considering that she is obsessed with the band. He showed no compassion towards her and then to use Ryan's stuff was just dumb as hell on his part.... 

The slap was definitely called for and so is the break....gives him a chance to be scared she is going to leave him.....asshole!

Again, I see all this turning into Madison running into the arms of another guy, be it JC or Ryan because she is soo pissed at him, not that it would be right but shit....



Author's Response:

ah... right you are! and he does feel that way, to a certain extent, and it'll be blowing up in his face fairly soon, mark my words. haha.

exactly! he didn't have to tell keri he turned the offer down, but that just goes to his own stupidity. he just isn't using his brain and it's already starting to bite him in the ass.

haha oh yeah... there's a major blow up in their very near future, that's for sure!

thanks for reading and reviewing hun! i appreciate it a bunch!




sonia (Anonymous) on Jul 01, 2009 05:12 am (Chapter 6: The Aftermath)
i do think justin is an asshole for doing this to madisson but i have sympathy for him. i hope they'll work things out

Author's Response:

ah yes... that's exactly what i wanted! i wanted him to be an idiot, but i wanted him to get a bit of sympathy too, so i'm glad that worked!

thanks for reading and reviewing hun, i appreciate it a bunch!




meggie (Signed) on Jul 01, 2009 04:18 am (Chapter 6: The Aftermath)
You really are breaking heart here! I LOVE these two & I almost swallowed my tongue when she slapped him! For the love of god, this needs to be fixed but knowing you, it's only going to get worse & now I'm sad! But in a good way because I can't wait for more

Author's Response:

haha, you know me too well!

and as much as i love both of them... it's just all sorts of fun to put them through a bunch of crap. lol, so yeah... things will probably get much worse before they get better. haha.

thanks for reading and reviewing my dear! i appreciate it a ton!




utsukushiijisatsu (Signed) on Jul 01, 2009 03:40 am (Chapter 6: The Aftermath)

Before I go into a rant like I usually do with anything that involves this story, I would like to say that you just caused me a blonde moment XD; I got sooooo excited over the update that I momentarily stopped focusing on anything but it. *U*; Ahem. Anyway...

FINALLY.

The one thing Justin has going for him is that he knows what a pathetic excuse for a boyfriend he is. Partially, I can't blame him for getting involved or Keri for wanting to be part of it but I seriously fault him for not talking to Madison about it. He could have at least eased her into the idea instead of slapping her in the face with it. JC must be feeling vindicated at the moment. Also, I kinda expected worse from Madison given what he did. I feel as though she has matured somehow, especially how she managed not to confront him or Keri the first moment she got. I hope Justin manages to make it up to her :<

As usual awesome update definitely worth the blonde moment8D We get to see what Justin's thinking and at least he wasn't a total asshole. Also props for the confrontation though I think Madison should have broken his nose. Can't wait to see what happens next. If I might suggest, though I doubt it'd be feasible to do it because the structure of the narrative is already set this way, maybe a few chapters from the other characters' perspective may give a different dimension to the story. Just an idea really ^^; I don't have any qualms about Justin and Madison's perspective but it's just that I'm curious to find out what the others think.

Can't wait to read more and here's to hoping you cause me more blonde moments in the near future o/



Author's Response:

lol! now that just makes me feel all kinds of special!

and that is exactly what i wanted to come across with her reaction, so i'm definitely glad that worked. she's done quite a bit of growing up since vegas, and i'm really glad it's showing!

ya know... i've actually been tossing that idea around the last couple days. i did that with wonderwall and it seemed to work out fairly well, so i just might try it with this one.

haha oh yes, i'd love to cause more blonde moments like that! haha.

thanks for reading and reviewing hun! i appreciate it a bunch!




MissTasha (Signed) on Jul 01, 2009 12:17 am (Chapter 6: The Aftermath)

You're goddamn right it could be the beginning of the end. You're god. damn. right. Too bad you were too stupid to think of that possibilty in the first place. I want him to DIAF right now. Ugh. SMH. What a two-timing bastard. He's such a dumb ass. Ugh! Please update soon.



Author's Response:

haha yeah... dumb ass pretty much sums it up. lol.

thanks for reading and reviewing lady! i appreciate it a bunch!




kahnechick85 (Signed) on Jul 01, 2009 12:14 am (Chapter 6: The Aftermath)
And Justin has no one to blame it on but himself. What an ass. He was all over JC about it and he's doing the same thing. I hope that he pulls his head out of his ass before he throws their relationship away anymore. I really don't like Keri, she's no good. I love this, PMS

Author's Response:

haha, right you are! i dunno... he seems to figure things out when it's too late, so we shall see! haha.

thanks for reading and reviewing love! i appreciate it a ton!




glowbug917 (Signed) on Jul 01, 2009 12:14 am (Chapter 6: The Aftermath)

All you're doing, darling, is confirming my theory that the entire male population is full of dipshits. 

So like I said, the whole performing with Keri thing, forgivable considering the circumstances and all but taking Ryan's arrangement, still on the list of bad and shitty things to never ever do if you have half a brain cell.

Though his utter pathetic-ness is kind of adorable.

seriously dude, you're on a roll! 



Author's Response:

lol... oh yeah... i'm a firm believer in that theory myself. haha.

justin just... isn't using his brain, that's the only way to explain it. and i'm glad the pathetic-ness came across the way i wanted it to!

haha, thank ya my dear!




im (Anonymous) on Jul 01, 2009 12:01 am (Chapter 6: The Aftermath)
what he did was seriously inexcusable, in real life i would probably say that she should dump his ass and leave it at that, but i like them together and i like happy endings hahaha

Author's Response:

lol... i did toy around with that idea, but i've got plans for these two! haha.

and i'm kinda partial to happy endings myself. lol.

thanks for reading and reviewing hun! i appreciate it a bunch!




Jamie Lynn (Signed) on Jun 30, 2009 08:29 pm (Chapter 5: Hell Hath No Fury.....)
I knew it! That little punk ass bitch! She has every single right to be pissed off!! That's just...low. Ok, bodily harm will be ensued. I mean stealing a song, that song being the song you're girl wanted to perform, and to top it all off singing with her arch nimesis AFTER you've told her you wouldn't sing it with her because of some bullshit excuse about liking where you are now and you feel that if you perform you'd miss the stage and want it again? That's low, dirty, and just...grounds for termination. I mean damn he needs to unearth all those feeling he's holding in about where they are now, and that bruised ego that she gave him the last time they fought and just tell her versus avoiding it and not telling her all together. GUH!!! I mean damn what she said was low, I get that. But she's thinking everything is forgotten while he's still fussing over silently. NOT GOOD! AND DAMN IT...SHE BETTER GIVE HIM THE WORLDS BIGGEST ASS CHEWING THAT BOY HAS EVER SEEN!!

I don't know if any of this made sense. If it didn't I'm sorry!! LOL.

I think I can lower the knife I was about to stab Justin with now.

Author's Response:

haha... it made total sense! and you're right about pretty much everything. lol. there's a big blow up in their future, alot of little things like this are going to keep piling up before they both kind of lose it. haha.

lol yeah... the knife can be lowered now ya crazy lady! lol.

thanks for reading and reviewing my dear! i appreciate it a ton and you know i love your crazy self! haha.




pebblypoo (Signed) on Jun 29, 2009 02:07 pm (Chapter 5: Hell Hath No Fury.....)
Wow..that title really fits.  Awesome job...post more soon please.

Author's Response:

haha glad to know i'm not the only one who thought so!

thanks for reading and reviewing hun! i appreciate it a bunch!




glowbug917 (Signed) on Jun 29, 2009 11:55 am (Chapter 5: Hell Hath No Fury.....)

Oh bloody fucking hell. Alright, it's one thing to play good manager / idiot boyfriend and have Keri perform at the damn thing, but another entirely to a) take her song (though that's forgivable if it was a choice on the producers' part) and THEN, b) rip off Ryan's arrangement. This is the part that was really a kick to the gut for me, because I think it's MASSIVELY fucked up on Justin's part. Ugh.

Madison's about to shit a fucking brick and it'll be well-deserved.

Anyway, love love love, as per.  



Author's Response:

ah yes... justin is walking a very fine line of bad decisions vs. being completely retarded. and umm... you just might be right on point a... that's all i'm saying! and point b... well... uhh, yeah. lol. and doesn't fucked up describe these two and everything around them to a t? haha.

indeed she is!

thank ya my dear! you know i appreciates it a bunch!

 




MochaB (Signed) on Jun 29, 2009 01:30 am (Chapter 5: Hell Hath No Fury.....)
I FREAKING KNEW IT! UGH I KNEW IT!! If she doesn't blow up and kick some butt right now I will put myself in this story and do it for her!! As I was reading this I was like boy if keri performs the chain it's going to be on. But justin is doing it with her?!? Madison's fav song that she thinks describes her relationship? Oh! And then it's rya's arrangement?!? What. The. Crap?!? I wasn't expecting all that! That's multiple punches to the face!! I'm just shocked by justin's audacity to do this. Like he had no thoughts in his brain when he made this decision. It was just like empty space up there. Wow. I'm in shock and so mad at this idiot like I'm madison or something. Lol I'm shocked, but man thanks for writing this cause it's about to be on!! Madison...get it girl. Lol update soon! :o)

Author's Response:

LOL! oh believe me, madison is full of crazy, and it's definitely going to pop up fairly soon.

and correct you are. justin has screwed her over in a big way, and it won't be overlooked. and it is most certainly on! lol.

thanks for reading and reviewing my dear! i appreciate it a bunch!

 






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