sexylove91 (Signed) on Jun 28, 2009 02:07 am (Chapter 5: Hell Hath No Fury.....)
uh oh all hell is about to break loose, l iove it lol

Author's Response:

haha, indeed it is! and i'm glad to hear you're enjoying the craziness, cause it's loads of fun to write! lol.

thanks for reading and reviewing hun! i appreciate it a bunch!



tanya (Anonymous) on Jun 28, 2009 12:44 am (Chapter 5: Hell Hath No Fury.....)
thats messed up!!!! you definatly have to update faster!!!

Author's Response:

lol, the next chapter is coming along nicely, so soon, i promise!

thanks for reading and reviewing love! i appreciate it a ton!



a_moments_grace (Signed) on Jun 27, 2009 03:33 pm (Chapter 5: Hell Hath No Fury.....)

Oh no he didn't!!!!

What an ass.  That was truly and assholeish thing to do, and Justin Timberlake is the asshole that did it.  I'm mad at him right now! He better do some serious butt kissing in the next chapter!  That was her song, and he stole it for some two-bit hooker that thinks she can sing!!!!

Oooohhhhh....I'm all riled up!



Author's Response:

lol that seems to be the general reaction, so i must have done something right! haha.

justin will most definitely be getting his, mark my words. haha.

thanks for reading and reviewing love! i appreciate it a bunch!



jbear (Anonymous) on Jun 27, 2009 02:16 pm (Chapter 5: Hell Hath No Fury.....)

How bout as soon as this chapter started I knew how it was going to end and I'm guessing that Justin Timberlake has a death wish the size of the USA. I just knew it was bound to happen which just proves that men are stupid. I so can't wait for the next chapter.



Author's Response:

haha, oh yes... they're all quite stupid, no matter how pretty they are. lol.

it's coming, i promise!

thanks for reading and reviewing hun! i appreciate it a bunch!



MissTasha (Signed) on Jun 27, 2009 01:39 pm (Chapter 5: Hell Hath No Fury.....)
HELL THE FUCK NO. Hell fucking NO. No fucking way. What the fuck? If I were Madison, Justin would be on ice so thin, his ass would be dying a frozen, icy death. DEATH. D-E-A-T-H. This is such a betrayal, it's almost grounds for a break up. It's definitely grounds for cussing his ass out and not talking to him for a couple weeks. 2-3 weeks minimum. He sucks as a boyfrined right now. He's supposed to love her and have her best interest at heart and she's supposed to be able to trust him. How could he possibly not think this is wrong? There's being oblivious and dense then there's just having no brain at all. Justin is brainless. Also, she should slap the shit out of him. I hate him. Please update soon.

Author's Response:

lol oh my god... your rant totally just made my day! haha. that was awesome lady!

and you're right on all points, and believe me... justin will get his. madison may have held back to this point, but she can only take so much, and her craziness is gonna come out full swing, trust me. lol.

thanks for reading and reviewing hun! i appreciate it a bunch!



kahnechick85 (Signed) on Jun 27, 2009 12:27 pm (Chapter 5: Hell Hath No Fury.....)
Justin is an idiot. He must really love his girlfriend a lot to stab her in the back like that. I can't wait to see what's going to happen next so please please please PMS

Author's Response:

lol, a massive idiot, for sure!

thanks for reading and reviewing hun!



Schnessa (Signed) on Jun 27, 2009 12:01 pm (Chapter 5: Hell Hath No Fury.....)
I've been reading this for awhile but I've never really had time to leave a review! It's amazing but this Chapter pissed me the hell off! Justin is an asshole! How can he not see how much his girlfriend wants to share her passion for this band with him? First, wanting him to go with her to The Fleetwood Mac concert, Second, asking him to do The Chain with her? Not only does he choose to sing with someone else but he chooses the song his girlfriend ASKED him to do with her! He's a fucking asshole! lol If I was Madison I'd seriously be confronting him about everything but....it's your story and you know what you're doing! lol Great work love!

Author's Response:

lol... well thank ya hun! i appreciate that a ton. hearing you guys are enjoying all this craziness is what keeps me going.

haha, that seems to be the general reaction, and it's well deserved, that much is certain.

and karma is going to come back and bite justin in the ass, believe me. lol.

anywho... thanks for reading and reviewing my dear! i appreciate it a bunch!



utsukushiijisatsu (Signed) on Jun 27, 2009 11:38 am (Chapter 5: Hell Hath No Fury.....)
You should have labeled this part one. 8Db Because hell hath no fury as Madison scorned seems to be a fit title for the next as well. LOL. I can totally see hair flying and a few punches being landed in it... and I CAN'T WAIT to read it >8D

My initial excitement for tension aside, I just know Justin would do that from the moment you wrote someone took Chain and that Madison thought it perfectly described them. Though this totally made me hate fictional!JT, I totally love you for writing this. I don't know, maybe it's the little devil in me cheering on much needed chaos and drama and angst between characters. Yes, I love seeing them tortured. Emotional and otherwise. *hintnudge*

I shall end my mini cheer for evil plot trickery and overlook the fact you just ended this chapter with a cliffie because I think it fits, and it ends where it should.

Please to be hurrying up and finishing the next chapter realization of Madison's fury because I would really really REALLY like to see Justin have it handed to him. Like I said, he's brilliant businesswise and the perfect manager, but he's a huge douche for doing this. *cheers Madison on* JC please to be rubbing it in his face when this falls apart on him.

Great filler (though I think it isn't). Can't wait to see what happens next as always but I think even more now. Guh. Will stop rambling now o/

Ps. Just a side note really, I was kinda hoping this story was updated and I wasn't listening non-stop to Welcome to the World. I just have to LOL at the coincidence. XD;

Author's Response:

lol... i actually considered doing this as either a two part chapter, or throwing madison's reaction in there, but the lyrics and the last line just seemed like a good ending, so i pretty much just said hell with it and went with it. lol, so i'm definitely glad ya enjoyed!

haha yeah... it was fairly obvious i think, and believe me... i love the drama just as much as you do! haha. it's just loads of fun to write them all emotional and crazy.

and jc is going to play a MAJOR part in the massive reality check justin has coming his way, mark my words. lol.

ah... i love the rambling, especially since i have a tendency to do it myself, so feel free to ramble any time my dear! lol.

ah! that is awesome... i had the plot for this story stuck in my head for quite sometime and never could find the right song, then i heard welcome to the world on the radio one day at work and i had a total lightbulb over the head moment. lol.

anywho... thanks for reading and reviewing hun! i appreciate it tons!



isis (Anonymous) on Jun 27, 2009 11:13 am (Chapter 5: Hell Hath No Fury.....)
that was so sketchy and crappy of justin! i cannot believ him!!! im as angry as madison!

Author's Response:

oh yes... sketchy is a good word! haha. and angry is a bit of an understatement for madison at the moment. lol.

thanks for reading and reviewing love! i appreciate it a ton!



Hollie (Signed) on Jun 27, 2009 10:27 am (Chapter 5: Hell Hath No Fury.....)
I saw this coming before I was even halfway through the first sentence, but even so it was a kickt o the stomach. Justin is a fucking dipshit.

Author's Response:

lol, oh yes... most definitely a dipshit. but, he is male after all. haha.

thanks for reading and reviewing lady! i appreciate it a bunch!



mzmillion (Signed) on Jun 27, 2009 09:57 am (Chapter 5: Hell Hath No Fury.....)

I knew it, I fucking knew it.... Justin is an idiot...a fucking dumbass. I knew he was going to do that, and to take her favorite song from her when I'm sure he knows that its her favorite, and on top of that to use the arrangement of Ryans...breakup!

 

I'm sorry, this would be enough reason to take a "break" for me. 



Author's Response:

haha yes.. justin is most definitely not using his brain at the moment.

it just may come to that. ya never know! haha.

thanks for reading and reviewing love! i appreciate it a ton!



SJane (Signed) on Jun 27, 2009 06:53 am (Chapter 5: Hell Hath No Fury.....)
BAM...that sound? The shit hitting the fan lol

Author's Response:

lol! indeed. the shit is about to hit the fan in a major, major way. haha.

thanks for reading and reviewing hun! i appreciate it a bunch!



crestbaby (Signed) on Jun 27, 2009 04:44 am (Chapter 5: Hell Hath No Fury.....)
so I just posted a review but I wanted to add that after Madison beats Keri to a bloody pulp, I think it should be JC or Ryan that sings a duet with her, so she can just rub that all up into Justin's face for all the Keri bullshit that has been going on. I mean, come on. I don't care if he wants nothing to do with Keri, don't let another girl other than your girlfriend and/or a relative live with you. NOT COOL!!!

Author's Response: haha... hmm... i'm sure madison will come up with some form of revenge. she is a bit unstable after all. lol.


crestbaby (Anonymous) on Jun 27, 2009 04:38 am (Chapter 5: Hell Hath No Fury.....)
I'm loving it and I think she should kick his ass...of course right after she kicks Keri's. 

Author's Response:

haha, yes... there needs to be some major ass kicking all around! lol.

thanks for reading and reviewing hun!



meggie (Signed) on Jun 27, 2009 04:10 am (Chapter 5: Hell Hath No Fury.....)
I freaking knew it!! I'm smack a bitch down ...and I mean Borg of them! How the hell could he do that to Maddy and how the hell could he keep that from her as long as he has?!? This is going going to be pretty and a little more than worried as to what's going to happen!

Author's Response:

lol it most definitely won't be pretty, that much is certain! haha.

thanks for reading and reviewing love! i appreciate it a ton!





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