Jamie Lynn (Signed) on Oct 04, 2009 05:00 pm (Chapter 24: Day 31-Keri)
You forgot to add something, don't worry I'll add it in there for you.

Ok, here goes.

Keri walked out of the doors of the wellness center not paying attention to any of her surroundings. If she were paying attention she would have noticed the woman off to the side of the building smoking a cigarette. She fumbled around in her purse to find her Blackberry but as she pulled it out she felt a huge impact knock all the wind out of her.

"Jamie come back here! You know cigarettes trigger your rages!" cried one of the workers.

Jamie was currently in the center for extensive anger management. She was a relatively nice person, sometimes she just couldn't control her rages.

"Mrs!" The worker cried out to Keri as Jamie fought to push her out into the middle of the road. "Watch out for that..." the worker quickly closed his eyes and squinched his face waiting for the sound of impact. He slowly opened his eyes as he heard the sound he was waiting for and a scream, "...bus."

Jamie turned around with a smile, "Oops." She said as she threw her cigarette onto the ground and stubbed it out with her shoe as she began to walk back up the sidewalk to the center.

"Do you realize what that's going to cost us? Cost you?"

"Well I feel better."

I think that about covers it.

I really enjoyed it. Even the whole wanting to strangle the last breath out of Keri, but mostly how adult Madison was acting. Much like the Madison we saw in the beginning of Waking Up in Vegas. I also would like to give Justin a swift kick in the ass and the balls. Maybe it would help him WAKE THE HELL UP!

Author's Response:

lmao oh my god... this soooo made my day! haha.

eep yay! i'm super glad it seems like the old Madison is back, so yay for that! and justin most definitely could use a swift kick in the balls. lol.

thank ya my dear! mucho appreciated!



Tasha (Anonymous) on Oct 04, 2009 12:51 am (Cast)

 

SO SAD JUST UCKING PATHETIC! KERRI NEED A WHOLE ENTIRE FOOT IN THE ASS DONTDON'T MATTER WHICH FOOT JUST PUT A BIG "GOT YO ASS BITCH" BOOT ON. SHE MESSING UP THINKING SHE WON AND THAT'S GON BE HER DOWN FALL . I CAN WAIT AND JUSTIN POOR JUSTIN YO WELL DRYIN UP SO FAST BABY I JUST HOPE IT DON'T BE 2 LITTLE 2 LATE! TRACE AND CHELSEA GOT HER NUMBER THOUGH 187 THEY NOT FALLEN FOR IT. TRACE NEED TO DROP KICK SENSE INTO JUSTIN! GIRL THIS IS GETTING BETTER AND BETTER I CAN'T WAIT!!!!!

 



Author's Response: haha thank ya love! i appreciate it a ton!


MochaB (Signed) on Oct 04, 2009 12:11 am (Chapter 24: Day 31-Keri)
Yes please do! Suck it up and go! The more I hear keri's psycho self talk the more I get extremely pissed off at justin. Cause I'm just like "what a freaking idiot." Yes keri reminds him of madison, but would madison do what keri did to madison? I think not. He should think about that. Why would you even want to be around a person who did that to someone you love? I just don't get it. I get so mad, but then I'm just like what a sad, sad pair of people. Justin and keri. There's so much stupidity flowing between those two it's just sad. Is it bad that I want something bad to happen to both of them on this trip? Lol probably so. I just want keri to get what she deserves before this story is said and done. Anytime before it ends, please. She doesn't even have to have anymore contact with madison. What she has done is enough for her to get a big freaking wake up call and get what she deserves cause she deserves more than a punch in the face. And I hope justin feels so incredibly low when he wakes up. And I hope by then madison is back in chicago, doing amazing, looking amazing, and having a wonderful life. I think chelsea AND trace would beat up keri themselves before becoming friends with keri. Best friend of justin or not, trace is not blind and he knows who keri is. Ugh. So sad. All I can do is shake my head. But you should know that you have really created a character that I despise with a heartfelt passion. Lol! update soon! :o)

Author's Response:

haha ohh yess... loads and loads of stupidity, that's for sure.

ah... she'll get hers someday... maybe. lol.

thank ya love! i appreciate it!



glowbug917 (Signed) on Oct 03, 2009 11:39 pm (Chapter 24: Day 31-Keri)

i'm just saying...if a bear came and mauled the shit out of keri, i'd be okay with that. just throwing that out there.

oh! OR...in mexico...water...shark attack, anyone? i'd settle for swine flu, even. 

what a raging coozebucket (and i do not mean that in the affectionate way)

but i love that madison's getting back to some semblance of her old self. she's upset and everything but she's actually showing some semblance of self-respect and independence, and i think that's awesome. 

and i think YOU'RE awesome! (i've had half a bottle of scotch, what of it?)



Author's Response:

haha gee... i could have sworn you were the one who told me NOT to kill her off. lmao.

ah, yay! it worked then! she may be a little more grown up, but she's still same old crazy ass madison.

lmao only you would leave me a drunk review! this is why i love you! haha.



glowbug917 (Signed) on Oct 03, 2009 11:37 pm (Chapter 23: Separate Ways)

please let this crapshitfucker of an internet connection actually leave this review...ok...

you know, i love how pissed justin was that madison was all self-pitying at her lowest (and you know what, at least she had the coke as an excuse) and here he is, doing the same fucking shit. hypocrite much? 

i still can't believe he's going with keri to mexico...seriously pathetic on so many levels, but at least he knows it. i just wanna smack him, is that cool?

 



Author's Response:

well... your crapshitfucker of an internet connection DID leave the review. lmao.

smack away my dear! haha.



champ (Signed) on Oct 03, 2009 10:23 pm (Chapter 24: Day 31-Keri)
keep the chapters coming

Author's Response: haha will do! thank ya hun!


jaye2kaye (Signed) on Oct 03, 2009 09:53 pm (Chapter 24: Day 31-Keri)
please, i beg of you, PLEASE, let justin drop her....period. from the label, off the fucking planet...just throwing out some ideas

Author's Response:

haha all very good ideas! so we shall see! lol.

thank ya my dear! i appreciate it a bunch!



mzmillion (Signed) on Oct 03, 2009 06:08 pm (Chapter 24: Day 31-Keri)

Madison is weak, Justin is gullible, Keri is an oppurtunist(I mean almost anyone would do the same in her position if they though they could get away with it) and the rest are boring.....

 

The fact that Justin is so stupid pisses me off more than anything...especially after the first go round with Keri so I hope he does lose Madison in the end, its only right. 



Author's Response:

eh... he just might, so we'll see!

thanks for reading and reviewing.



meggie (Signed) on Oct 03, 2009 04:49 pm (Chapter 24: Day 31-Keri)
why are you doooooooooing this?!?!? i really dont think i can keep reading this. they are so not even close to the people i fell in love with when reading 'waking up in vegas'. *pouts* i'm sad

Author's Response:

ah no... don't be sad! haha.

i suppose they're all hitting their own form of rock bottom, so uh... yeah. haha.

thank ya lady! i appreciate it!



alimera (Signed) on Oct 03, 2009 02:14 pm (Chapter 24: Day 31-Keri)
Yeah, okay, I'm totally not happy with where this is going AT ALL. How about you do me a huge favor and have Justin bail on Keri like at the last possible second and he stays where he's supposed to be, and then Madison goes to Chicago, finds out Justin stayed, and then goes running back into his arms. Yeah, sounds good to me. Lol, update again soon!

Author's Response:

haha hm... very possible ending, maybe! lol.

thank ya hun! i appreciate it!



Hollie (Signed) on Oct 03, 2009 11:32 am (Chapter 24: Day 31-Keri)
Keri really is pathetic. The fact she even thinks any of this was a competition just proves it. She thinks taking over Madison's life because Madison has abdicated it makes her a winner or makes her better? It makes her a second best replacement. Get some damn self respect, psycho whore.

Author's Response:

lmap psycho whore.

pathetic indeed. girl is all sorts of crazy and has a major, major inferiority complex.

thank ya lady! i appreciate it!



utsukushiijisatsu (Signed) on Oct 03, 2009 06:13 am (Chapter 24: Day 31-Keri)

No matter how many chances I give her to be good, Keri is just plain evil and needs to disappear. Please to be making sure she DIAFs. THXKBAI.

Ps. Short, filler-y but good *u* 



Author's Response:

haha oh yeah, she's pure evil. no other way around it.

thank ya love! i appreciate it!



kahnechick85 (Signed) on Oct 03, 2009 02:55 am (Chapter 24: Day 31-Keri)
Wow Justin picked the winner didn't he? I love this, PMS

Author's Response:

haha ain't that the truth! lol.

thank ya lady! i appreciate it a ton!



Jbear (Signed) on Oct 03, 2009 01:44 am (Chapter 24: Day 31-Keri)
OK seriously so many points to Mads for keeping her cool and not knocking that bitch out! Next I don't care anymore if you don't put Justin and Madison back 2gether just please 4 the love of God don't let him get wit that bitch. I really need Justin to come off his stupid rock b4 I jump in the story and kick his ass myself. LOL So loving the quick updates!!!

Author's Response:

lmao he could probably use a good ass kicking!

thank ya love! i appreciate it!



MissTasha (Signed) on Oct 03, 2009 12:30 am (Chapter 24: Day 31-Keri)
Short chapters, FTL. :( Short chapters make me sad, you know. I might cry. But look at you with all the updates. Who are YOU all of a sudden? lol. Please update soon.

Author's Response:

haha ah, i know they're short! lol. 

thank ya my dear! i appreciate it a ton!





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