meggie (Signed) on Oct 02, 2009 09:24 pm (Chapter 23: Separate Ways)

fuck this. i'm done. really. i mean it this time. i cant keep reading this shit and getting mad and upset anymore. you are KILLING me. really. i'm dying a slow, painful death. and i don't like it. so, i hope you feel bad.

ps- now amount of new music is going to make this better. 



Author's Response:

:(

i wasn't tryin to kill ya! i swear! lol.

aw damn... now what am i supposed to defend myself with? lol




Hollie (Signed) on Oct 02, 2009 01:43 pm (Chapter 23: Separate Ways)
It is what it is and it's fucking stupid. Trying to replace Madison with Keri is never going to work. Madison may be off her nut but she's not a psycho whore, so Keri's never going to be a good substitute.

Author's Response:

haha keri wouldn't make much of a substitute for anyone... except fot satan maybe. lol.

thank ya lady! mucho appreciated!




Jbear (Signed) on Oct 02, 2009 01:17 pm (Chapter 23: Separate Ways)
You do realize u are making us all crazy by pushing them further apart? lol Im not sayin I like it but I do get it. But if ur gonna make Justin try 2 b wit sum1 else can it be sum1 who is not hated by all cu shes a bitch?

Author's Response:

haha i dunno... he seems pretty dead set on finding the good in her. clearly the boy is crazy. lol.

thank ya love! i appreciate it!




mzmillion (Signed) on Oct 02, 2009 12:50 pm (Chapter 23: Separate Ways)

YESSS!!!

 

singing Keyshia Cole's "I Just Want It To Be Over".......lol......



Author's Response: then you'll be glad to know there's only three chapters left!



champ (Signed) on Oct 02, 2009 11:20 am (Chapter 23: Separate Ways)
cool keep the chapters coming

Author's Response: will do! thank ya hun!



MissTasha (Signed) on Oct 02, 2009 07:50 am (Chapter 23: Separate Ways)
I really quit this time. I'm not coming back. Justin's sucking all of the intelligence out of my brain. Please update soon.

Author's Response:

lmao i think he's sucking the intelligence from everybody's brain!

thank ya love! i appreciate it!




JoJo (Anonymous) on Oct 02, 2009 03:32 am (Chapter 23: Separate Ways)
*sigh* No words...you know how I feel about all this! Angry but I'm addicted : ) Update again soon!

Author's Response:

lmao... the addiction parts good, right? haha.

thank ya my dear! i appreciate it!




TASHA (Anonymous) on Oct 02, 2009 02:31 am (Chapter 23: Separate Ways)
STUPID JUST 2 FUCKING STUPID!!!! That's all need to be said bout what's happening right now! i just dont get how STUPID  justin and madison is dont nobody got the good sense GOD gave a gnat but trace and chels well moore so trace he bout the only one i like right now. THE BITCH needs to die fall far off a cliff in mexico i wouldnt give a damn she gotta go! Justin need a swift but steady kick in his ass . now my heart racing got a heart condition and they not doin right gon get me admitted into ICU so fix this soon. lol please JUST STUPID alright  im done.

Author's Response:

lmao ah no! no icu! haha.

pretty much right on all points. stupidity all around. lol.

thank ya hun! i appreciate it!




MochaB (Signed) on Oct 02, 2009 12:51 am (Chapter 23: Separate Ways)
They are both ridiculous. Lol it just makes me laugh now I guess. Madison is ridiculous will the whole woe is me and pessimistic thing she has going on. It's almost sad if it wasn't annoying now. She used to be a fighter, and not just about her relationship with justin. I know she's not out yet, but hopefully by the time she is out or spends time at home the fighter will return...maybe some common sense will come in too. Basically I just hope she comes out a better person in all aspects. And yall still aren't effing talking justin! Somebody says something then all hell breaks loose and nobody can sit and talk it out without getting all pissy. Lol justin is ridiculous cause he is taking keri cause she reminds him of the old madison. If that isn't saying somebody needs to be sent to the psychiatric ward then I don't know what does! That's some major crazy talk there! This fool better open his eyes incredibly wide and get beyond that surface crap and recognize who is who and what they're about. Go to mexico and have fun. Please! But why not take trace? I'm sitting here like "ummm...does he not have a best friend named trace?" Make it a men's wkend and take all his boys. Again. Psyyyyycho. No joke. Madison go to chicago! Please! Leave the music industry! But don't shut out everybody you know and love cause despite this bad, the good should overpower it all. I understand the pain and anger and other emotions are all fresh for them both and they are saying and doing things they could possibly regret later, but it does not lessen my annoyance with them both. I just feel like they both need to sit down, shut up, don't talk to anybody for a day or two, open their minds, and think about everything clearly cause I feel like it's just a big ol mess and nobody knows what they freaking want, and if they do know they are too much of a coward to go after it. And justin may try to get her back later, so he should maybe oh I don't know...take keri with him to mexico and make some dumb mistake which will result in everybody finally saying "eff you you are stupid." I know he's going to do something that's going to make me mad like no other. I know this so go ahead and bring it on woman. Lol k. I'm done. Haha. update soon!! :o)

Author's Response:

lmao pretty much right on all points. everybody's acting a little too emotionally rather than think it through, so hence the chaos. haha.

he just might try to get her back, so who knows! haha.

thank ya love! i appreciate it a ton!




mzmillion (Signed) on Sep 30, 2009 11:27 pm (Chapter 21: Reaching An Agreement)

Justin's pure dumbassness is getting on my nerves...like is anyone seriously that fucking stupid....ugh..... this story has made me hate Madison, despise Justin, and not want them to be together....

 

Justing is so fucking gullible and for someone in his line of business its shocking and irratating. Madison is so fucking weak.... why anyone wants to be around her and her whining and self-pitying is irratating and when they are together, all it is, is thoughts, what-ifs, and we dont belong together. 

 

I think Justin should kill himself for being so fucking stupid and Madison should just end her misery also for being so self-inflicting.....

 

 

/vent. 



Author's Response:

welp... i don't write death scenes so well, so uh yeah... can't really see myself killing my fictional characters off.

thanks for reading and reviewing!




kahnechick85 (Signed) on Sep 30, 2009 01:01 am (Chapter 22: Day 19-Chelsea)
I love this, I can't wait to see what's going to happen next. I'm glad that other people see what trouble Keri is. PMS

Author's Response:

haha oh yess... they definitely see it.

thank ya my dear! i appreciate it a ton!




jaye2kaye (Signed) on Sep 29, 2009 07:02 pm (Chapter 22: Day 19-Chelsea)

"...a small part of me is actually happy he did this." if it were me and i had heard that he was going to take some other bitch on my trip, yes, MY trip, i would have kicked his ass from here to timbuk-fucking-tu.

i'm happy she and chelsea are patching things up



Author's Response:

lmao eh... madison's trying out this 'grown up thing'... she may be taking it a bit too far, so we'll see! haha.

thank ya love! i appreciate it a ton!




meggie (Signed) on Sep 29, 2009 05:44 pm (Chapter 22: Day 19-Chelsea)

FUCK THAT!! what the hell happened to my maddison?!? bring her back! i get that she's all doing the grown up thing but damn. she used to be all full of spunk and now she's like...blaaaaah. i just wanna tell her she can do the right thing but be herself. but ah, i do love chelsea!! she's like the best best friend ever.

and i still H.A.T.E. kerri. like to the point where if i meet someone name kerri i probably wont like them on principle alone.

that is all. *mauh* yea,i totally just kissed you. but not for this update. for will hoge. 



Author's Response:

haha yay! now... go tell glow that chelsea is awesome. she refuses to believe it. lol.

haha... you're supposed to hate keri...but umm... please don't beat some random girl named keri to death, i don't know if i can provide an alibi for that. lol.

haha well yeah... he's amazing. lol.

thank ya lady! i appreciate it!




JoJo (Anonymous) on Sep 29, 2009 04:24 pm (Chapter 22: Day 19-Chelsea)
I refuse to read another update until you fix Madison and make Justin really smart! And get them together already!! Well...I lie because as much as I get angry with these people I can't stay away! Fix them please! I can't stay away, I love it! Update again soon!

Author's Response:

haha... i'll see what i can do... maybe. lol.

thanks for reading and reviewing hun! i appreciate it!




Jbear (Signed) on Sep 29, 2009 03:55 pm (Chapter 22: Day 19-Chelsea)
Ok so Im happy that she talked to Chelsea, but I don't think it was the down and griddy talk that best friends should have (if that makes any sense) I think that Madison really needs to let out what she has been feeling about the whole thing. Kuddos to her for being so grown up and not freaking out about the whole Keri and Justin thing, but really do you really think she and Justin belong together?

Author's Response:

ah, makes total sense and it's a very good point! they didn't really delve into the super important stuff.

oh yes... most definitely a bit more grown up, and as for the other stuff... we shall see. haha.

thanks for reading and reviewing hun! i appreciate it!






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