kahnechick85 (Signed) on Sep 25, 2009 01:27 am (
Chapter 20: Day 15-Justin)
I agree with Justin. At the first sign of something going wrong she turns tail and runs and she will regret this. I can't wait to see what's going to happen next. I just hope that he doesn't run to Keri. PMS
Author's Response: haha yeah, it's most definitely her trade mark. we shall see! lol.
thank ya love! i appreciate it a ton!
MochaB (Signed) on Sep 24, 2009 08:49 pm (
Chapter 19: Finally, Some Optimism)
OH MY EFFING...IS HE ON FREAKING ON CRACK?!? ACID?!? Ohymgoshohmygosh. Seriously I'm about to burst in to a million angry pieces in this room. It's well known that I hate keri, and I'm mad she's once again lying, but all this intense anger is pointed straight at justin. Ohmygosh I promise this dude is freaking dumb as a brick. Fool me once, shame on you. Fool me twice...I have to give it to keri. That bia knows how to manipulate. Actually scratch that. She doesn't. Justin is just stupid. How many people have to see keri for who she really is for him to believe that she's not his innocent, kind new artist? So hiding the drug use by blackmailing madison was to push madison to rehab? Oh ok. That makes complete and total sense. *palm to forehead!* THINK JUSTIN! And did the girl not just put down madison to chelsea with her little comment?!? Yeah. She's sooo sweet. Yes it's time for some positivity justin, but not in this way! Trusting a person who has caused all this trouble is NOT going to lead to positivity, but yes it will secure that you positively will not be getting back with madison! Ugh. And that whole JC thing? He better get it out of his head that that is the same. I promise if keri plants something on her in rehab...honestly she shouldn't even be allowed to see her. That should just be a rule. And it is ridiculous if madison does talk to her. If he once again takes keri's side madison better not take his butt back. I am so serious. Nothing has really happened yet, but seriously if he does, this story better end with madison punching his lights out, madison messing keri's face up again, and saying "F You." and throwing up the duece. Lol! So serious. And of course they didn't talk at all about what happened the night before and he that just made them both realize they will be ok and are meant to be, and she's thinking the complete opposite! Fan-freaking-tastic! Ok. I'm stopping cause I'm just so annoyed and have said omg too many times. Ugh. I'm crazy I know. I'm sorry. I will TRY to tone it down from now on. Haha. update soon!! :o)
Author's Response: haha, all very good points. and justin's... well... he's stupid. there's no excuse other than that.
thank ya my dear! i appreciate it a ton!
Jamie Lynn (Signed) on Sep 24, 2009 01:00 pm (
Chapter 19: Finally, Some Optimism)
There is a fine line between hating being negative and being effing delusional. I mean come on!
The girl obviously wants his junk, she's made that obvious on more than one occasion.
And Justin is just...frickin...god, stupid doesn't even begin to descibe him. He can't possibly be that dense if he thinks that Keri did that shit just to get Mad the help she needed. That's why you put Madison in the car and tell her you're really going shopping but make a detour and throw her in frickin Rehab...that's how you get someone help.
Ok maybe not exactly like that, but you get my point. At least I hope you do.
Will Justin's stupidity finally end? Will Madison and Justin live happily ever after? And will Madison fall into oncoming traffic on Rodeo Drive? Just a few questions I have. LOL. I loved it girl. Sorry for the novel I just wrote you. LOL. But you know I was due to write you a long one considering I didn't write a review on the last chapter.
Author's Response: lol this totally made my day, i hope you know that.
alimera (Signed) on Sep 24, 2009 09:25 am (
Chapter 19: Finally, Some Optimism)
Um, no. Sorry. I don't buy Keri's little "i'm so innocent heehee" act FOR A SECOND. And Justin is a fool if he does. Update again soon!
Author's Response: psh... no way. keri is totally innocent. i have no idea what you mean. lol.
thanks for reading and reviewing hun!
meggie (Signed) on Sep 23, 2009 08:14 pm (
Chapter 19: Finally, Some Optimism)
ok...this seems to be a thing with me, posting a second comment on each chapter. so...i decided today that you are the devil. not kerri. to do that to me and then just end it like that....wrong. very very very wrong. glow & i voted and you lost.
that kids is the lesson of the day.
suck on that
ok....as mean as that was, you know i LOVE you
Author's Response: lmao i am so not the devil, i swear! haha. and you are so totally voting with the wrong person because umm hello.. she is pure evil. i mean, how long has she been dragging out the boxes in buckets? woman is trying to give me a complex with that shit.
haha, i still love you too lady!
kahnechick85 (Signed) on Sep 23, 2009 06:12 pm (
Chapter 19: Finally, Some Optimism)
Bringing Keri around again and falling for her shit again is not the way to acomplish anything good Justin. I hope he doesn't fuck this up again. I love this, PMS
Author's Response: haha, that does seem to be his pattern, doesn't it? we shall see i suppose!
thanks for reading and reviewing hun! i appreciate it!
Tanya (Anonymous) on Sep 23, 2009 03:21 pm (
Chapter 19: Finally, Some Optimism)
something tells me that this is not going to work out so well..... NOOOO!!!!!
Author's Response: haha we shall see! lol.
thanks for reading and reviewing hun! i appreciate it!
Hollie (Signed) on Sep 23, 2009 03:21 pm (
Chapter 19: Finally, Some Optimism)
He had the breathrough, and then he lost it. How fucking stupid does he have to be to think that framing somebody and having them arrested and then throwing yourself at their boyfriend the second you've got them out the way is in any way designed to help them? It's psychotic.
Trace, as ever, is the smart one.
Author's Response: well... yeah. and keri being the whack job she is seems to think it all makes perfect sense.
lol oh yes... trace is so good at the voice of reason thing. haha.
thank ya my dear! i appreciate it a ton!
Jbear (Signed) on Sep 23, 2009 11:38 am (
Chapter 19: Finally, Some Optimism)
OMG are you fucking serious Justin? Clearly you are not as smart as you think you are because A. Madison would't think your relationship is over and B. You would not be falling for Keri shit again. Rehab or not getting over her drug shit or not the fact that she is a psyhco bitch around everyone but you says a lot about her. You would think in all your postive thinking you would listen to your bestfriend by now who has I feel not driven you wrong. Justin u are such an idoit right now!
Author's Response: haha well... yeah. that pretty much sums it all up. trace is awesome. keri is insane. justin is stupid. yep... that about covers it. lol.
thanks for reading and reviewing hun! i appreciate it!
MissTasha (Signed) on Sep 23, 2009 07:23 am (
Chapter 19: Finally, Some Optimism)
I quit. Goodbye. Please update soon.
Author's Response: haha you know you so don't mean that! lol.
thank ya lady! i appreciate it a ton!
meggie (Signed) on Sep 23, 2009 04:55 am (
Chapter 19: Finally, Some Optimism)
Ugh!! I almost just threw my phone I'm so pissed! How stupid can he get? I should have know that cunt would be back! Hate her!! I'm keeping my fingers crossed for round 2!
Author's Response: ah no! don't throw the phone... never a good idea. lol.
won't be a round two i'm afraid... but i've got... something, up my sleeve. haha.
thanks for reading and reviewing love!
JoJo (Anonymous) on Sep 23, 2009 02:34 am (
Chapter 19: Finally, Some Optimism)
So I know Justin wants to believe Keri and finally someone is thinking positively but I don't know how well this is gonna play out. I still don't trust her and I can't wait to see what happens if Keri visits Madison in rehab. I want to believe Keri but she's given me no reason to trust her and has given no reason for Justin to trust her. He needs to be smart about this. Anyway...loved it! Update again soon!
Author's Response: haha, intelligence isn't one of his strong suits, that's for sure.
thank ya my dear! i appreciate it a ton!
glowbug917 (Signed) on Sep 23, 2009 01:50 am (
Chapter 19: Finally, Some Optimism)
you know i love me a good reference, and the brian wilson line had me dying. til you confused me! oh it is late and i'm sleep deprived.
justin's a big fucking retard. i love trace (though i just wanna keep him, not marry, is that cool? i'm still holding out for chris pine - unless john cusack comes along)
and chelsea totally just went up two points in my book for threatening to kick keri's ass. only two though, cause she's still ashley simpson hahaha.
oh and i repeat: justin's a big fucking retard.
Author's Response: lol ah yeah, it was pretty late. haha.
well, yeah. i like my boys stupid. i can't help it.
and you can totally keep trace my dear!
haha yay! do you have any idea how proud i am that she FINALLY won you over a little? even if it's only two points, i'll take it!
haha, thank ya lady! i appreciate it a ton!
Jaimie (Anonymous) on Sep 18, 2009 11:37 am (
Chapter 18: Suffering Consequences)
I am sooo anxious to see where you are taking this. I had a little bit of tears in my eyes when Justin told her to get out. Daaang! UGH! Please update soon. I need to know Justin and Madison are going to be ok. They need eachother!!!!
Author's Response: aww... i didn't mean to make anybody cry! lol.
ah... we'll see. time away could do them wonders, or create more problems. who knows!
thanks for reading and reviewing!
Hollie (Signed) on Sep 17, 2009 03:42 pm (
Chapter 18: Suffering Consequences)
Noooo! No not meant to be together!!!
I also don't like this talk of only going back for JC. That's a recipe for disaster. Madison needs to stop making disaster and switch to cookies. Far better
Author's Response: haha aw come on.... madison is a total walking disaster. it's only natural that she creates more problems. plus it's just more fun that way. haha.
thanks for reading and reviewing lady! i appreciate it!
