mzmillion (Signed) on Jul 13, 2009 04:41 pm (
In Which Her Story Screws Up)
Ok this is weird, I don't understand it one bit and still no detailed sex....ugh!! LOL ... This is turning into a suspense, mystery and I don't do those.....love it while I was reading though....but its time for me to say bye bye! Happy writing!
utsukushiijisatsu (Signed) on Jul 13, 2009 03:58 pm (
In Which Her Story Screws Up)
Ooooooh a double agent. I can tell things just get worse for the two of them from now. Justin must be really important for the Organization for them to be keeping tabs on him like this. Anyway, you got me curious. Great update, keep 'em coming 8D Can't wait to read more soon.
meggie (Signed) on Jul 13, 2009 07:26 am (
In Which Her Story Screws Up)
Wft is going on?!? And to think I used to like her now, not so much!
MissTasha (Signed) on Jul 03, 2009 05:58 pm (
In Which His Story Begins)
If they won't leve you alone, kill them. It's the only way. What? Who said that? Not me! Please update soon.
Author's Response: Hey, hey, now!
Kill is absolutely the smartest way to solve problems.
utsukushiijisatsu (Signed) on Jul 03, 2009 03:58 pm (
In Which His Story Begins)
Aww but they were having so much fun being the young starr-eyed couple trying to make things work-out on their own =/ Why must you throw in the hidden past he's trying to run away from? Not that I mind of course, I totally love the direction you've steered this story towards 8Db
Props for bringing in the other NSYNC people and starting with Joey and Chris of all members *w* I swear these two don't get the love they deserve~ And I have to say, the geek in me cheers for Justin working in a gaming development company. I like you fictional Justin already 8D I think I've mentioned it before but I totally enjoy how you've employed comedy in you story. I think it'd be interesting to see how you maintain that given where you want to go with this :)
Author's Response: Haha, it's not an Nsync story without...Nsync. I do hope I do the gaming industry justice because other than little tidbits from gaming magazines, I really know nothing about it lol
Oh, there's going to be a lot more that Justin's going to be running from. Thank you so much for liking the direction! I was worried it would be too far out there.
mzmillion (Signed) on Jul 03, 2009 10:14 am (
In Which They Start Out)
You were doing so good already with the "eating", awww you can do it... you can write some nice hot sex into the next chapter... I have faith in you babe!
mzmillion (Signed) on Jul 02, 2009 09:15 pm (
In Which His Story Begins)
oh helll.....thats all I'm going to say.....now bring on the dirty sex and I'll be oh so happy...I'm the Archive Detailed Sex pusher...lol
Author's Response: lmao we're going to need a lot of push. there are just some things I can't write without giggling to myself
meggie (Signed) on Jul 02, 2009 12:15 pm (
In Which His Story Begins)
that was all scary! LOL. Can't wait for more
Author's Response: Now you have me thinking about adding ghosts lol
Anonymous (Anonymous) on Jul 02, 2009 06:57 am (
In Which His Story Begins)
I really like the story. update soon.
Author's Response: Thanks!
utsukushiijisatsu (Signed) on Jun 23, 2009 10:46 am (
In Which They Start Out)
Interesting story :) Can't wait to read more see how this turns out. I hope this remains a comedic piece. The dialogue of your characters are really funny. Most notable for me would have to be
“Fuck. Fuckity. Fuck. Fuck,” he responded, equally calm. “Oh hey, who’s that? It’s Mr. Fuck Fuckinson. What a fucker.”
I don't know why but it stands out. XD
Hope to see a new chapter soon :)
Author's Response: I'm glad you fucking like it!
a_nonymous (Signed) on Jun 22, 2009 06:06 pm (
In Which They Start Out)
Very interesting! Can't wait to see where this goes.
Author's Response: Every which way until I get a clue of where to take it lol
WhiteSoxLuvr9 (Signed) on Jun 22, 2009 02:54 pm (
In Which They Start Out)
i like it so far! can't wait for the next update
Anonymous (Anonymous) on Jun 22, 2009 02:54 pm (
In Which They Start Out)
I like it too
mzmillion (Signed) on Jun 22, 2009 12:01 pm (
In Which They Start Out)
Ooooh I like I like I like...will be tuning in for more!!!
