Tina (Anonymous) on Jul 12, 2009 03:05 pm (
Chapter Four)
Poor Adah!!
Author's Response: Mhmm...she's knocked up and called a whore! talk about a bad day...
jacs12031984 (Signed) on Jul 12, 2009 03:00 pm (
Chapter Four)
loved it thanks for updating before u leave
jacs12031984 (Signed) on Jul 12, 2009 03:00 pm (
Chapter Four)
loved it thanks for updating before u leave
Author's Response: I do my best :)
utsukushiijisatsu (Signed) on Jul 11, 2009 03:37 pm (
Chapter Three)
>_O Yikes. So close. I'll hope Justin takes the news well but chances are he won't *crosses fingers for Adah's sake* Way to build up the progression of the narrative o/ Can't wait to read more soon :)
Author's Response: Keep those fingers crossed, lol, that's all I can tell you :)
SweetTeaPi16 (Signed) on Jul 11, 2009 02:37 pm (
Chapter Three)
Justin needs to know or figure it out!
Author's Response: Oh, he'll know :) thanks for reading!
amk88 (Signed) on Jul 11, 2009 01:26 am (
Chapter Two)
I love the best friends. and i love ur writing style. not gonna lie, when i read the Jayme story, i wasn't expecting to like it at all, but it was great and so is this.
Author's Response: Well I 'm flattered that you stuck with it. And thank you, so much, I'm glad you like my writing style, that's a huge compliment :)
glowbug917 (Signed) on Jul 11, 2009 12:52 am (
Chapter Three)
Justin's an idiot for not having figured this out yet, lol. and seriously, Adah needs to stop procrastinating telling him before it gets bad, because it inevitably will.
Author's Response: Yeah, boys are idiots. He'll figure it out soon, though. And it won't be pretty... !! :-D
amk88 (Signed) on Jul 09, 2009 01:00 am (
Prologue)
Hot stuff.
Author's Response: Thanks ;)
alimera (Signed) on Jul 06, 2009 02:04 pm (
Chapter Two)
Hahahahaha, I love it so far! Update again soon!
Author's Response: Thanks. I think it's pretty spiffy myself :)
kahnechick85 (Signed) on Jul 06, 2009 02:24 am (
Chapter Two)
I agree she needs to tell him. I love this, PMS
Author's Response: Thanks :)
utsukushiijisatsu (Signed) on Jul 06, 2009 02:22 am (
Chapter Two)
Although I agree with Brett that the first thing to do is to tell Justin that it's his kid, I also I agree with Adah's hesitation to do so. Although he thinks he's seen her before, it's quite another thing to be told 'we had sex and btw, this is your kid.' It's totally coming from no where and his first instinct would be to think she's lying.
I feel bad for Adah though :< It's a damned if you do, damned if you don't situation.
Anyway, I can't wait to read more of this. Keep going dear :)
Author's Response: Thank you, thank you :) I'm so glad you're liking it.
glowbug917 (Signed) on Jul 06, 2009 12:37 am (
Chapter Two)
I love Brett and Sam already. They're cracking me up, though their timing is seriously piss poor, haha. I have friends exactly like that.
And man, do I not envy Adah right now. Somehow I think telling Justin is not going to work out in her favor initially and ugh...that's just...sucky, for lack of a better word.
Anyway, more now please?
Author's Response: Thank you, so so much :) and I'm partial to Brett and Sam, too. lol. So glad you're liking it :)
champ (Signed) on Jul 05, 2009 11:19 pm (
Chapter Two)
great
Author's Response: Thanks :)
MissTasha (Signed) on Jul 05, 2009 09:46 pm (
Chapter Two)
This should be good and interesting. The dog trainer saying that she's knocked up by him. lol. Plesae update soon.
Author's Response: Lol...when you put it that way...lol. Thanks for reviewing :) it makes me happy
SweetTeaPi16 (Signed) on Jul 05, 2009 09:04 pm (
Chapter Two)
So...they really need to let Justin know before he gets pissed off when he figures it out later. and Justin can't really be that dense!
Author's Response: Oh, he's going to figure it out. Thanks for reading :)
