Author's Response: I don't know what happens its left open ended because- well in most relationships it goes through that cycle... So I guess they will continue to fight, break up make up until some one gets fed up or both of them decide to change :) thanks for reviewing.
Author's Response:
like Captin Planet- the choice is yours lol
I think that this was a good attempt at writing out that period in every relationship where you have to evaluate what'll happen to you. I think we've all gone through that phase where you don't want to break up because you've been together for so long but you know that it's not working either. I can say I sympathisize with the both of them.
I love how you left the ending to hang. That uncertainty reflects what'll happen to next to the two of them. The reader is thus left to decide if things will indeed change or their just months away from actually calling it quits.
This story's sexy-time was well placed as well. It is exactly what it is. There's no sugar-coating it or making it more than what it should be. And of course, that was hot. Then again, when does anything that involved Justin not hot XD;
Overall, I'd say it's a good attempt. :) Kuddos to you for writing this one out.
Author's Response: thanks :) really appreciate the review. Glad you got the sex scene. It was a bit difficult to write, trying not to make it more passionate than it was when the couple were in limbo-I left it open because it a cycle, constantly hoping that this time will be different. :)
