Tina (Anonymous) on Nov 08, 2010 03:30 am (
Chapter 7)
Love it
MochaB (Signed) on Oct 10, 2010 05:28 pm (
Chapter 6)
:o( that's for justin (for obvious reasons), but also for Care because she's in a world of confusion. And to me justin was almost playing with her at the club. Maybe not intentionally, but he had a girlfriend and it seemed he was letting physical attraction guide his actions, which isn't fair to Care. I know he cares about her though. He just doesn't realize how his actions are causing her confusion. Plus I'm sure neither one of them wants to go there but I think Care could get to that point before he does. *sigh* anyway, glad I caught up. Update soon! :o)
SweetTeaPi16 (Signed) on Oct 08, 2010 02:41 am (
Chapter 6)
I love it already!!! Caroline and Justin should be together! Steph is a trick...who is gonna realize that she let go of one spectacular man.
Tink (Signed) on Oct 07, 2010 01:57 am (
Chapter 6)
Great chapter, hope you post more soon
azchickadee (Signed) on Oct 06, 2010 11:29 pm (
Chapter 6)
whoo-hoo! an update!! I was holding my breath through the whole chapter cuz I wasn't sure what was going to happen and I can totally feel Caroline's pain and confusion. And sad, heart-broken Justin is the worst thing ever! Guh! Poor baby....he always seems to get the shit end of the stick! lol. Excellent job, my dear :)
Anonymous (Anonymous) on Oct 06, 2010 09:50 pm (
Chapter 6)
I love this story! But its almost getting annoying how Caroline and Justin just don't realize that they're 'it' for each other.
update more!
azchickadee (Signed) on Aug 17, 2010 07:17 pm (
Chapter 5)
shit, Shit, SHIT!! OMG. This is NOT going to end well!! lol...uhm, and can you say HOT. whew! Justin is DAN-GER-OUS. holy cow. lol...that whole licking her ear thing? *shudders* I would have melted into a puddle of goo at his feet!! I don't know how she managed to remain standing after that. I need more. Like now! :)
Anonymous (Anonymous) on Aug 05, 2010 04:01 pm (
Chapter 4)
I love it so far. please keep updating
azchickadee (Signed) on Aug 05, 2010 07:51 am (
Chapter 4)
too short!!! lol....I'm dying to know what happens later when they talk. Is she going to be completely honest with him or lie and make something up like I think she is? lol...I love this story!
Tink (Signed) on Aug 01, 2010 02:14 pm (
Chapter 3)
Great chapter, can't wait to read more
azchickadee (Signed) on Aug 01, 2010 12:07 am (
Chapter 3)
oh good heavens! This whole chapter gave me goose bumps! I love it!!! :) But I'm afraid that Justin's not going to remember anything in the morning and Caroline's just going to be left confused, with feelings starting to emerge for her best friend. Sigh...
Awesome update!!
JoJo (Anonymous) on Jul 26, 2010 02:04 am (
Chapter 2)
I love it!!! I'm so glad you're making this longer. Can't wait to see what develops between these two.
shan030709 (Signed) on Jul 23, 2010 12:37 am (
Chapter 2)
I really enjoyed this when I read it as just a short and I am happy that you are extending it some. Cannot wait to read more!!
azchickadee (Signed) on Jul 22, 2010 11:01 pm (
Chapter 2)
woot! woot! I'm excited that you're working on lengthening this story out! I love your characterization of Justin and I can't wait to read more :)
Anonymous (Anonymous) on Jul 24, 2009 03:24 am (
Chapter 1)
Lovely Story! You're A Great Writer! I Agree On Making It Longer.