LTaylor03 (Anonymous) on Apr 17, 2011 07:44 pm (
Chapter 1: First Impressions)
LMFAO....this whole chapter is poetic...it's SO short but so descriptive that I can see the whole thing happening and I'm dying laughing.
*moving on*
Author's Response: hahaha that is most definitely awesome to hear!
Thank ya hun, I appreciate it!
Rocio Vazquez (Signed) on Sep 06, 2010 08:41 pm (
Chapter 8: Karma)
Great story!
Author's Response: thank ya my dear! much appreciated!
MochaB (Signed) on Nov 04, 2009 12:26 am (
Chapter 8: Karma)
LOL! Oh gosh. This is too funny in a sad, nerve wrecking kind of way. Haha. Can't wait to see what happens next. :o)
Author's Response: lmao oh yes, very very sad! haha.
thank ya my dear! i appreciate it!
Hollie (Signed) on Nov 02, 2009 01:25 pm (
Chapter 8: Karma)
Hahahahahahahahaha. Trace is evil
Author's Response: lol which in turn makes him all the more lovable!
meggie (Signed) on Nov 02, 2009 08:45 am (
Chapter 8: Karma)
lmao trace wins! i dont think theres anything else to say on this one......oh wait, justin fails. and i STILL love abby. she may be all kinds of weird and stupid but i love her.
Author's Response: lmao, trace always wins. duh.
ah yes... justin and abby both fail. lol.
thank ya lady! mucho appreciated!
d_simplicity (Signed) on Nov 02, 2009 02:19 am (
Chapter 8: Karma)
Can I just say I think both Abbey and Justin are two big assholes and I seem to dislike them more and more with each chapter because of the shitty decisions they keep making and keep screwing themselves over? lol with that said, I still do very much love this story and can't wait for shit to blow up in people's faces. That would be awesome to read. Also, what's Justin and Trace up to with the restaurant? I sense some shady happenings afoot. lol. Update soon.
Author's Response: lol oh lord yes, they are both two huge assholes. stupidity all around with these two.
haha, soon, my dear, soon!
thank ya lady! i appreciate it!
glowbug917 (Signed) on Nov 02, 2009 12:29 am (
Chapter 8: Karma)
Um yeah this is about ten different kinds of fucked and awkward. Justin and Abby never quite mastered the don't shit where you eat concept did they?
And I already told you, but seriously. I want Trace for Christmas. Or at least someone exactly like him because he is just the shit. I love him.
Okay more please!
Author's Response: lol i shall send trace wrapped in a big pink bow!
MochaB (Signed) on Oct 02, 2009 01:38 am (
Chapter 7: In Too Deep)
Girl ain't that the truth! Remember that when you get caught! Haha. But I mean...obviously justin and trace are doing something bad here so when they get caught what's going to happen there? I can't wait to find out exactly what they are doing. Molly...there is more to her than what has been said. How would she know to keep an eye out on trace and the restaurant? I'm sure she has sources and stuff, but there is something else there. And why would she even tell them to do so? She really is in deep. It just sucks cause I don't doubt she's a good person. She just letting her job turn her into something she's not. I know I always say that, but it's true and sucks big time. Good for her for not running the story. Now megan has the pics of them smoking weed, but would that really be news shock worthy? Doesn't seem like it to me. But ohmygosh if this chapter didn't remind me of Frankie's sexy self. *drools* lol update soon!
utsukushiijisatsu (Signed) on Sep 29, 2009 09:48 pm (
Chapter 7: In Too Deep)
This gives me a Kate Major feel. Poor Abby 8< I hope she's not going to be made to play the crazy, scorned woman *u* I'd hate to hate Film!JT now.
Author's Response: haha.... showing my air-headedness but, i have no idea who kate major is. lol.
hmm... nah... no crazy, scorened women. i promise! haha.
thank ya love! i appreciate it a ton!
jaye2kaye (Signed) on Sep 29, 2009 08:09 pm (
Chapter 5: Sleeping With The Enemy)
i just don't what to say...my brain and emotional being are confused about what to think
Author's Response: haha i sorry!! lol.
Jbear (Signed) on Sep 29, 2009 12:15 pm (
Chapter 7: In Too Deep)
Really? Are they really stealling money from the resturant? Ok yea Justin is seriously in trouble and lets not even get on Abby who is beyond in over her head!
Author's Response: ummm.... haha.
oh yes... wayyy in over her head. lol.
thanks for reading and reviewing love! i appreciate it!
-stevonnaj (Signed) on Sep 28, 2009 07:21 pm (
Chapter 7: In Too Deep)
mmhmm, i wonder why she's in too deep? its fucking JUSTIN TIMBERLAKE!!
Author's Response: haha ain't that the truth! lol.
thanks for reading and reviewing hun! i appreciate it!
meggie (Signed) on Sep 28, 2009 05:23 pm (
Chapter 7: In Too Deep)
"She doesn't...fuck...she just isn't you."
Part of me wishes you left it at 'she doesn't fuck' LOL i dont know why but that line totally made me giggle! i love that he's a cheating bastard in this. don't ask me why cause it's all sorts of bad but i LOVE it.
i have a feeling trace is up to no good and it hurts my heart because i do love him. he's my favorite.
i don't think abby understands what 'in too deep' means. but damn if i don't love her too.
Author's Response: lmao... ah, bad choice of words on my part. haha.
gah i know... i adore writing trace in all his sarcastic glory, so making him all shady and suspicious just hurts my heart. lol, but it had to be done!
thank ya lady! i appreciate it!
JoJo (Anonymous) on Sep 28, 2009 04:45 pm (
Chapter 7: In Too Deep)
This is going to be one big mess when Justin finds out what she does for a living! DRAMA!! Now feelings are involved and they can't seem to deny each other even though Justin is with someone else. I don't think I'd be able to deny him either! Great update! Keep 'em coming!
Author's Response: haha you and me both dude!
thank ya hun! i appreciate it!
glowbug917 (Signed) on Sep 28, 2009 03:00 pm (
Chapter 7: In Too Deep)
gee, i wonder where you got the idea to make everyone stoney magoo? ;)
i love trace, even when he's stoned and stupid.
justin's apathy for his girlfriend doesn't bode well for abby but she's not thinking clearly either, is she?
everybody's doing all this shady ass shit and i want to be sympathetic with someone but they're all kind of being assholes one way or another, haha.
love it, as per!
Author's Response: psh... i assure you... i have no clue what you're talking about. haha.
well yeah, how do you not love trace? he's pretty much my favorite, ever.
haha ohh yes... all very shady. guess i have to clear that up? or not. lol.
thank ya my dear! mucho appreciated!
