Comments For Up Against the Wall
Anonymous (Anonymous) on Jan 21, 2010 02:56 pm (Hate is a Strong Word but I Really Really Really Don’t Like You)

Wow...this chapter...wow.

I understand why Justin practically went crazy with his 'power' to protect her, but I'm also glad that he found out what he was doing was wrong. But still, he ended up hurting her? Awww, I loved his reaction at the end.

I wonder how Trace is going to react since we never saw his side yet. Who will Mack turn to now? She most be very embaressed.

I'm enjoying this story so much, like you don't even know. I save each chapter onto my computer so I can read it again while I wait for your updates. I'm totally in love with this story. I love Mack, she may be a little too rough 'n' tough but I bet deep down she has a kinder side that she just isn't ready to show yet. Will she end up with Justin or Trace? Or maybe one of the others? Keep up the amazing work. People totally need to read this story.




wipeout22 (Signed) on Jan 21, 2010 12:45 pm (Hate is a Strong Word but I Really Really Really Don’t Like You)

OMG!!

I feel so bad for Mack because of Justin's Plan. But I also feel bad for Justin because he was just trying to protect her and he just cares toooooo much. As for Chris the man needs to learn how to control himself lol.

I want to know what happen next. Cant wait for the next chapter!!!!!

  



Author's Response:

I'm glad you're enjoying the story so much!

I feel bad for Mack, too, but it had to be done for Justin to finally come to terms with his paranoia/concern. Yes, Justin does care a lot, he's like the perfect best friend. And Chris controlling himself over a prank? Ha, I'll bet that never happened, lol.

The next chapter should be up soon, stick around for it. Thanks for the review.




Tiffany (Anonymous) on Jan 14, 2010 07:37 pm (Nothing Endures But Change)
awww  i hope j an m get together! great writing girl can't wait for more!!



kahnechick85 (Signed) on Jan 13, 2010 12:04 pm (Nothing Endures But Change)
I wonder what's going on with her Mother that she's ignoring her child? I hope Justin doesn't freak out and takes a chill pill. I love this, PMS

Author's Response: Her mother's a mystery, but everything shall be explained soon. Haha, yes Justin really needs to take a chill pill. Glad that you're enjoying this so far and thanks for the review.



theusagirl (Anonymous) on Jan 12, 2010 09:44 pm (Nothing Endures But Change)
Good chapter! I liked the family reunion that the guyz had @ the airport..Thanks for updating!

Author's Response: Thanks for enjoying the story so much! The next update should be soon.



JoJo (Anonymous) on Jan 12, 2010 09:17 pm (Nothing Endures But Change)
If Justin finds out all hell will break loose...can't wait!! LOL update again soon!!

Author's Response: Maybe Justin will have a level head? Glad that you're enjoying it. Thanks for reviewing.



Anonymous (Anonymous) on Jan 11, 2010 02:00 pm (Flirting With Disaster...Or Just Plain Flirting)
Oooh. Methinks Trace has a crush. Update soon.



Anonymous (Anonymous) on Jan 11, 2010 01:59 pm (Momma Called the Doctor and the Doctor Said)
Trace better get there soon.



theusagirl (Anonymous) on Jan 01, 2010 08:34 pm (Flirting With Disaster...Or Just Plain Flirting)
Woww..Lou just left her there, while she was gasping for air, its a good thing Trace came over in the nick of time. Thank u Trace!

My Christmas & New Years was great..& I will ALWAYZ stay *NSYNC no matter how old I get.



theusagirl (Anonymous) on Jan 01, 2010 06:56 pm (Momma Called the Doctor and the Doctor Said)
U know I can actually picture them doin pushups & Mack bossing them around..which I love..& Chris's crazy laugh..I can see him laughing..lolz oh & I love it when Chris was talking abt JC's bum & Joey saying he doesnt hav 1..(Hey Ive seen him live, & he has one..ok off topic) lmaooo ok moving along =P

And OMG Lou is a freak, he better keep his hands to himself, he such an animal.



theusagirl (Anonymous) on Jan 01, 2010 06:23 pm (The (Angry) Lion Sleeps Tonight)
Yayy surprise bday party for JC! & that was nice that his fam showed up..soo nice..& the ending..lolz. =P



theusagirl (Anonymous) on Jan 01, 2010 05:00 pm (What Happens in Sweden Stays in Sweden)

I liked the way u described each of the member's voice ranges, & the way every1 praised JC for his AMAZING singing voice..& I also liked when Mack & Justin were calling eachother names...hahahah Shimp! sooo funny!

 Good job! =)




theusagirl (Anonymous) on Jan 01, 2010 04:29 pm (What the Hell Just Happened Here?)

Ooooooh....I wouldnt mind @ all touching JC's bulge..& listening to his heartbeat.. =P I really like this chapter...

What the hell just happened here is soooo right!




theusagirl (Anonymous) on Dec 30, 2009 09:52 pm (My Lips are Sealed)

Hahahaha I bursted out laughing when Chris said "Ghosts?, we get to drink ghosts?? lmaooo Chris is soo funny..& Nikki wants to break up with JC!? over the phone while Nikki was talking 2 Mack?? & JC doesnt kno...yet..

I like this chapter..its good!




theusagirl (Anonymous) on Dec 30, 2009 09:37 pm (A Piece of the Puzzle)
Woot woot! Europe..hahah I love it when Justin said "Mom im 15, dont kiss me anymore, its uncool" That is sooo like him..





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