a second part for this would be fantastic.
the last four paragraphs had this edge of suspense to them and it was freaking brilliant, especially the way it ended.
this was awesome my dear!
Author's Response: I like it. She's not just asking me for more, she's giving me critical analysis to enforce the asking for more :o)
Oh! I told your Muse to continue with it. Your Muse agreed. Just thought I'd let you know. You know, since you're the writing it and all.
Author's Response: Her Greatness Hollie? I'm so going to make everybody address me as that from now on. lol Thanks hon
Author's Response: :o)
Author's Response: Will do!
Oh, ouch. That was a rough one, Hols. But I still loved it, you know. You have that effect on me, and it's a little disconcerting to be honest :)
I like it where it stands. If the muse happens to hit and another chapter is born, that's cool too, but I think it's just dandy (in a totally sad sort of way) all on it's own.
Author's Response: I like to disconcert people. I'm strange like that lol
I like how this starts at the middle. Gives room for a lot of guessing 8Db
I feel like Alice has other motivations she's hiding from Nora as to why she pushed her to break up with him. And I think the situation at hand was just blown out of proportion and when Nora realizes this, I sense a big blowout between the two.
I feel sorry for Justin 8< But I think that's just me being partial.
Good start :) Can't wait to read more~
Author's Response: Hmm, got to wonder why Alice was so insistent, eh...
Author's Response: Well I've finally decided you're getting it - as soon as I've finished writing it, anyway *lol*
