I LOVED IT
And I know this sounds sad, but i tooootally conjured up the image of Taylor Lautner as the 'Jake' character. Sad? Oh, yes. But it didn't hurt how entertained I was by this fic. Truly one of my favorites. God love ya.
And please let me know when and if you write a sequel. I'll be keeping my eye out for it ;)
I'm so happy this story got picked to be featured - that is, of course, until my brilliant self realized I'd read it all in one sitting last weekend and never left a proper review. Blame the aftermath of tequila, it surely is the devil.
Anyway, I loved this, is my long rambling point. Your characters are so well drawn and the dramatic turns so realistic. They're not done for the sake of having drama, but done because your characters are human, are fallible, frustrating and endearing in turns and I fucking loved every word of it. Well - okay - I did actually go to NYU for college so there were a few inconsistencies there but then I'd just be nitpicking and who the fuck cares, really? Suspension of disbelief, woo!
My point is (I do have one, really) you've done a lovely job and it's just a kick-ass piece of writing all around.
Author's Response: Hmmm...not sure how that happened! But it's fixed now.
Sequel? Did I just read sequel?
I would say I'm excited, but that would be the biggest understatement in the history of the world
Author's Response: Ha, yes. Yes you did. But seeing as how I haven't really written much of anything in, oh, two years...I wouldn't expect much.