Comments For Sweet Child O' Mine
MochaB (Signed) on Sep 27, 2009 10:08 pm (Chapter 4: Little Miss Muffet)
Things just keep getting better and better. :o/ but where could she go? Really now. She couldn't have gotten far. I knew he couldn't have told her about her mom. I mean if that isn't a big enough contraceptive...haha. Update soon. :o)

Author's Response:

haha yeah, the whole mother thing has been buried for quite some time, so we'll see what he does with that!

thank ya my dear! i appreciate it a ton!




glowbug917 (Signed) on Sep 26, 2009 01:47 am (Chapter 4: Little Miss Muffet)

um, i love AJ. i would totally be friends with her - i love that she's not doing the stereotypical girl bullshit and is pissed because she's worried about LUCY.

as always, trace owns my soul. 

and justin getting his head out of his ass is always a nice plus. 

but where the fuck did she go?? haha you tease!



Author's Response:

hence the goal with AJ... i wanted her to be a little different and having lucy be her main concern seemed to really drive that point home, so i'm glad that came across the way i wanted it to!

lmao, doesn't he always?

haha well yeah, it had to happen at some point.

lmao... all shall be revealed in time!




Anonymous (Anonymous) on Sep 26, 2009 12:57 am (Chapter 4: Little Miss Muffet)
Can't wait to see what happens. Update soon! :)

Author's Response: thank ya love! and it's on the way soon, i swears it!



Jamie Lynn (Signed) on Sep 25, 2009 11:02 pm (Chapter 4: Little Miss Muffet)
So I guess it's safe to say that unless he completely and totally redeems himself...Justin isn't up for Father of the Year award?

Wow...that kid. I feel her pain. I spent my teenage years with just my dad...and my step-witch but she doesn't count lol, ahem anyway...and I would be just as terrified as she is if I would have ever had to tell my dad that I was pregnant. I mean...god. And to not have anyone on her side but the short shit? Although Trace is awesomely awesome in his own right...but it's different not having someone thats ACTUALLY family on your side. Wow. Girl, this is going to turn into some deep shit. I really like this.

Author's Response:

haha we shall see!

thank ya lady! i appreciate it a ton!




Hollie (Signed) on Sep 25, 2009 01:26 pm (Chapter 4: Little Miss Muffet)

Well that's a huge surprise. Unless you possess a brain cell, anyway.

I get so mad at your characters and I don't know why. They're not real, I should not be so emotionally involved



Author's Response:

lmao true, very true.

haha oh yes... i think we're all prone to getting mad at fictional characters, i think that's probably why we all belong in a padded cell somewhere, doped up on happy pills. lol.




JoJo (Anonymous) on Sep 25, 2009 12:53 pm (Chapter 4: Little Miss Muffet)
AJ is absolutely right! Lucy needs her dad right now because I can only imagine what she's feeling. She probably feels abandoned and hated by her dad! She has to be terrified out of her mind! Then he finally comes to senses and now it may to late! I really hope he can fix this because Lucy is going to need him!

Author's Response:

ah yeah, i see AJ being right becoming a bit of a habit. lol. and right you are... so i guess we'll see if he mans up or not.

thank ya love! i appreciate it a ton!




Jbear (Signed) on Sep 25, 2009 11:27 am (Chapter 4: Little Miss Muffet)
Yea Justin what did u think was gonna happen when ur kid thinks u hate them. They leave because they don't think they are wanted. I can mayb give u being angey the 1st night but 2 days come on!. Great update.

Author's Response:

haha yeahhh... he's not doing the supportive parent things so well at the moment, so we shall see what happens i suppose. haha.

thank ya my dear! i appreciate it!




MissTasha (Signed) on Sep 25, 2009 06:55 am (Chapter 4: Little Miss Muffet)
Good fucking job, dipshit. Bang up fucking job. Get this man a Super Dad coffee mug, stat! He's certainly earned it. Justin is a asshole-asshat-douchenozzle, right now. Please update soon.

Author's Response:

lmao oh my god... i love the 'super dad coffee mug' line. i so needed that today! haha.

thank ya my dear! i appreciate it a ton!




meggie (Signed) on Sep 25, 2009 04:53 am (Chapter 4: Little Miss Muffet)
Too early to process but u didn't want to not leave sething so here ya go: more please

Author's Response: lmao, on the way soon... i swear!



Jamie Lynn (Signed) on Sep 20, 2009 01:31 pm (Chapter 3: London Bridge Is Falling Down)
Wow. Just wow.

Yeah, that was everything I anticipated and more! I mean. Dang.

Author's Response:

haha, that's a good thing, right?

thanks for reading and reviewing lady!




kahnechick85 (Signed) on Sep 19, 2009 02:45 am (Chapter 3: London Bridge Is Falling Down)
Damn. I was not expecting that. I can't wait to see what's going to happen next. PMS

Author's Response:

haha we shall see! i'm sure there'll be all sorts of shit hitting the fan though. lol.

thanks for reading and reviewing hun! i appreciate it!




mzmillion (Signed) on Sep 19, 2009 12:42 am (Chapter 3: London Bridge Is Falling Down)
awww that was sad!!! Kevin and his "Mr. Timberlake I can hear you" made me feel so bad for him...poor kid. Got called retarted and was still respectful to the father......damn and poor AJ.... poor everybody, just kids doing dumb kid shit!

Author's Response:

haha oh yes... dumb shit all around!

thanks for reading and reviewing hun!




d_simplicity (Signed) on Sep 18, 2009 10:54 pm (Chapter 3: London Bridge Is Falling Down)
lol where do you come up with these ideas for stories? They're so out there but so good. HEHEHE. Of course I love this one to pieces. Very nice twist with daddy!J. Can't really say much. I got too much to say. Justin over reacted though. He needs to be there for his daughter now more than ever esp. since he himself went through the same thing when he had her. Hello!!!! lol. Loving this one update soon.

Author's Response:

haha, i'm just insane. that's all there is to it. lol.

ah. all very good points. he's just a tad freaked out and i think he isn't quite sure how to handle it.

thanks for reading and reviewing lady! i appreciate it a ton!




radiofeet (Signed) on Sep 18, 2009 10:18 pm (Chapter 3: London Bridge Is Falling Down)
I KNEW CASTING BLEEKER AS THE BF WASN'T A COINCIDENCE!

Author's Response: haha, i went back on forth on who to use as kevin, and the always lovely glow suggested michael cera, and it totally fit, so all credit for that goes to her. lol



glowbug917 (Signed) on Sep 18, 2009 05:41 pm (Chapter 3: London Bridge Is Falling Down)

i do so love the shit hitting the fan. and seriously - the line about kevin being retarded is CLASSIC.

i'm not digging lynn's whole "AJ is the devil whore" attitude - last i check, she's not Lucy's mom and can't control whether the kid has the brains to use a condom or not.

and okay fine, justin, not the ideal scenario. but when your kid's a mess you suck it up and be the adult, don't throw a damn temper tantrum! boys, so stupid. 

yaaaaay now more! *waits impatiently*



Author's Response:

haha well yeah, shit hitting the fan is always fun.

lol yeahh... i decided to go with a different side of lynn for this one. i know she's always supposed to be like super nice mom or whatever, but i decided she needed to be bitchy this time. lol.

haha when doesn't justin throw a temper tantrum?

haha, soon, i swears it!

thank ya my dear!






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