Comments For Sweet Child O' Mine
MochaB (Signed) on Sep 11, 2009 02:10 am (Chapter 2: A Wise Old Owl)
Kate...lucy's 15 year old still-a-kid-herself better NOT be having no baby!! Girl don't make me reach in this story and hurt this child. Why do you always have me wanting to reach into your stories and hurt your characters? Seriously though, has nobody talked to lucy? Instilled some freaking fear into her?!? Anybody tell her about her own mom?!? Seriously! Then I'm like why was she somewhere alone with a boy? But then obviously that means some lies have been spoken and secrets have been kept. We need some discipline up in that house! We. Haha. You know what I mean! Lol I may be jumping to conclusions, and I hope I am, but if I'm not...*shakes head* anyway, I want to know what's the deal with lynn and aj's dislike for each other, especially lynn's since she pretty much called her a whore. Haha. Update soon!! :o)

Author's Response:

lol, i have no idea what you're talking about. lucy is every bit the innocent, 15 year old i've described her as.

ah, all shall be explained, i swears it! lol.

thank ya my dear! i appreciate it!




glowbug917 (Signed) on Sep 11, 2009 02:04 am (Chapter 2: A Wise Old Owl)

okay, yes, i imagine being sixteen and getting dumped by the boy of your teenage dreams sucks ass and all, and maybe even at some point you're upset til you're sick, but for almost a week? erm. that's a bit overkill. 

and then, alternately, eating everything in sight when it's not in your nature?

justin you stupid boy, put two and two together.

anyway, loved it, as per, darlin!



Author's Response:

haha you know me... i like my justin stupid and oblivious, it can't be helped. lol.

thank ya my dear! now... go finish quicksand and start the sequel. (i swear, i'm totally not being greedy or demanding, or anything of the sort)




-stevonnaj (Signed) on Sep 03, 2009 08:03 pm (Chapter 1: Rock-A-Bye Baby)
lol reminds me of my father. haha

Author's Response:

lol ah, i know exactly what ya mean! and i'm super glad it's coming across the way i intended!

thanks for reading and reviewing hun! i appreciate it!




MochaB (Signed) on Sep 03, 2009 02:10 pm (Chapter 1: Rock-A-Bye Baby)
:o) I really like this. It's sweet and funny and brings back memories. Haha. It's cool to read a story where justin is in his early 30's and has a teenage daughter. Very interesting. Trace is funny. I liked the short friend jail line. Lol I'm enjoying this so far and can't wait to read more! :o)

Author's Response:

well thank ya my dear! i wanted to do something a little different, so i'm glad it seems to be working.

haha oh yes... you gotta love trace.

thanks for reading and reviewing hun! i appreciate it!




kahnechick85 (Signed) on Sep 03, 2009 01:20 pm (Chapter 1: Rock-A-Bye Baby)
Aww Poor Justin! I really hope that Lucy is doing what she told him she was. I can't wait to see what's going to happen with AJ. I love this, PMS

Author's Response:

haha we shall see i suppose.

thanks for reading and reviewing hun! i appreciate it!




Jamie Lynn (Signed) on Sep 03, 2009 12:38 pm (Chapter 1: Rock-A-Bye Baby)
Gah, Trace...the love of my life! LOL. The short friend that isn't afraid to go to jail. I WAS LAUGHING FOR 10 MINUTES over that line! LOL. Seriously I'm loving this. Daddy!J is just...words can't describe the sexiness.

Do I have to tell you that I thought it was awesome? Because I think you already know LOL!

Author's Response:

lol oh trust me... i am so not that funny. haha, but yes... trace = love, that much is for sure.

lol, that's always awesome to hear, so thank ya lady! i appreciate it!




Jbear (Signed) on Sep 03, 2009 12:32 pm (Chapter 1: Rock-A-Bye Baby)
Aww Justin is such a big softiee!!! I can't wait to see where this is going and Trace is funny with the crap that he says. It seems as tho AJ is great for helping balance everything out. And Kate what is wrong with 2 of u? The world would be a much more awsome place. LOL Seriously though between you D_simplcity, Heather and Whitesoxlover you guys are really helping me to get back into the sprit of writing so thank you. Hurry up and update tho. LOL

Author's Response:

haha oh he totally is... and trace is just... amazing. always, always good for comedic relief. and aj is definitely the balancing factor, so i'm glad that's coming across well.

haha dude... the world could not contain this much crazy, trust me. lol, but i appreciate the compliment!

and that's awesome to hear! kind of mind blowing to think i could inspire anybody, but that's great. haha.

and i shall try my best! lol.

thank ya hun! i appreciate it a bunch!




Hollie (Signed) on Sep 03, 2009 12:13 pm (Chapter 1: Rock-A-Bye Baby)

"Luce... if some boy tries any bullshit... you make sure to tell them your daddy has an extensive gun and knife collection." Trace smirks and takes a long gulp of his beer. "And, he has a short friend who ain't afraid to go to jail."   

Okay, for this you just made it into my book of serious win. 



Author's Response:

lol yes! go me! now i feel all special and stuff! haha.

 




mzmillion (Signed) on Sep 03, 2009 10:34 am (Chapter 1: Rock-A-Bye Baby)
awwwwwwww

Author's Response: haha thank ya hun!



MissTasha (Signed) on Sep 03, 2009 09:32 am (Chapter 1: Rock-A-Bye Baby)
Good chapter. Please update soon.

Author's Response: thank ya my dear! i appreciate it!



meggie (Signed) on Sep 03, 2009 04:33 am (Chapter 1: Rock-A-Bye Baby)
It's official! This is my favorite Justin! Haha he's just guh! I'm in love!! But... I know you & I'm worried about this dance... Hmmmm ok I'm done cause I need breakfast! Love ya

Author's Response:

haha oh yes... this justin is just pure love.

psh... i assure you, i have no clue what you're talking about. it's totally an innocent high school dance.... or maybe not, we'll see. haha.

thank ya lady! i appreciate it a ton!




JoJo (Anonymous) on Sep 03, 2009 03:37 am (Chapter 1: Rock-A-Bye Baby)
I love Daddy!Justin. I love how overprotective he is...reminds me of my dad! HAHA love it so far. Keep 'em coming!

Author's Response:

haha oh yes... he's definitely a typiclal over-protective dad. lol.

thank ya my dear! i appreciate it a bunch!




glowbug917 (Signed) on Sep 03, 2009 03:31 am (Chapter 1: Rock-A-Bye Baby)

"And, he has a short friend who ain't afraid to go to jail." 

There are just not enough words for how much I love Trace. 

I knew something was up with Justin and AJ! It'll be fun to watch that play out. 

I know what it's like to be sixteen and have an obnoxious overprotective dad but on Justin it's just adorable, haha. 



Author's Response:

haha dude... who doesn't love trace? seriously.

ahh... that's all gonna be background type stuff, so we shall see, but yes.. it was quite obvious. lol

psh.. you and me both dude and it gets old as hell, but agreed... it's all kinds of cute on justin. haha




Hollie (Signed) on Sep 01, 2009 11:42 am (Prologue: North Wind Doth Blow)
I love me some Daddy!Justin. I approve.

Author's Response:

haha... who doesn't love daddy!j? it would just be strange not to.

and i am so very glad you approve lady! lol.

thank ya my dear! much appreciated!




meggie (Signed) on Sep 01, 2009 05:54 am (Prologue: North Wind Doth Blow)

when i saw this i was like 'what the hell is crazy girl doing now?' but daddy!j makes me smile! i have no clue where this is going but i'm super excited.

and glow is really all kinds of awesome- endless knowledge of fun! haha



Author's Response:

lol ah i know... and crazy is pretty much dead on.

eep! she totally is. she encourages my insanity so that alone makes her pretty kick ass. lol.

thank ya lady! i appreciate it a ton!






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