ok, thoughts and comments...
first off, I am in love with this story (not really a big surprise since I like pretty much any and everything you write) and I think your writing is amazing!
#2: this part here, made me laugh out loud..."Oh, let's start talking about our past, Mr. Sugar Rush. I do recall being smacked in the face, jumped on and given shaving creme on my face with what little sleep I got with you four hellions around."
"I know nothing you are speaking of."
#3. don't tease me, it's just mean: He had to call them.
He wanted the group back.
JC, included.
#4. I wanted to cry at the end and be a part of that family/group hug. He really is going to be okay, right? Right? I don't know if I could handle JC dying...
Author's Response: I love reviews like this. It's when the reader gets into detail that you know you hit a nerve or a smile or something. For that, thanks! :) And obviously thanks for reading and loving, haha :)
Author's Response: Thaaaaaank you Marija!!! :) :)
"No," he chuckled. "Your words. I always loved your verse better than mine.
Me too
He's a good guy, everyone wants him to succeed, everyone wants him happy.
Me too
"Without you in my life, Jaaay-Teee, I just wouldn't be living at all ..."
I always thought (in my JuiCy mind) that their sing it like that to each other.
Author's Response: lol, I loved both versions. The first verse struck a chord in my heart, though; but, you know me, I prefer hearing JC singing so that second verse is probably embedded in my mind forever, hahaha. And I actually thought of the JuC thing when I wrote that, haha
Finally!
I was confused with the italic (at first). Very dramaticbut very well done.
Author's Response: aww, sorry ... I'm glad you figured it out. I probably should have made it more obvious what the italics were. And thank you!! :)
Author's Response: Yeah, someone had to do it, right?! Hahaha
I cried again. That whole nightmare with Lance, Chris, and Joey - fuck. I was a sobbing mess.
I cant even IMAGINE how writing this is, but reading it is so emotional, my GOD! I love them so much and all I wanna do is hug JC the whole time and Justin is so awesome too.
Roy and Karen? wow.... its gonna be something.
Author's Response: *hands over tissue* :)
poor JC...I'LL MAKE IT BETTER! lol
Author's Response: lol, meeee too, Lauren, meeeeeeeee too!
oooooooo i LOVE these guys.
"Or what about that time in Europe when we had to bake cookies for some show? I was Cookie Man and you were my sidekick -"
"Sprinkles."
hehe! I remember that.
srsly JC's dying talk blows but... totally understandable. And i had to choke back tears during his whole "i wanna be called daddy" speach *guh*
Author's Response: The first time I saw that clip, I nearly peed myself. They were like Tweedle Dee and Tweedle Dum back then. Dying!JC doesn't make me happy, either :(
Awww. Poor JC. I love him in his weak state but...poor JC. And poor Justin. and poor Roy and Karen.
Please update soon.
Author's Response: Hopefully the updates will be closer than they have been. I'm glad you're reading and enjoying :)
Author's Response: Thank you, thank you, thank you!! :)
Author's Response: Thank you :) It's really hard to write stuff like this, especially if you lack the experience of the disease/whatever is focused and if you prefer to write love/fluff ... this one has a little mix of some, I think ...
sigh...this story must be phsycially and emotionally draining for you to write! I'm exhausted just reading the damn thing! lol...
Loved the reference to "Pixie Gate 1996"....lmao!!
Is JC ever going to let his family now what's going on or is he just going to continue to be stubborn? I think they should hire Lauren to be the private nurse! *nudge, nudge* lol...JC needs to find something to live and fight for and what better than love? :D
Author's Response: I re-read your review and I now have 'Better Than Love' stuck in my head. I'm inspired. For this story, too. I think you'll know when it comes up, too :) I may have to credit you for the idea, haha
Author's Response: Thank you :) I've been trying harder and harder to mature my craft; there are a bunch of great writers on here and elsewhere and I can only strive to be like them :) And thank you for the compliment! :)
damn you! i'm crying like a baby here!
my poor JC... my poor Justin... omgomgomg. I love this and hate it at the same time lol! but love more... which is why I will torture myself and beg you now for more updates.
without yooooou in my life baby, i just wouldn't be living at allllll!
*sobs*
Author's Response: lol I feel the love/hate-vibe going on. It's all good; I'd probably be on the hating end, myself :) Thanks for the serenade, btw - song's stuck in my head now :)
STOP!
OMG I need a tissue!
I love this! so hard! JC is killing me.... and Justin geeeez!
its JuC but not but yes. LOVE!
Author's Response: Exactly, lmao. I sensed the love, but not quite to the extent of JuC, hahahaha
No tears. Don't cry! :)
