Comments For Alternative To Love
MochaB (Signed) on Nov 15, 2009 09:10 pm (Chapter 10)
Obviously I have nothing good to say about jess so...yeah...I can't believe jordan didn't say anything back. I really can't believe she even believed what she was saying, but I guess since she's been so hurt in the past she believes the negative more than the positive. Hopefully lynn and paul like her. It would probably be good to get to know lynn so she can have someone to talk to about baby things; someone that has already gone through it. Update soon! :o)
Author's Response:
Author's Response:
Yes, meeting of the parents will be next chapter.
I think Jordan was so shocked and uncomfortable with the whole conversation, she didn't feel she had much more to say back. She gets insecure when confronted with something she is ashamed of. There will be more about that later...
mzmillion (Signed) on Nov 15, 2009 06:32 pm (Chapter 10)
more please....
Author's Response: Coming! Thanx for reading and reviewing!
Author's Response: Coming! Thanx for reading and reviewing!
sarah1988 (Signed) on Nov 15, 2009 05:22 pm (Chapter 10)
jess is a bitch. :( he needs to get rid off her. she's disturbing and stupid and buah... i'm afraid she's gonna go all psycho and try to kill the baby or something...she seems obsessed with justin. :( poor jordan
Author's Response:
Author's Response:
LOL! I have to say that the way I portray her here has nothing to do with what I think about the real her, I have nothing against her in real life, and I'm sure she's a sweet girl. I just needed an attention seeking air-head for the story:-)
Tina (Anonymous) on Nov 15, 2009 03:42 pm (Chapter 10)
awwww so cute!
Author's Response: Thank you:-) And thanx for reading and reviewing
Author's Response: Thank you:-) And thanx for reading and reviewing
Tink (Anonymous) on Nov 15, 2009 11:18 am (Chapter 10)
Loving this story and can't wait to read more. He needs to break up with Jessica and get together with Jordan!!
Author's Response:
Author's Response:
Thank you!
Yeah, he does, but will he?
MochaB (Signed) on Nov 09, 2009 06:18 pm (Chapter 9)
Lol uh oh. Can't wait to see how this conversation goes. I'm glad jordan knows justin would never physically hurt her. Obviously she's gone through great deal in her life so far. Hopefully she'll be able to talk about it to justin soon about her past. I'm sure it would be therapeutic and maybe she'll talk to a therapist too. This baby, although it seemed like a bad thing, is a great thing for her. It has changed her for the better. Can't wait to read more! Update soon! :o)
Author's Response: Yes, maybe it's changed her for the better, but it has also opened several cans of worms... Now she has to face the skeletons.
Author's Response: Yes, maybe it's changed her for the better, but it has also opened several cans of worms... Now she has to face the skeletons.
Tink (Signed) on Nov 09, 2009 11:29 am (Chapter 9)
Really enjoying this story and can't wait to read more
Author's Response: Thank you! More coming this week
Author's Response: Thank you! More coming this week
JoJo (Anonymous) on Nov 08, 2009 03:41 pm (Chapter 9)
You need to update like right now! I really hope Jessica doesn't act like a jerk! Loved it! Update again soon!
Author's Response: Hmmm...Can't promise you that she won't...:-)
Author's Response: Hmmm...Can't promise you that she won't...:-)
sarah1988 (Signed) on Nov 08, 2009 03:28 pm (Chapter 9)
Author's Response:
that cliffhanger is so mean!
jordan...she's mysterious. i really wanna know what happened to her! and it's a good sign that she's jealous. :D
and justin,...he should just get his thoughts together and finally dump jessica.
Author's Response:
You'll find out more about Jordan soon.
And yes, Justin needs to loose his confusion and get his head straight. He's in for more than he thinks...
Tina (Anonymous) on Nov 08, 2009 01:12 pm (Chapter 9)
Cliffhanger!
Author's Response: Yes, indeed:-)
Author's Response: Yes, indeed:-)
MochaB (Signed) on Nov 03, 2009 02:39 pm (Chapter 8)
Oh crap! Lol he definitely has a right to freak out! He's worried she'll hurt the baby or is hurting the baby since he doesn't know that she hasn't been doing it lately. But I can't wait to see how this convo goes. Other than that, it's really cool how they are getting along and jordan is behaving. It's cool that they are seeing other sides of each other. It's awesome jordan sees how much this baby means to justin and how much different he is from the other people she has met in her life. She's got some explaining to do though with this. It's a little tricky though cause they have been doing some things that were a surprise and well justin is still attached soo... Lol we shall see! Update soon! :o)
Author's Response: Yeah, they are slowly getting to know each other. This situation is so difficult for both of them, and now they start to come to terms with the fact that they are in this together, and need to make the best out of it. And for Justins reaction to the coke...? Well, stay tuned...
Author's Response: Yeah, they are slowly getting to know each other. This situation is so difficult for both of them, and now they start to come to terms with the fact that they are in this together, and need to make the best out of it. And for Justins reaction to the coke...? Well, stay tuned...
JoJo (Anonymous) on Nov 02, 2009 12:09 am (Chapter 8)
Uh-oh!! Loved it! Please update again soon!
Author's Response: Oh yeah, shit is about to hit the fan:-)
Author's Response: Oh yeah, shit is about to hit the fan:-)
Tink (Signed) on Nov 01, 2009 03:43 pm (Chapter 8)
Really enjoying this story and can't wait to read more
Author's Response: Thank you! More coming soon:-)
Author's Response: Thank you! More coming soon:-)
Tina (Anonymous) on Nov 01, 2009 01:39 pm (Chapter 8)
Oh no, it was perfect until the very last part..Update soon!
Author's Response:
Author's Response:
Yeah, I had to just ruin it for them, didn't I?
MochaB (Signed) on Oct 29, 2009 08:36 pm (Chapter 7)
Well this may be an actual good thing for jordan. She's already acting well...like maybe who she used to be or would have been before whatever crap that happened in her life happened. Maybe this meeting of justin's family will do her some good. Give her some support since she obviously has no family and really no friends. It's sad really, but yeah...this baby may be a good thing for her. Let's see how long jessica sticks around. Update soon! :o)
