Comments For Role Play
MochaB (Signed) on Oct 07, 2009 03:04 pm (Chapter 1)
I'm really late, but golly gosh gosh that was hot!! Lol and pretty funny too. Definitely had some funny lines in there. Sexy story to go with a sexy song. :o)

Author's Response: Hehe....it's okay, I'm late replying.  I've been such a slacker lately.  Anyway--super glad you liked it! :)



Tara (Anonymous) on Oct 03, 2009 10:29 pm (Chapter 1)

woooooo! *fans herself*

Sounds like its going to have a sequel? Yes please!



Author's Response:

Lol...I should do a sequel.  That' s agood idea!

 

Thanks for the review darling, as usual.  You make me keep writing! :)




Timberlake (Signed) on Sep 30, 2009 10:42 pm (Chapter 1)

*orgasm*

seriously, i think that i'm about to buy a ticket to LA, pick up some 'supplies' and rape the shit out of Justin. omg... him all tied up and submissive...ol' child, do you know what you just did to my libido? mmm...mmm...mmm..... lol

is this TMI? well too bad - it was just that damn good. Honestly, I was caught up in the first half of that song about being touched in my sleep, but the second part about him needing some assistance barely crossed phased me, but this story right here made that second verse my absolute FAVORITE part of the song. i'm seriously bowing down to you. whoever does this challenge next has a lot to compete with. bravo!



Author's Response:

haha...not too much TMI at all.  I'm really glad that you enjoyed it.  :)  let me know if you ever want to issue another challenge--I'm up for it.  I've written a lot of other visuals in the dirty series, if you feel the need for more of a Justin fix.  I highly recommend first lady--it was my first, so I put a lot of effort into it.  I think it's the hottest, for sure.  haha.

thanks for the review!!!! (and the story idea!) 




Keediluv (Signed) on Sep 30, 2009 12:32 am (Chapter 1)

This was nice....I especially like the playful banter Justin had going on.  Good work!

Ki



Author's Response: awww, thanks Ki, for the review.  really glad you like the batner--i'm working on my dialogue.  I'm usually more of a descriptor...so thanks for the compliment!



MissTasha (Signed) on Sep 29, 2009 10:56 pm (Chapter 1)
Loved iiiiiiiiiiiiiiiit!

Author's Response: Thanks MissTasha.  Let me know when you want me to write a visual for you, and I so will.  As always, love the review :)  I promise I'll update more often.





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