Comments For Careful
glowbug917 (Signed) on Aug 30, 2010 02:58 am (Chapter 30: Loose Ends & Grown Ups)

While I would still like to see geese peck out Keri's eyes, her being a pathetic washed up druggie suffices nicely.

And look at Madison go, being an adult for three minutes! I'm so proud of her. And I love her so much for being pissed about it, but she's got a point. being a grown up is totally lame. 

Oh, and I like when you write them this adorable. It makes me happy. Keep it up. Or i will beat you. 

More now!



Author's Response:

lmao so violent! good lord.

dude.. no joke. i would like to go back to being 13 and stay there forever. 

umm... adorable is so very difficult for me. so we shall see. haha.




Hollie (Signed) on Aug 25, 2010 05:29 pm (Chapter 29: Date Night)
Damn. And here was me thinking all the research you had to do for a date was finding a nice restaurant - though that would involve less music history and cultural relevance.

Author's Response: haha dates involving music history are so much more fun though!



Calandra Stevens (Anonymous) on Aug 25, 2010 01:35 am (Chapter 28: Grammy's & Karaoke)

"Yeah… I’d have to say I agree. That just might be the most disturbing shit I’ve ever seen in my life, and that’s saying something since I used to wake up and have to see Chris Kirkpatrick every morning." 

One of your best lines ever. I really think it's my all time favorite. That is a scary, scary thought. I mean...can you imagine being homeboys girlfriend? Waking up to him running around the house at 2AM singing product jingles like "Give me a break", just because he is bored and wants you to wake up? LMAO EFFIN HILARIOUS AND SCARY. Very. Very. SCARY.



Author's Response: haha well... chris is just scary. poor little guy.



Calandra Stevens (Anonymous) on Aug 25, 2010 01:28 am (Chapter 29: Date Night)
I...Guh....YAY!!!!!!!  :o)  Ur seriously going to be a famous writer someday. I just know it. But you are already infamous with all of us here at NF. I HEART where this is going!! YAY YAY double YAY! how sweet of justin.. i knew hed come around. and GO MADISON for finally getting on board with shit. Pheewww...we were really nervous for awhile. Just..i think out of the entire storyline Careful has been my personal favorite.

Author's Response:

haha well thank ya my dear!

hmm... i think of the three, vegas is probably my personal favorite, but i'm just special like that. lol

 




meggie (Signed) on Aug 23, 2010 06:55 pm (Chapter 29: Date Night)
you're the only person that didn't hurt my heart this morning. lol so, cookies for you.

Author's Response:

that's probably because megan and glow are made of pure evil.

and yay for cookies!




mzmillion (Signed) on Aug 23, 2010 03:07 pm (Chapter 29: Date Night)
awwwwwww

Author's Response: haha pretty much the response i was going for, so yay!



JoJo (Anonymous) on Aug 23, 2010 02:43 am (Chapter 29: Date Night)
Love it! Great update! They seem so happy and I really hope you don't ruin it!! HAHA but what kind of story would it be without some more drama! Anyway, I love this and I hope you update again soon!!

Author's Response:

ruin it? why, i would never.

ok... i would. maybe a little. haha.

thank ya my dear, i appreciate it!




glowbug917 (Signed) on Aug 23, 2010 01:59 am (Chapter 29: Date Night)

Okay seriously, how fucking cute are they?

But firstly...I love JC's irritation with Frankie. It makes me giggle like a five year old picturing him all cute and pouty and threatened. 

But back to the adorable. Of course she would demand a date lmfao and be a little shit about it. It's just so very her (YOU) and makes me love her all the more. 

And the fact that he did all that research to make it a special date made me smile all big. So much cheese and happy and don't you ruin it or I'll beat you! 

Oh. and. MORE. 



Author's Response:

haha umm... yes. pouty jc is all sorts of adorable.

it's so very difficult for me to do cheesey/adorable... so i might have to ruin it. just a little.

geez... so demanding!




meggie (Signed) on Aug 22, 2010 11:57 am (Chapter 28: Grammy's & Karaoke)

oh trace. trace, trace, trace. i have nothing else except for that.

and with the grammy's!! I WISH THIS SHIT WAS REAL! lmao

and justin.....i'm scared.  'if things are this good after only a week....in about a year, we're gonna have it fucking made'. that scares me a whole, whole lot. i promise, if you break my heart, this will be problems.    :)



Author's Response:

haha yes. it's so very hard to not love trace.

lmao i feel like she deserves some good stuff damnit!

i will not break your heart. well... i'll try not to. we'll leave it at that.

thank ya my love, i appreciate it a whole bunch!




Hollie (Signed) on Aug 21, 2010 03:39 pm (Chapter 28: Grammy's & Karaoke)

 

“What the fucking hell is he doing?” Benny screeches, followed by Stella shouting “my eyes, my eyes” over and over.

Yeah… I’d have to say I agree. That just might be the most disturbing shit I’ve ever seen in my life, and that’s saying something since I used to wake up and have to see Chris Kirkpatrick every morning.

 

I was laughing hard enough at the first part, and then it got to the Chris crack and all previous bets were off. You are so made of win



Author's Response:

lmao i may or may not have laughed myself when i wrote it.

and woo! i like winning!

thank ya lady, mucho appreciated!




JoJo (Anonymous) on Aug 20, 2010 03:36 pm (Chapter 28: Grammy's & Karaoke)
It's so nice to see them happy! I don't wanna get my hopes up though because something always screws it up and I'm left disappointed. Great update! Hope another one is coming soon!

Author's Response:

haha, i know right? i think the happy stuff is well deserved this time around.

thank ya my dear, i appreciate it!




Jbear (Signed) on Aug 20, 2010 02:02 pm (Chapter 28: Grammy's & Karaoke)
Why is Trace always so freakin hilarous? I love it! If Justin ans Madison can keep up the adult thinking they just might have shot at this, but this is your story Kate & I have a feeling the foolishness is not over.

Author's Response:

haha you know... i often wonder that myself. the only conclusion i come to is that he's just that awesome.

haha... i have no idea what you mean! i always write the sunshine and bunnies stuff! lmao.

thank ya love, i appreciate it!




mzmillion (Signed) on Aug 20, 2010 01:12 pm (Chapter 28: Grammy's & Karaoke)
ok ok, this is where I start to like them again, they still are two pyscho's but.... I still want them together....lol.

Author's Response:

haha aw yay! however, i'm pretty sure they will always be psychos. i can't quite picture them as anything but. lol.

thank ya hun, i appreciate it!




glowbug917 (Signed) on Aug 20, 2010 02:36 am (Chapter 28: Grammy's & Karaoke)

I really just can't decide whether I want Benny or Trace for Christmas. Can I have them both?

I don't even know where to begin about how much dysfunctional adorable was in this chapter, but I love their stupid asses. 

“I feel like I’ve just been propositioned by a troll doll.” 

 Stella is my hero and that is my favorite line of the chapter. 

And more! NOW!



Author's Response:

haha most certainly.

lmao umm... yes. stupid/dysfunctional/adorable... pretty much sums them up.

oh yes, stella is all full of the awesome.

thank ya lady! much appreciated!




meggie (Signed) on Aug 11, 2010 07:41 pm (Chapter 27: Resolution)

did you know i just saw a pig fly by my window? and i saw a worm on the sidewalk with ears. true story.

and don't you DARE break my heart. i will break your legs! ok, maybe i won't but i'm just saying. dont' do it. 



Author's Response:

lmfao oh jesus... you are so special. but this is why i love you.

and umm... i will do my very best. but i make no promises.






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