MochaB (Signed) on May 22, 2010 08:42 pm (
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*shakes head in GREAT annoyance* everybody needs to grow up. Seriously...grow up. All your little temper tantrums and junk are so old now. Get out of the band lucas. Fine. Don't be mad at justin though. Not like he forced you and madison to get together, you to fall for her, then you to break up with her. That's aaaaall on you and madison so he needs to cut the crap and go back home if he doesn't want to be there. It's no secret him and justin don't get along, but still. Take your pissy attitude somewhere else and that goes for madison too. Everybody is so ridiculous, except for trace and jc. Lol and I hope justin sticks to that decision. Make her come and beg him to give her another chance. update soon!
Author's Response: lol oh yes.... jc and trace are most definitely the sensible ones. which is scary in and of itself. haha.
as for madison, she just might be getting it togther soon, so we shall see! haha.
thank ya my dear! i appreciate it!
sarah1988 (Signed) on May 22, 2010 08:17 pm (
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:)
Author's Response: thank ya hun!
jbear (Anonymous) on May 18, 2010 11:35 pm (
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Yup a load of shit all around!! Love it Love it Love it. I can't wait for the next update. Oh and cudos to Mads for finally starting to own up to her shit. Can we plz keep it up? It might actually get you some where Madison. Altho that would be too much like right. LOL
Author's Response: hahaha as always.
and we shall see... she just might finally be getting her shit togther, who knows. lol.
thank ya hun! i appreciate it!
meggie (Signed) on May 18, 2010 06:16 pm (
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guess who's got their laptop back??? MEEEEE!!
so, here's my thought *clears throat*
lucas, me no likey. so bye bye. i know, i know. he's very very pretty but pretty does nto mean i need to like him. there's a lot of pretty going on here so one less pretty is ok.
but i feel like that's not the last of this dumbass idea he's got (seriously, is that the only thought bouncing around the empty walls of his head?). because leaving a band that is bound to do really well do not seem very bright.
THAT'S RIGHT!! cause he's not. yeah, i said that. but you still love me so we're good. *hugs*
Author's Response: woo! yay fixed laptop!!
lmfao i do still love you.... but i swear, he's not evil!
Hollie (Signed) on May 18, 2010 05:53 pm (
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Well. Lucas being an adult lasted all of five seconds. It was fun while it did.
Waiting for things to implode with far more gleeful anticipation than I should. Maybe I need help for that.
Author's Response: lol like you didn't know that was going to happen?
hhahaha you are so very evil. this is why i love you.
Schnessa (Anonymous) on May 18, 2010 01:18 pm (
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Kate! wtf? Seriously What the fuck ever!!! Madison and Justin need to be together like now! Justin moving on... ha! He needs to move on to Madison. I want to smack them both for not being together but then I remember that you write them so I'm going to stick in there because you never disappoint. LOVE YOU!
Author's Response: lmao oh lord yes... i am so very evil. i can't help it!
thank ya love, i appreciate it a ton!
sChErZo (Signed) on May 18, 2010 09:07 am (
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Wth! Seriously Lucas? Post more soon!
Author's Response: haha lucas is all kinds of special.
thank ya hun! much appreciated!
Calandra Stevens (Signed) on May 18, 2010 02:14 am (
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OMG! Oh MY GOD!...I love it!!! Are..you gonna have them sing Leather & lace....thatd be tight. Just given this situation. Um...neways YEAH GREAT CHAPTER..I <3 Your work! I checked back for the past week waitin for an update. You are amazing. About time Madison woke her ass up and started realizing what was going on. I have a feeling Lucas is going to regret his decision realy quick.
Author's Response: haha thank ya love! i appreciate it!
JoJo (Anonymous) on May 18, 2010 02:04 am (
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Nothing can ever be right! But it gives me hope that Justin isn't going to just move on! Fix them soon please!! Great update! Update again soon!
Author's Response: haha oh no, having things work would be way too easy.
thank ya hun! much appreciated!
glowbug917 (Signed) on May 18, 2010 12:26 am (
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As you already know, that Fleetwood Mac analogy is PERFECT. I can't think of a better summation of their entire relationship and what she's been doing all this time, and I just wanna hug her for actually realizing it finafuckingly.
I would like to marry Trace. Make it happen.
And oy, Lucas. If it's not one thing, it's another isn't it?
Okay more please!
Author's Response: haha i honestly have no idea how it took me this long to figure that out.
when don't you want to marry Trace, honestly?
as you wish my dear!
MochaB (Signed) on May 16, 2010 09:57 pm (
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Madison is such a freaking coward. She pisses me off greatly when she lies to herself and everybody around her. Her whole life is a big lie and it's her fault. My gosh you know either way you go somebody is going to be mad so just fess up and stop playing games! Grow up! Ugh. Lucas was a jerk for going through her stuff but I'm glad he did. Maybe him calling her out like this will make her stop lying to herself. Now lying to justin...eh we'll see if she'll stop that. Update soon!
Author's Response: haha all very good points, but, this is madison, so we shall see. lol.
thank ya my dear! much appreciated!
Calandra Stevens (Anonymous) on May 13, 2010 01:07 am (
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Okay...girllllllllll can I just tell you how much I love your writing?!?!? Honestly, its like a drug for me. It is currently 2AM...im sick, i have a fever, and im reading Careful because the storyline has me HOOKED! I cant read one of your stories without being mesmerized and that is a true testament to your writing skills. If I start reading one story...I have to finish it in one sitting. You are a brilliant writer. You make the characters come to life in a way is truly amazing. We all think we are Chels or Trace just sitting along enjoying the ride with you. And only amazing authors have that kind of skill. I love your writing. Please, please dont ever stop. I know this sounds borderline stalkerish..but LMAO i know talent when i see it. You got the gift! Cant wait for the next update!
Author's Response: haha wow, thank you.
that kind of thing is always, always awesome to hear, and i appreciate it more than you know!
thanks for reading and reviewing hun!
glowbug917 (Signed) on May 10, 2010 10:50 pm (
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Whatever, I like Lucas. He's brash and sort of an asshole, but aren't they all here? Yes. And I'm glad he called her out on it cause she needed to hear it and obviously her happy little land of denial wasn't doing either of them the least bit of good.
So, sucks for him but he deserves better and she deserves to actually you know, deal with her shit.
But of course it's Madison and it's you so I don't expect her to get any less stubborn anytime soon.
And the crayon thing you know I thought was fabulous.
that's all, more now damnit!
Author's Response: haha thank you! everybody's shitting on the boy and i'm just like, he's not that bad, i swear! haha.
lmfao now why wouldn't she get un-stubborn? you know she's like, the epitome of sensibility.
lmfao as you wish lady!
meggie (Anonymous) on May 10, 2010 06:04 pm (
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peace out lucas. i'm over you. sorry but i am. thank you so very very much for this. i was a very happy girl.
um...yeah. i have no laptop that is why there is no updates. my life sucks ass right now.
Author's Response: poor, poor lucas. i feel so bad for the dude. he's just so pretty!
how are you surviving, seriously? i don't think i could do it.
Hollie (Signed) on May 10, 2010 03:49 pm (
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Okay, that may be the first time I think Lucas has done something smart. Not that i think he ought to give up his band over it - No Doubt worked it out!!!
I'm impatiently awaiting my bus.
Author's Response: lol now you know you want him out of the picture, just admit it!
you and your bus. i'll never hear the end of this, will i? lmao.
thank ya lady! mucho appreciated!
